2024屆高考英語二輪復習熱點限時訓練：短文改錯系列5

　　短文改錯系列5

　　一、短文改錯

　　1．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　In order to realize his dream, Bill Gates, richest man in the world, gave in studying in

　　Harvard University, that is the most famous in the world. He set up a company and researching

　　The computer software. An old saying goes, Interest is the best teacher. I quite agree with this

　　idea. I began to be crazy about English when I was a little girl. I got particular interested in

　　foreign cultures or customs. To meet us curiosity, I read English stories every day. It seemed to be

　　the best “meal” of a day. As for a result, I always did very well in English exam. Interest is the

　　key to succeed.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】richest前面加the

　　【小題2】in改成up

　　【小題3】that改成which

　　【小題4】researching改成researched

　　【小題5】對的

　　【小題6】particular改成particularly

　　【小題7】or改成and

　　【小題8】us改成my

　　【小題9】for(去掉)

　　【小題10】succeed改成succeed

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】最高級前面有the;

　　【小題2】give up放棄

　　【小題3】非限制性定語從句不能用that

　　【小題4】與set并列都是過去時

　　【小題5】對的

　　【小題6】用副詞修飾形容詞

　　【小題7】上下文是并列關系

　　【小題8】后面的主語是I

　　【小題9】As a result是固定詞組

　　【小題10】這里的to是介詞，后面接名詞

　　2．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　’clock, he had already done her work for almost one hour. First, we should make a plan of study and carry them out until we succeed. Then, we must master any basic knowledge of English such as 26 letters and 48 sounds. Vocabulary is bricks and grammar is bones. We can make different kinds of phrases and sentences with them according the rules. Finally, practice make perfect. When I leave, it was 12 o’clock. Through this lesson, I learned something which couldn’t be learned from textbooks.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】去掉for，

　　【小題2】why-----how

　　【小題3】arrived 后加at

　　【小題4】her-----his

　　【小題5】them---it

　　【小題6】any----some

　　【小題7】according 后加to

　　【小題8】make—makes

　　【小題9】leave---left

　　【小題10】which-----that

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】ask sb to do sth要求某人做某事

　　【小題2】advice on how to sth. 如何做某事

　　【小題3】arrive不及物動詞，后接賓語時要加介詞in或at。

　　【小題4】her改為his，與前面的he 相對應。

　　【小題5】them改為it， 與前面的a plan相對應。

　　【小題6】any 改為some，表示“一些。”

　　【小題7】according to 根據；依照。

　　【小題8】practice 是單數，后接動詞的單三形式。

　　【小題9】leave改為left， 與后面的was呼應。

　　【小題10】先行詞是something，定語從句的引導詞要用that。

　　3．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第十一處起）不計分。

　　One day, did not feeling well, Mr, Smith went to the hospital to have him examined．When he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked．“Am I dying?” He immediately feels very sick． Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will．“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr． Smith thought and ’t have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful．Mr.Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily .

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】刪除did

　　【小題2】him 改成himself

　　【小題3】feels 改成felt

　　【小題4】shocked前面加was

　　【小題5】taking 改成took

　　【小題6】a 改成The

　　【小題7】other 改成another

　　【小題8】but 改成and

　　【小題9】in改成 at

　　【小題10】去掉most

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】分詞的否定式前面賓語組動詞

　　【小題2】反身代詞表示強調

　　【小題3】全文都是過去時

　　【小題4】形容詞前面應該有系動詞

　　【小題5】連續3個動詞并列都用過去式

　　【小題6】通知那個醫生

　　【小題7】這里是指再做一個檢查

　　【小題8】上下文是順接關系而不是轉折關系

　　【小題9】not…at all一點也不

　　【小題10】favourite本身就是最高級

　　4．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）。并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Nowadays, as the development of the Internet, there is a kind of language calling Web Language．Some people even speak Chinese mixed with English letters．Recently our class have had a discussion about if we should welcome the Web Language．

　　40％ of the students think it ridiculous．In their opinions, it does no good to help people communicate, nor is it useful for learning English, Besides, it’ll make Chinese more standard and pure, finally ruining our mother tongue．

　　However, 60% of our class is fond of it．They think it is simple, convenient and helpful in expressing them．What’s more, it may make the language more interesting．

　　Personally, it’s not good habit to use the Web Language．It may be popular, but you may also make yourself be misunderstood．

　　【小題1】as改成 with

　　【小題2】calling改成

　　called

　　【小題3】if改成 whether

　　【小題4】opinions改成

　　opinion

　　【小題5】help改成 helping

　　【小題6】more改成 less

　　【小題7】is改成 are

　　【小題8】them改成 themselves

　　【小題9】not后面加a

　　【小題10】去掉be

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】as 是連詞，連接的是句子，with是介詞，“隨著…的發展”with the development of …;

　　【小題2】called過去分詞作后置定語，表被動。

　　【小題3】介詞后面表是否不能用if,而是whether.

