浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（16）
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（1）第一節(jié)：短文改錯 （共10小題; 每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great
pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if
happened until the class was over．
Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even
refused the offer of help from my classmates．As the result, the hurt on my foot became
worse．Now I know I am wrong．We can tell others our need for help and accept their
help．Someday we can help him in return．n this way we fit in with each other
happily and peacefully．50個學(xué)生健康問題的調(diào)查表。請根據(jù)表格（table）內(nèi)容，綜述學(xué)
生當(dāng)前存在的健康問題，并就中學(xué)生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。
問題類型 學(xué)習(xí)焦慮 逆反心理 缺乏交往 睡眠不足 缺乏鍛煉 視力不佳
人
數(shù) 35 20 15 40 25 35
比
例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70%
要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100-120
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溫馨提示：寫作時，先把中文要點（信息）寫成英文詞組，然后把詞組擴(kuò)成句子，再把句子串
成篇章。全文分兩段表達(dá)。
改錯（10分）
while 改為when； hurted 改為 hurt；something 改為 nothing；
walk 改為walking；I still 前面去掉but； As the result 改為As a result；
on my foot 改為 in my foot；
I am wrong 改為
I was wrong；
help him in return 改為help them in return；
Only in this way 后面加上can / will / shall
書面表達(dá)（30分）
As is apparently shown in the table above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep．Coming next is the lack of physical exercise．40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers．Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others．
So far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies．Just as a saying goes: “All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; however, too much attention has been paid only to studies．Therefore, I
we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems．Only in this way can we lead a healthy life．
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)專題訓(xùn)練：短文改錯+書面表達(dá)（1）第一節(jié)：短文改錯 （共10小題; 每小題1分，滿分10分）
假如英語課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中有10處錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great
pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if
happened until the class was over．
Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn’t tell anyone and even
refused the offer of help from my classmates．As the result, the hurt on my foot became
worse．Now I know I am wrong．We can tell others our need for help and accept their
help．Someday we can help him in return．n this way we fit in with each other
happily and peacefully．50個學(xué)生健康問題的調(diào)查表。請根據(jù)表格（table）內(nèi)容，綜述學(xué)
生當(dāng)前存在的健康問題，并就中學(xué)生如何保持身心健康提出自己的建議。
問題類型 學(xué)習(xí)焦慮 逆反心理 缺乏交往 睡眠不足 缺乏鍛煉 視力不佳
人
數(shù) 35 20 15 40 25 35
比
例 70% 40% 30% 80% 50% 70%
要求：字?jǐn)?shù)100-120
_______________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
溫馨提示：寫作時，先把中文要點（信息）寫成英文詞組，然后把詞組擴(kuò)成句子，再把句子串
成篇章。全文分兩段表達(dá)。
改錯（10分）
while 改為when； hurted 改為 hurt；something 改為 nothing；
walk 改為walking；I still 前面去掉but； As the result 改為As a result；
on my foot 改為 in my foot；
I am wrong 改為
I was wrong；
help him in return 改為help them in return；
Only in this way 后面加上can / will / shall
書面表達(dá)（30分）
As is apparently shown in the table above, many middle school students have problems both physically and mentally, with 70% of the students having learning anxieties as well as bad eyesight, and a larger percentage lacking sleep．Coming next is the lack of physical exercise．40% of the students surveyed won’t obey their parents or teachers．Still fewer claimed not to have enough communication with others．
So far as I am concerned, we students should balance our physical exercise and studies．Just as a saying goes: “All work but no play makes Jack a dull boy,” without a sound body one cannot achieve anything; however, too much attention has been paid only to studies．Therefore, I
we be given less homework and more time for out-of-classroom activities to solve all the problems．Only in this way can we lead a healthy life．
