2024年高考英語高效書面表達專題卷：11（含解析）
1．書面表達（滿分25分）
假如你叫李華，你和幾位英語愛好者在互聯網上建了一個叫 easyenglish 的網站。請用英語寫一篇100字的短文向你校學生介紹這個網站。要點如下；
1 目的：培養學習興趣，使學英語變得更加輕松。
2 內容：1）豐富的英語材料：英語習題、外國文化、英語小故事等；
2）網絡英語聊天；
3）展示英語習作，交流學習體會。
注意：1 短文必須包括以上要點，可適當添加細節。
2 開頭和結尾已經為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear fellow students,
I'd like to introduce you to a new website -- easyenglish.com.
We1come to surf this website and be a member of it!
2． 假如你是高三學生李華，今年高考英語學科閱讀量加大，而你的閱讀能力較差，因此學習壓力越來越大。請根據以下提示寫信向你的前外教Mr．Johnson求助：
1．英語學習的困難以及增加閱讀量給自己帶來的困擾；
2．希望得到他的指導和幫助。
注意：1．詞數：l20—l50，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Mr．Johnson，
Yours，
請根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
注意：①無須寫標題；
?、诔姼柰?，文體不限；
?、?/p>
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
詞數120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。
4．Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 建設綠色校園很重要；
2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環境，還包括校園師生保護環境的文化素養……；
3. 為了建設綠色校園，我們應該……
5．2024年秋，新生入學伊始，北京、上海等地多所學校開出“蘋果班”教程，學生上課時使用iPad回答問題，放學后家庭作業也需要用iPad來完成。對此不少家長產生疑慮，認為加重了經濟負擔；孩子也可能沉迷游戲、影響學習。但也有不少家長反映，用高科技教學，不僅能提高孩子的興趣，更能減少“拉箱書包”給孩子造成的負擔。請圍繞這個話題寫一篇英語短文，并談談你的看法。
注意：詞數為100詞左右。
參考答案
1．
Dear fellow students,
I’d like to introduce you to a new website — easyenglish.com.
The purpose of setting up such a website is to develop your interest of learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for us students. A wide variety of English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your oral and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by being corrected by others.
Welcome to surf this website and be a member of it!
【解析】
2．
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are things going with you?
I’m writing to ask for your help. As you know, I’m weak in English reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didn’t take effective measures, I wouldn’t be able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】
考點： 提綱類作文
3．
One possible version
There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win. If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.
Mayun will never forget his experience. Twenty years ago, when he tried to find a job, he found the door to success closed before him one after another, just because of his bad-looking appearance. However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.
In conclusion, failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner, so never give up and keep on going until you win.
(125 words)
【解析】
試題分析：成功者不是從不失敗，而是從不放棄
亮點說明：
范文使用了較多的語法知識：常用句型There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win；if條件從句If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.；讓步狀語從句However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.；短語on the way to do sth 等，顯示了較高的運用英語語法知識的能力；范文注意使用However, From then on, From this story等銜接前后句和上下文，做到了語意連貫、銜接緊湊；
范文使用了一些固定短語：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，豐富了作文的內容。
考點：材料類作文
4．
Creating a Green Campus
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in schools, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.
The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and “green campus” will definitely have a good effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation. What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for us students to solve.
To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Last but not the least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.
【解析】
試題分析：，Creating a Green Campus的話題，文字提示只有部分內容，需要我們做適當的發揮，可以從我們自己的做法：如不亂扔垃圾，節約等方面著手。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型文章更有檔次。
5．
Rencently, iPad are being used for teaching in many schools in Beijing and Shanghai. People have different opinions on it.
Many people are for the new measure because they think that iPads are light to carry and convenient to use. The students today are familiar with electronic products, which can help to arouse their interest in learning.
However, others argue that reading on the screen is harmful to students’ eyes in the long run. They may also lose their ability to write by pressing the keys instead of writing with pens.
In my view, students should always write with pens. Meanwhile, electronic products can be used in class to make learning more interesting.
【解析】
試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力
1．書面表達（滿分25分）
假如你叫李華，你和幾位英語愛好者在互聯網上建了一個叫 easyenglish 的網站。請用英語寫一篇100字的短文向你校學生介紹這個網站。要點如下；
1 目的：培養學習興趣，使學英語變得更加輕松。
2 內容：1）豐富的英語材料：英語習題、外國文化、英語小故事等；
2）網絡英語聊天；
3）展示英語習作，交流學習體會。
注意：1 短文必須包括以上要點，可適當添加細節。
2 開頭和結尾已經為你寫好，不計入總詞數。
Dear fellow students,
I'd like to introduce you to a new website -- easyenglish.com.
We1come to surf this website and be a member of it!
