2024屆高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選短文改錯39

　　高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯

　　1.文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( / )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends Susan. Before the tea was serving, we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on the cup, and the tea was spattered(濺灑) on her trousers. In my surprise, instead complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and I can't even clean it.”His words were very inspired. We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.

　　2.

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在下面加上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

　　3.文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　There were many people n the bus and no vacant seats. When a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you,” she said, “but please don’t do that. I am perfect able to stand.” “But, madam, let me…” began the man. “I ask you to keep your seat,” interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. So the man tried to rise, and said: “Madam, will you kindly permit me to…?” “No, no,” said the woman and again force him back. At last the man managed to get up, say: “ Madam, you carried me three block beyond my house. I wanted get off.”

　　4.

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Dear Ms Tailor,Football is my favourite sport. When it is comes to football, I always have much

　　to saying. Last week, I quarreled with my mother about if I could play football with my

　　classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my

　　spare time to study all the subjects well. In my opinion, only when I try my best to

　　study I be able to be admitted to a university. But I really can’t accept her view. As far

　　as I’m concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me

　　full of energy every day. Could you give me some advices on how to persuade my

　　mother to allow me to play football at weekends?

　　Yours

　　Jim

　　5.短文改錯

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上勾一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞；并也用斜線劃摔。

　　此行缺一個詞j在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的訶。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　Mr Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens．

　　76．

　　He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very

　　77．

　　hot part of the country.

　　He found his hen laid hardly any eggs

　　78．

　　in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into

　　79．

　　his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year．

　　80．

　　The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day．

　　81．

　　He thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air

　　82．

　　conditioner when he saw．Mr Hill's house, ‘‘Your wife would be more happier

　　83．

　　and more comfortable then ,” he said to Mr-Hill. But Mr Hill was not interesting. 84．

　　“My wife didn't lay eggs,” Mr Hill said．

　　6.文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them

　　safe journey.

　　試卷答案

　　1.

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends (friend) Susan. Before the tea was serving (served), we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises (raised)

　　her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on()

　　the cup, and the tea was spattered(濺灑) on her trousers. In To)

　　my surprise, instead (∧of)

　　complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and (or)

　　I can't even clean it.” His

　　(Her)

　　words were very inspired (inspiring). We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we (us ) always happy.

　　2.

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I

　　brothers

　　dead

　　was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.

　　me

　　using

　　We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in / local restaurant for breakfast,

　　a

　　and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right in

　　traveled(travelled)

　　before

　　spot the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never

　　or

　　hunted an animal successfully,

　　but

　　I learned to be brave and patiently through the

　　patient

　　experience.

　　3.

　　第一處：off→on【解題思路】【解題思路】→prefectly?！窘忸}思路】→the?！窘忸}思路】→his?！窘忸}思路】→But。【解題思路】→forced?！窘忸}思路】→saying?！窘忸}思路】→blocks。【解題思路】【解題思路】

　　4.1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4.

　　strong---strongly

　　5. study---studying

　　6. my---her

　　7. I前加will

　　8. build---builds

　　9. and---but

　　10.

　　advices---advice

　　5.76. where → who

　　77.so → but

　　78.hen → hens

　　79. √

　　80.在year前加the

　　81.her →him

　　82.去掉for

　　83.more → much 或去掉more

　　84. interesting →interested

　　85. didn't →doesn’t

　　6.1．在their 后加with， 因為help sb. with sth.為固定用法。

　　2．search改為過去式，由時間狀語“Last weekend”可知，這是描述過去的事情，所以用一般過去時。

　　3．information為不可數名詞，所以不能用復數形式。

　　4．We改為 I，“我”去買票，應用代詞I。

　　5．had改為was,這里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。

　　6．在the suitcase前加into.

　　7．引導一個定語從句，代替指物的先行詞things，所以用that/which。

　　8．show改為see, see sb. off意為“為某人送行”，符合語境。

　　9．Happily改為happy , feel為系動詞，后面應該用形容詞作表語。

　　10．在safe journey前加a,具體的一次旅行。

　　高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯

　　1.文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線( / )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends Susan. Before the tea was serving, we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on the cup, and the tea was spattered(濺灑) on her trousers. In my surprise, instead complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and I can't even clean it.”His words were very inspired. We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.

