2006年高考英語滿分作文及名師評析

2006高考英語滿分作文

　　【全國卷I】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務

　　注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteer

　　Dear Sir / Madam:

　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點評]

　　這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以我為中心，詳細說明了自己對志愿者工作的結合，以此來表達自己的決心。由于用詞恰當，這種表現就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用也不錯。

　　[全國卷II]

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求， 寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關信息。

　　注意：

　　1、字數100左右

　　2、可以適當增減細節，以使行文連貫

　　3、開頭語已為你寫好

　　Dear Bob,

　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and Ill show you around.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文最大的特點是描繪仔細而生動，意思表達十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結構也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動他的外國朋友呢?

　　【安徽卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，剛回到國內。回國后，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

　　感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助

　　一本英語詞典忘記帶回

　　詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴

　　詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上

　　郵資自己付

　　注意：

　　1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

　　2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫

　　2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,Ill show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and Ill be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　Im eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

　　【重慶卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　加拿大高中生David在互聯網Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結識一位中國朋友，以便學習中國的語言，文化culture。

　　假設你是李華，請在看到這則啟事后，用英文給David發一封電子郵件，主要內容包括：

　　你怎樣得知David的愿望

　　你愿意成為他的朋友

　　你打算如何幫助他

　　你盼望他的回復

　　注意：

　　1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好

　　2、字數：100詞左右

　　3、在答題卡上作答

　　Dear David,

　　Im a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe Im your good choice.

　　China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. Ill be looking forward to your reply. Ill show you around our great China if you come to China.

　　Yours sincerely ,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調和吸引注意的目的。

2006高考英語滿分作文

　　【全國卷I】

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷 2.個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供最佳服務

　　注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好;可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者volunteer

　　Dear Sir / Madam:

　　I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　[名師點評]

　　這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點，同時以我為中心，詳細說明了自己對志愿者工作的結合，以此來表達自己的決心。由于用詞恰當，這種表現就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用也不錯。

　　[全國卷II]

　　【試題回放】

　　假定你是李華。應英國朋友Bob的要求， 寫一封短信介紹你校圖書館的基本情況。內容須包括下面兩幅圖中的相關信息。

　　注意：

　　1、字數100左右

　　2、可以適當增減細節，以使行文連貫

　　3、開頭語已為你寫好

　　Dear Bob,

　　Thank you for your last letter asking about our library. Our library locates between the teaching building and our garden. The shape of it seems to be a book to welcome our students. its open from Monday to Friday ,and we can borrow the books from 9:00a.m. to 7:00p.m.

　　There are many books available in our library ,dealing with almost every subject. Not only the books, but also the magazines can be read here. You may borrow up to five books at a time, and keep them for at most ten days.

　　Due to the library , we are offered a place to gain as much knowledge as we can. If you are interested in it, welcome to our school, and Ill show you around.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文最大的特點是描繪仔細而生動，意思表達十分契合。文章以短句為主，兼以長句讀起來輕快。文章的體系結構也是常用的三段式，作者極力推薦自己的圖書館，這么好的圖書館怎么不打動他的外國朋友呢?

　　【安徽卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　假設你是李華，作為選派的交流學生在美國某中學學習了一年，寄住在Mr. Brown家里，剛回到國內。回國后，你發現自己的一本英語詞典遺忘在他家，因此給他寫了一封信，請他幫助寄回詞典。信的主要內容如下：

　　感謝在美國期間他所提供的幫助

　　一本英語詞典忘記帶回

　　詞典是美國老師送的，非常珍貴

　　詞典很可能丟在臥室的書架上

　　郵資自己付

　　注意：

　　1、詞數100左右;信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好。

　　2、可適當增加細節，使行文連貫

　　2、參考詞匯：郵資-postage

　　Dear Mr. Brown,

　　I have been back, and write this letter to show my thanks. As the exchange student, you make me feel warm. Welcome to my country ,Ill show you around in turn.

　　However , there exists a problem that I have left my dictionary at your home. I like it very much , for it was a precious gift from my teacher who comes from the U.S. I guess that my book may stay on your shelf in the bedroom .

　　Do you mind if you send my dictionary to me? I will pay for the postage and Ill be very grateful if you show your warmness again.

　　Im eager to receive your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文作為信件，首先其格式是正確的。既然是應用文，那么文章的意圖就要明確表示出來，本文在表達作者寫作意圖的時候，情真意切，用詞委婉而合理。文章不但使用了定語從句，還采用了疑問句，讓句式變化而不呆板。

　　【重慶卷】

　　【試題回放】

　　加拿大高中生David在互聯網Internet上登出啟事notice，希望結識一位中國朋友，以便學習中國的語言，文化culture。

　　假設你是李華，請在看到這則啟事后，用英文給David發一封電子郵件，主要內容包括：

　　你怎樣得知David的愿望

　　你愿意成為他的朋友

　　你打算如何幫助他

　　你盼望他的回復

　　注意：

　　1、電子郵件的格式已為你寫好

　　2、字數：100詞左右

　　3、在答題卡上作答

　　Dear David,

　　Im a student from China and have noticed your requirement on line. You would like to search for a Chinese friend to help you get to know China and its culture. Maybe Im your good choice.

　　China is a country that has a long history of 5,000 years. Not only our history ,but also our culture is the access to understand us better.

　　There are so much that I want to know, if you are interested. Ill be looking forward to your reply. Ill show you around our great China if you come to China.

　　Yours sincerely ,

　　Li hua

　　[名師點評]

　　本文的語言非常流暢，我們可以看到，本文雖沒有華麗的辭藻，但是語言的組織和層次感很強。同時連詞的使用，如not only, but also ,讓文章的重點突出，同時也起到了強調和吸引注意的目的。