雅思大作文論點分析：肉體和靈魂

　　肉體和靈魂

　　雅思大作文常會出一些有關科技發(fā)明或娛樂方式的利與弊話題。那么不管是寫好處還是壞處，考生應該從該發(fā)明或娛樂對人的肉體和靈魂這兩方面去組織自己的分支觀點。比如電腦對肉體的影響：

　　You dont have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.

　　Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

　　發(fā)明或娛樂對肉體的影響主要表現(xiàn)在削弱勢力和增加肥胖兩個方面，而其對靈魂的影響則涉及一下多個方面。

　　1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。

　　There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.

　　2.媒體中的暴力節(jié)目扭曲孩子們的靈魂。

　　Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

　　3.對媒體過多關注使孩子們變得孤僻而脫離現(xiàn)實生活。

　　For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.

　　肉體和靈魂

　　雅思大作文常會出一些有關科技發(fā)明或娛樂方式的利與弊話題。那么不管是寫好處還是壞處，考生應該從該發(fā)明或娛樂對人的肉體和靈魂這兩方面去組織自己的分支觀點。比如電腦對肉體的影響：

　　You dont have to be a scientist to see that, due to overuse of the computer, a lot of kids get little exercise, which makes them obese.

　　Another common disadvantage is that playing too much on the computer can cause bad eyesight.

　　發(fā)明或娛樂對肉體的影響主要表現(xiàn)在削弱勢力和增加肥胖兩個方面，而其對靈魂的影響則涉及一下多個方面。

　　1.高頻率的信息切換影響孩子們的耐性。

　　There is not deny in that with the advent of technology, our patience grows thin.

　　2.媒體中的暴力節(jié)目扭曲孩子們的靈魂。

　　Media violence affects children by: increasing aggressiveness and anti-social behavior; intensifying their fear of becoming victims; making them less sensitive to violence and to victims of violence; encouraging their appetite for more violence in entertainment and in real life.

　　3.對媒體過多關注使孩子們變得孤僻而脫離現(xiàn)實生活。

　　For lack of face-to-face contact, modern children tend to be more introverted, unsocial, isolated and indifferent than those kids in last century.