考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改55

I am so excited to hear from the information that you are looking for an English teacher.For the good reputation of your school,I was really eager to join you .

As a graduate from YunNan University who is majoring in English,My previous training and strength actually fall in with the present position .For one thing ,all my college subjects were excellent ,which laid a good foundation for my further work.For another,I have passed the eight professional examination,so I meet the qualifications you offer.Most importantly,to be an English is my ideal and I have confidence in this career.

I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my application .I look forward to hearing from you .

Yours sincerely,

LiMing

考研英語作文批改點評如下：

Dear Sir or Madam, I am so excited to hear from the information that you are looking for an English teacher. For the good reputation of your school, I was(am，用現在時) really eager to join you . As a graduate from YunNan(Yunnan) University who is majoring in English, My(my) previous training and strength actually fall in with the present position .For one thing, all my college subjects were excellent , which laid a good foundation for my further work. For another, I have passed the eight professional examination(專八?要寫正確), so I meet the qualifications you offer. Most importantly, to be an English(加teacher) is my ideal and I have confidence in this career. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my application .I look forward to hearing from you . Yours sincerely, LiMing 點評：7分寫的還可以，要注意細節性的問題。第二段表達要簡明扼要，可以多謝幾個方面，例如經驗和性格。但一定要簡潔。