　　【小題4】in one’s opinion是個固定短語，不需用復數。

　　【小題5】此處的to是介詞，不是不定式，故用helping.

　　【小題6】網絡語言使得漢語更不規范，而不是更規范。

　　【小題7】class是個集體名詞，當指“個體”的時候，表示“班級中的同學”。所以是復數。

　　【小題8】表達他們自己的思想，故用反身代詞。

　　【小題9】It is a good habit to do sth.是個固定句型。

　　【小題10】make oneself misunderstood 使得自己被誤解。過去分詞做賓補。

　　5．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在此處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一個橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。

　　We receive your application last week. We regret to inform you that our company has hired a boy calling Tonny the job of the manager assistant. Having studied your certificate careful，we decided that we should need someone with more office experiences for this particular position. You have impressed them with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, but we do hope that you will apply for a position in our company sometime in the future. We would like to thank you on your being interested in our company. Please to contact us if there is any further questions.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】第一句： receive -- received

　　第二句： calling – called；

　　在the job前加for

　　第三句： careful -- carefully

　　；

　　experiences -- experience ；

　　第四句： them-- us ；

　　but -- so/and

　　;

　　【小題8】第五句： on--for

　　第六句： 去掉to ；

　　is -- are

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】第一句話：called過去分詞作后置定語，因為boy與call之間是被動關系。hire sb. for the job雇傭某人做這個工作。

　　【小題2】第二句話：experience作為“經驗”解時，是不可數名詞。

　　【小題3】第三句話：本文是以第一人稱寫的，故用impress us with sth. 這里是遞進關系，或者可以是因果關系，所以不能用but。

　　【小題4】第四句話： thank sb. for sth. 因為某事兒感激某人。

　　【小題5】第五句話：please后面應是動詞原形，故去掉to。 因為there be句式的主語是復數，故用are。

　　6．下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　One day I hurried home for lunch after school because of there would be an exam in the afternoon. I expected get back early to prepare for the exam. But when I got home, the lunches was not ready yet. I am unhappy. When the dishes were served, I found none what I liked. I ran out of the house angry, and then walking in the street for a while. When I got into the room, I saw the lunch box on my desk. One classmate told me my mother had brought them for me. Before opening the box, I found my favorite food inside. My eyes quickly filled with tears.

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】去掉because 后的of

　　get前面加to

　　lunches┈lunch

　　【小題4】am ┈was

　　【小題5】what ┈that

　　【小題6】angry┈angrily

　　【小題7】walking ┈walked

　　【小題8】第二個the ┈a

　　them┈it

　　【小題10】Before┈After

　　【解析】

　　引導原因狀語從句，用because,而because of 后加名詞。

　　expect to do sth. 期盼做某事

　　因為后面是was，故應改為lunch。

　　本短文用的是過去式，故改為was.

　　none作為先行詞，關系代詞為that。

　　angry為形容詞，angrily 為副詞，修飾動詞。

　　walked與前面的ran并列。

　　前面沒有提起房間，故改為a。

　　it指代the lunch box，是單數。

　　打開盒子后，才會發現…。

　　Dear Editor,

　　Recently, my classmates have had a heated discussion about that

　　we should have optional courses in high schools. Some students were

　　in favor of optional courses. They say interest is best teacher

　　and our spare time will be colorful and meaningful. Students

　　can not only enlarge their knowledges but also improve their abilities.

　　However, others are against the idea, said that optional courses

　　will take up too much time as well as energy. In addition to, some optional

　　courses have something to do with the College Entrance Examination. They

　　are afraid they’ll fall behind their classmates if they will take the

　　optional courses. I’d like to take one or two of the optional courses, which, I think, will certain benefit me a lot.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　【小題1】that→whether

　　【小題2】were→are

　　【小題3】is后加the

　　【小題4】our→their

　　【小題5】knowledges→knowledge

　　【小題6】said→saying

　　【小題7】去掉to

　　【小題8】something→nothing

　　【小題9】去掉if后的will

　　【小題10】certain→certainly

　　【解析】

　　【小題1】后面的賓語從句討論的是不確定的事實，用whether.

　　【小題2】本文的基本時態是現在時。

　　【小題3】形容詞最高級前面加定冠詞the.

　　【小題4】上下文可知是指他們的時間是多姿多彩的。

　　【小題5】知識是不可數名詞。

　　【小題6】分詞在句中作狀語。Other與say構成主動關系，使用現在分詞。

　　【小題7】In addition單獨使用表示：另外。

　　【小題8】根據上下文可知這些選修課與高考關系不大。

　　【小題9】條件句中用一般現在時代替將來時。

　　【小題10】副詞修飾動詞。

　　8．I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.