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　　必修 5

　　寫(xiě)作進(jìn)行時(shí)——文

　　[技巧點(diǎn)撥]

　　Ⅰ.寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)

　　記敘文是以敘述為基本方法來(lái)記人、敘事，構(gòu)思記敘文時(shí)，應(yīng)該考慮到以下幾個(gè)方面：

　　(1)場(chǎng)景

　　記敘文往往一開(kāi)始就提供事情發(fā)生的背景，交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和人物。

　　(2)結(jié)構(gòu)

　　記敘文的敘述方式有順敘、倒敘和插敘。

　　(3)人稱

　　記敘文可用第一人稱敘述，也可用第三人稱敘述。

　　(4)時(shí)態(tài)

　　記敘文通常是記敘過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故常用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

　　Ⅱ.常用模板/句式

　　A．結(jié)構(gòu)模板

　　________時(shí)間________is memorable because________人物________had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we________活動(dòng)一________. Upon arrival, we began to________活動(dòng)二________. Some were________活動(dòng)三________. Others were________活動(dòng)四________. After getting the work done, we________活動(dòng)五________.

　　Seeing________活動(dòng)六________， we________感受________. We feel it's our duty to________動(dòng)作________．

　　B．常用句式

　　1. I was about to do....when...

　　2. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy.

　　3. It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning.

　　4. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.

　　5. It's reported that Sanlu milk powder has caused kidney stones in babies.

　　[習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　你校上周舉辦了“英語(yǔ)周”活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹“英語(yǔ)周”活動(dòng)期間的情況并談?wù)勀愕母惺堋?/p>

　　活動(dòng)時(shí)間：3月15日～3月21日

　　活動(dòng)對(duì)象：全體同學(xué)、英語(yǔ)教師以及兩位英語(yǔ)外教

　　活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：……

　　活動(dòng)效果：……

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)120～150；

　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，語(yǔ)句通順。

　　Last week our school began an “English week”．【舉行活動(dòng)要用hold，所以此處應(yīng)該改為held。】It started on Mar. 15 and ended on Mar. 21. All the students and English teachers, included two foreign teachers from America took_part in it. 【“包括……在內(nèi)”，應(yīng)該使用介詞including＋賓語(yǔ)；“參加……”最好使用高級(jí)詞語(yǔ)“participate”，所以改為participated?！?/p>

　　During that week, we sang quite a few English songs and joined in English speaking contests developing our interest in English. 【此處應(yīng)該為動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)。所以改為to develop?！?In addition, we put on short English plays and watched English films, which we learned a lot. 【表示“從……中學(xué)到”，此處應(yīng)該使用from which?！緽esides, we had a wonderful time guessing English riddles.

　　As_everyone_knows_that practice makes perfect. 【as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，不是主語(yǔ)從句的形式主語(yǔ)，可改為It is known that或As everyone knows，】As a result of this activity, we broadened our horizon, became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved. I think it's a effective way to learn English, so I enjoyed it very much.【此處應(yīng)該使用an，后面是元音音素開(kāi)頭的單詞?！縄n the future, I will spare no efforts to participate in such kind of activities if possible.

　　[跟蹤演練]

　　1　(2011·福建)

　　為紀(jì)念汶川大地震三周年，某英文報(bào)發(fā)起關(guān)于災(zāi)區(qū)新貌的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下圖片提示，以“Great Changes”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文應(yīng)征。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

　　1．某中學(xué)災(zāi)后三年來(lái)的變化，如教學(xué)與活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所，以及師生精神面貌等；

　　2．發(fā)生變化的原因；

　　3．你的感想。

　　注意：

　　1．短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

　　2．可根據(jù)圖片提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

　　3．詞數(shù)：120左右

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

　　________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

　　On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school，leaving badly-damaged buildings.It is now，however，taking on a new look.Tall buildings have been put up，including classrooms and laboratory buildings，and a library.There is also a newly-built standard playground.In the new environment，teachers and students are living happily and working hard.It is really amazing that the once-ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school，full of life.