2． 假如你是高三學生李華，今年高考英語學科閱讀量加大，而你的閱讀能力較差，因此學習壓力越來越大。請根據以下提示寫信向你的前外教Mr．Johnson求助：
1．英語學習的困難以及增加閱讀量給自己帶來的困擾；
2．希望得到他的指導和幫助。
注意：1．詞數：l20—l50，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；
2．可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。
Dear Mr．Johnson，
Yours，
請根據以下提示，用英語寫一篇短文。
注意：①無須寫標題；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③
④文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
詞數120，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數。
4．Creating a Green Campus. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1. 建設綠色校園很重要；
2. 綠色校園不僅指綠色的環境，還包括校園師生保護環境的文化素養……；
3. 為了建設綠色校園，我們應該……
5．2024年秋，新生入學伊始，北京、上海等地多所學校開出“蘋果班”教程，學生上課時使用iPad回答問題，放學后家庭作業也需要用iPad來完成。對此不少家長產生疑慮，認為加重了經濟負擔；孩子也可能沉迷游戲、影響學習。但也有不少家長反映，用高科技教學，不僅能提高孩子的興趣，更能減少“拉箱書包”給孩子造成的負擔。請圍繞這個話題寫一篇英語短文，并談談你的看法。
注意：詞數為100詞左右。
參考答案
1．
Dear fellow students,
I’d like to introduce you to a new website — easyenglish.com.
The purpose of setting up such a website is to develop your interest of learning English and make learning English easy and enjoyable for us students. A wide variety of English materials are available in this website, such as English exercises, foreign cultures, English short stories, etc. And you can also enjoy chatting in English here with other English learners so that you can improve both your oral and written English. Furthermore, if you’d like to show your own English writings and exchange your English learning experiences with others, this website is your best choice. Meanwhile, your English can get improved by being corrected by others.
Welcome to surf this website and be a member of it!
【解析】
2．
Dear Mr. Johnson,
How are things going with you?
I’m writing to ask for your help. As you know, I’m weak in English reading comprehension. Although I have tried every means to improve it, like expanding my vocabulary and doing a large number of exercises, so far all my efforts have ended up in failure, which really makes me discouraged. To make things worse, this year reading will make up a higher percentage than ever before in the coming College Entrance Examination. Now with the important exam drawing near, I feel more and more stressed and worried. If I didn’t take effective measures, I wouldn’t be able to get through the exam and that would ruin my college dream.
I’ll appreciate it very much if you can give me some advice on how to improve my reading ability effectively and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
試題分析：考查提綱類書面表達：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來. 動筆前，一定要認真分析要點，理解要點要表達的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯系以外，還可以適當記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮點說明】
考點： 提綱類作文
3．
One possible version
There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win. If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.
Mayun will never forget his experience. Twenty years ago, when he tried to find a job, he found the door to success closed before him one after another, just because of his bad-looking appearance. However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.
In conclusion, failure is a necessary part on our way to be a winner, so never give up and keep on going until you win.
(125 words)
【解析】
試題分析：成功者不是從不失敗，而是從不放棄
亮點說明：
范文使用了較多的語法知識：常用句型There is no denying that everyone desires to be a winner in whatever they do, but people tend to ignore the fact that every winner has experienced failure before they win；if條件從句If they give up in face of failure, they will definitely not win in the end.；讓步狀語從句However, he didn’t lose heart and stuck to his dream until he became a successful CEO in the end.；短語on the way to do sth 等，顯示了較高的運用英語語法知識的能力；范文注意使用However, From then on, From this story等銜接前后句和上下文，做到了語意連貫、銜接緊湊；
范文使用了一些固定短語：desire to do，tend to，in face of failure，bad-looking appearance，stuck to his dream，In conclusion等，豐富了作文的內容。
考點：材料類作文
4．
Creating a Green Campus
Recently, with the idea of making and maintaining “a green earth” being the focus of the society, “green campus” has become a more and more popular concept in schools, which, undoubtedly, will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.
The concept of “green campus” does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in people’s mind. Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and “green campus” will definitely have a good effect on students’ various environmental protection activities after their graduation. What’s more, the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for us students to solve.
To make “green campus” come true, firstly, it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus. Secondly, it calls for people’s awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste. Last but not the least, it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campus and society, so as to ensure that “green campus” can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.
【解析】
試題分析：，Creating a Green Campus的話題，文字提示只有部分內容，需要我們做適當的發揮，可以從我們自己的做法：如不亂扔垃圾，節約等方面著手。我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準確表達.寫作時注意準確運用時態，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型文章更有檔次。
5．
Rencently, iPad are being used for teaching in many schools in Beijing and Shanghai. People have different opinions on it.
Many people are for the new measure because they think that iPads are light to carry and convenient to use. The students today are familiar with electronic products, which can help to arouse their interest in learning.
However, others argue that reading on the screen is harmful to students’ eyes in the long run. They may also lose their ability to write by pressing the keys instead of writing with pens.
In my view, students should always write with pens. Meanwhile, electronic products can be used in class to make learning more interesting.
【解析】
試題分析：提綱作文要求考生根據所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力
