河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練 短文改錯+書面表達（80）

　　河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（80）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 () 劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　We’ll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. So we all thought that we had a very good day. We really hoped that we can get more chances to leave the school and learn social experiences.

　　書面表達

　　假定你是李華，昨天學校為你們舉辦了十八歲成人儀式。請根據下列要點給你在美國的筆友發一封電子郵件，描述儀式過程并簡述你的感受。

　　1. 成人宣誓；

　　2. 感謝家長和老師的教育和培養；

　　3. 老師贈送賀卡；

　　4. 學生表演節目。

　　注意：

　　1. 郵件必須包括以上要點，可以適當發揮；

　　2. 詞數：100左右。

　　參考詞匯：宣誓make an oath

　　Dear Tom,

　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　短文改錯

　　We’ll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked ∧a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. So we all thought that we had a very good day. We really hoped that we can get more chances to leave the school and learn social experiences.

　　書面表達

　　email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have educated us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　when

　　chemical

　　experience

　　everywhere

　　like

　　But

　　working

　　tired

　　could

　　large

　　河北省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：

　　短文改錯+書面表達（80）

　　短文改錯

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線 () 劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　We’ll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. So we all thought that we had a very good day. We really hoped that we can get more chances to leave the school and learn social experiences.

　　書面表達

　　假定你是李華，昨天學校為你們舉辦了十八歲成人儀式。請根據下列要點給你在美國的筆友發一封電子郵件，描述儀式過程并簡述你的感受。

　　1. 成人宣誓；

　　2. 感謝家長和老師的教育和培養；

　　3. 老師贈送賀卡；

　　4. 學生表演節目。

　　注意：

　　1. 郵件必須包括以上要點，可以適當發揮；

　　2. 詞數：100左右。

　　參考詞匯：宣誓make an oath

　　Dear Tom,

　　_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　短文改錯

　　We’ll never forget the day which my classmates and I paid a visit to a chemistry factory last week. It was a larger one with nearly 2,000 workers. It looked ∧a garden and we could see colorful flowers, grass and trees anywhere. We also visited some workshops and saw workers worked very hard. We talked with them and learned a lot. We understood them further. On the way home we felt tiring. So we all thought that we had a very good day. We really hoped that we can get more chances to leave the school and learn social experiences.

　　書面表達

　　email. Now I’d like to tell you something that took place in my school yesterday. In the afternoon we held a growing-up ceremony for our coming 18-year-old birthday. At first we made an oath that as grown-ups we should have a sense of duty for our society from now on. Then we showed our thanks to our parents who had gone through hardships to bring us up and teachers who have educated us patiently. And our teachers also gave us cards expressing their good wishes to us. Finally we put on wonderful performances, singing and dancing. We learned a lot from the activity. I think it’s very important for us. I will remember the day in my life.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　when

　　chemical

　　experience

　　everywhere

　　like

　　But

　　working

　　tired

　　could

　　large