　　Obviously ，without the help of the whole society，there would be no new school today.It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes.Many hands makes light work.We can work wonders if we unite as a family，caring for each other and helping those in need.Union is strength.

　　2　(2011·湖北)

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，就與人合作這一話題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

　　Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group，and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.

　　注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；

　?、诔?shī)歌外，文體不限；

　?、蹆?nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個(gè)事例；

　　④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

　　⑤詞數(shù)為100左右。

　　________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　As one member of society, we always consider teamwork is essential for our success. As students, we can also learn much about teamwork from working in groups. Take one example, we once held a debate competition. And each side contained five students. We five were first debators. Before the competition, we five gathered together to make a good plan and efficient strategy. And then, each of us set out to collect information and materials for the speaking competition.

　　Afterwards, we gathered again and checked, discussed and corrected the information. Through these steps, we did win finally. So, I really realized the importance of working in groups.

　　必修 5

　　寫(xiě)作進(jìn)行時(shí)——文

　　[技巧點(diǎn)撥]

　?、?寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)

　　記敘文是以敘述為基本方法來(lái)記人、敘事，構(gòu)思記敘文時(shí)，應(yīng)該考慮到以下幾個(gè)方面：

　　(1)場(chǎng)景

　　記敘文往往一開(kāi)始就提供事情發(fā)生的背景，交代時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和人物。

　　(2)結(jié)構(gòu)

　　記敘文的敘述方式有順敘、倒敘和插敘。

　　(3)人稱

　　記敘文可用第一人稱敘述，也可用第三人稱敘述。

　　(4)時(shí)態(tài)

　　記敘文通常是記敘過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，故常用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。

　?、?常用模板/句式

　　A．結(jié)構(gòu)模板

　　Seeing________活動(dòng)六________， we________感受________. We feel it's our duty to________動(dòng)作________．

　　B．常用句式

　　1. I was about to do....when...

　　2. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy.

　　3. It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning.

　　4. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.

　　5. It's reported that Sanlu milk powder has caused kidney stones in babies.

　　[習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)]

　　活動(dòng)時(shí)間：3月15日～3月21日

　　活動(dòng)對(duì)象：全體同學(xué)、英語(yǔ)教師以及兩位英語(yǔ)外教

　　活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：……

　　活動(dòng)效果：……

　　注意：1.詞數(shù)120～150；

　　2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫，語(yǔ)句通順。

　　Last week our school began an “English week”．【舉行活動(dòng)要用hold，所以此處應(yīng)該改為held?！縄t started on Mar. 15 and ended on Mar. 21. All the students and English teachers, included two foreign teachers from America took_part in it. 【“包括……在內(nèi)”，應(yīng)該使用介詞including＋賓語(yǔ)；“參加……”最好使用高級(jí)詞語(yǔ)“participate”，所以改為participated。】

　　[跟蹤演練]

　　1　(2011·福建)

　　1．某中學(xué)災(zāi)后三年來(lái)的變化，如教學(xué)與活動(dòng)場(chǎng)所，以及師生精神面貌等；

　　2．發(fā)生變化的原因；

　　3．你的感想。

　　注意：

　　1．短文標(biāo)題與開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

　　2．可根據(jù)圖片提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

　　3．詞數(shù)：120左右

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

　　________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

　　2　(2011·湖北)

　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，結(jié)合你校園生活中的一個(gè)事例，就與人合作這一話題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

　　注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；

　?、诔?shī)歌外，文體不限；

　?、蹆?nèi)容必須結(jié)合校園生活中的一個(gè)事例；

　?、芪闹胁坏猛嘎秱€(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

　?、菰~數(shù)為100左右。

　　________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________

　　參考范文：

　　Afterwards, we gathered again and checked, discussed and corrected the information. Through these steps, we did win finally. So, I really realized the importance of working in groups.