2005年山西省高考英語優(yōu)秀作文選

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　　假定你是李華，正是英國牛津參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃星期天去倫敦旅游。互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確（箭頭所指內(nèi)容）。請給該旅行社發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。

　　注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右，信的格式已為你寫好。

　　2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

　　3．參考詞匯：牛津——Oxford 費(fèi)用——fee

　　Dear Sir/Madame,

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　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

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　　My name is Li Hua. I’m having a language training at Oxford University. I plan to have a trip around London on Sunday. luckily, I noticed that there is an advertisement on a tour around London on the net. However, I still have some questions.

　　First, I’d like to know what’s the price for students. And does it include the entrance fee and the lunch? If we visit the Buckingham, can we have shopping time? What’s more, will you please tell me the time to return because I have some other things to deal with later. I’ll be very thankful for your answer.

　　I am attending a short-term language training program right now in Oxford, planning for a visit to London on Sunday. When I was surfing the internet and happened to see your advertisement, it caught my notice at once. But there’re some details not clearly showed in the ad that I want to make sure.

　　Is the price charged in the ad the same for students? Does it include the cost for lunch, and is there any extra entrance fees needed? During the whole trip, will there be any time left for shopping? And when can we actually get back?

　　I need all the above information to decide whether to join your tour. Please send back your reply.

　　Thanks a lot.

　　I’m a student and I’m receiving English-training in Oxford University. I’ve planned to make a trip to London on Sunday. Several days ago, I happened to find an advertisement for a truly exciting day tour on the Internet. However, there are still some information unclear. So I’m writing to you to make them clear.

　　First, I don’t know whether shopping time during the tour is arranged. As you know, I’d like to do some shopping in London. Secondly, it is about the price. I wonder whether the price provided includes the entrance fees and the expense for lunch. What’s more, what about the price for students? Lastly, I want to know the time to return besides the start-time.

　　That’s all,. Your early reply will be appreciated.

　　I have just learnt about the exciting tour around London advertised on the Internet. But I have some questions about the trip. Above all, I am eager to know whether shopping time is included in the tour, for I have planned to buy some presents for friends. What’s more, I’m wondering whether the price you provide includes entrance fees and the lunch fee and whether I can pay less money with a student card. Still more, please tell me when it is that we will return, for I have to make some preparations for the Monday’s Language classes, in Oxford.

　　Thank you very much answering all my questions. I’m looking forward to your reply and hoping to enjoy an excellent tour on Sunday.

　　I ‘a(chǎn)m attending a short training of language now in Oxford. I want to pay a visit to London this Sunday, so I’m very interested in the advertisement “A Truly Exciting Day Tour” which you advertised on the Internet. But I have some questions. I know we’ll travel Big Ben. London Eye and Buckingham Palace, but I don’t know anything about our shopping time. There is only a “￡ 45” about the price. However, I want to know whether it includes the entrance fees and the lunch fee. I also don’t know if it is a price for students or adults. Besides, I want to know what’s the time to return. Thank you.

　　I have read your advertisement and I’m very interested in your A Day Tour. So I want to know more about the exact details.

　　The advertisement shows the places to visit while it hasn’t told us what the shopping time is. Also, the price is not very clear. Could you please tell me what the price for students is and if the entrance fees and the lunch fees are included? What’s more, I can’t get the clear time to return from the advertisement.

　　I hope that you can give me a reply for more detailed information.

　　Than you very much

　　I’m very interesting in your advertisement which caught my eyes when I was surfing the net. Now I’m writing to ask about some details about it.

　　Places to visit sound attractive, but I’d like to know if we have shopping time and when it is. Since I am not a student of Oxford but attending a short language training here, I need to know whether 45 pounds is the price for students. I still want both included. 6:30 in the morning is a good time for starting the tour, but when will we return?

　　I really want to take your Day Tour Service on Sunday, so I look forward to your early reply.

　　Best wishes.

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　　my name is Li Hua, and I am taking part in a language training in Oxford. I have planned to travel in London on Sunday and I have found an advertisement for my traveling, but there are some problems which I must ask you for a clear explaination.

　　This advertisement says that I can travel in a place called Big Ben, London Eye, Buckingham Palace by bus when is the shopping time? It says that I need to spend $ 45. is it the complete price, containing entrance fees, lunch? And is this the price for students? When is the time for shopping? It says I can start at 6:30 am. But when I can return.

　　I’m looking forward to you reply . Thank you.

　　(注，本卷原來打了16分。后改為20 分)

　　9 （24分）

　　I am a student taking a short-term (course) of language in Oxford now. I am planning to pay a visit to London on Sunday. I have read your ad. on the internet and I am interested in it. But I’ve got to find out some more detail about the trip.

　　I wonder if there is any shopping time arranged during the visit and how long if any. And I want to know weather the price (45$) includes the entrance fees and lunch fees. If not, is there a cut for student? Besides, I have no idea about the exact time to return. I want to find it out.

　　Sorry to trouble you. But I’m looking forward to your reply to my questions sincerely.

　　關(guān)于書面表達(dá):

　　今年的作文題目與往年試題相比立意新穎，符合時(shí)代潮流，具有很大的實(shí)用性。命題者在提供寫作情景地行式上獨(dú)具匠心,做了大膽的創(chuàng)新。題目以一則英語廣告為鋪墊，運(yùn)用簡潔的英語詞匯提示為線索，為廣大考生展示了較深的英語思維空間，同時(shí)巧妙地避免了用英語提示寫作情景加重考生英語閱讀理解負(fù)擔(dān)的難題，這是今年書面表達(dá)題目的一大亮點(diǎn)。題目中涉及的“互聯(lián)網(wǎng)”、“電子郵件”、“牛津”、“倫敦”等詞語，給今年的書現(xiàn)表達(dá)賦予了更加鮮明的時(shí)代感和更加真實(shí)的英語環(huán)境。今年的高考書面表達(dá)更好的測試了學(xué)生的英語思維能力和綜合運(yùn)用知識(shí)的能力，具有很好的區(qū)分度，對今后的中學(xué)英語教學(xué)特別是新課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的實(shí)施，具有良好的導(dǎo)向作用，命題是成功的。

　　考生在試卷中存在的問題，部分考生審題能力差，題目要求通過“詢問” 旅游廣告中是否含有所列的具體項(xiàng)目的費(fèi)用以及返程時(shí)間，從而弄清具體詳情。考生應(yīng)該通過細(xì)致的觀察和認(rèn)真的思考，本著“問什么”、“怎么問”為寫作線索確定出寫作的要點(diǎn)。一些考生缺乏詳細(xì)的審題過程，沒有搞清題目的要求，不能明確寫作的要點(diǎn)，抓不住得分點(diǎn)，丟失了應(yīng)得的分?jǐn)?shù)。

　　對今后教學(xué)的啟示，重視學(xué)生英語思維能力的培養(yǎng)。重視語言知識(shí)的積累。重視英語知識(shí)的運(yùn)用。