　　2.

　　下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在下面加上該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。

　　注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.

　　3.文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ )劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

　　There were many people n the bus and no vacant seats. When a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you,” she said, “but please don’t do that. I am perfect able to stand.” “But, madam, let me…” began the man. “I ask you to keep your seat,” interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. So the man tried to rise, and said: “Madam, will you kindly permit me to…?” “No, no,” said the woman and again force him back. At last the man managed to get up, say: “ Madam, you carried me three block beyond my house. I wanted get off.”

　　4.

　　假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

　　2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

　　Dear Ms Tailor,Football is my favourite sport. When it is comes to football, I always have much

　　to saying. Last week, I quarreled with my mother about if I could play football with my

　　classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my

　　spare time to study all the subjects well. In my opinion, only when I try my best to

　　study I be able to be admitted to a university. But I really can’t accept her view. As far

　　as I’m concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me

　　full of energy every day. Could you give me some advices on how to persuade my

　　mother to allow me to play football at weekends?

　　Yours

　　Jim

　　5.短文改錯

　　此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上勾一個（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：

　　此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞；并也用斜線劃摔。

　　此行缺一個詞j在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。

　　此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的訶。

　　注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。

　　Mr Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens．

　　76．

　　He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very

　　77．

　　hot part of the country.

　　He found his hen laid hardly any eggs

　　78．

　　in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into

　　79．

　　his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year．

　　80．

　　The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day．

　　81．

　　He thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air

　　82．

　　conditioner when he saw．Mr Hill's house, ‘‘Your wife would be more happier

　　83．

　　and more comfortable then ,” he said to Mr-Hill. But Mr Hill was not interesting. 84．

　　“My wife didn't lay eggs,” Mr Hill said．

　　6.文中共有10處語言錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

　　增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

　　刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。

　　修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

　　注意： 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

　　2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。

　　Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them

　　safe journey.

　　試卷答案

　　1.

　　Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends (friend) Susan. Before the tea was serving (served), we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises (raised)

　　her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on()

　　the cup, and the tea was spattered(濺灑) on her trousers. In To)

　　my surprise, instead (∧of)

　　complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and (or)

　　I can't even clean it.” His

　　(Her)

　　words were very inspired (inspiring). We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we (us ) always happy.

　　2.

　　Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I

　　brothers

　　dead

　　was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn.

　　me

　　using

　　We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in / local restaurant for breakfast,

　　a

　　and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right in

　　traveled(travelled)

　　before

　　spot the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never

　　or

　　hunted an animal successfully,

　　but

　　I learned to be brave and patiently through the

　　patient

　　experience.

　　3.

　　第一處：off→on【解題思路】【解題思路】→prefectly?！窘忸}思路】→the?！窘忸}思路】→his。【解題思路】→But?！窘忸}思路】→forced。【解題思路】→saying?！窘忸}思路】→blocks。【解題思路】【解題思路】

　　4.1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4.

　　strong---strongly

　　5. study---studying

　　6. my---her

　　7. I前加will

　　8. build---builds

　　9. and---but

　　10.

　　advices---advice

　　5.76. where → who

　　77.so → but

　　78.hen → hens

　　79. √

　　80.在year前加the

　　81.her →him

　　82.去掉for

　　83.more → much 或去掉more

　　84. interesting →interested

　　85. didn't →doesn’t

　　6.1．在their 后加with， 因為help sb. with sth.為固定用法。

　　2．search改為過去式，由時間狀語“Last weekend”可知，這是描述過去的事情，所以用一般過去時。

　　3．information為不可數名詞，所以不能用復數形式。

　　4．We改為 I，“我”去買票，應用代詞I。

　　5．had改為was,這里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。

　　6．在the suitcase前加into.

　　7．引導一個定語從句，代替指物的先行詞things，所以用that/which。

　　8．show改為see, see sb. off意為“為某人送行”，符合語境。

　　9．Happily改為happy , feel為系動詞，后面應該用形容詞作表語。

　　10．在safe journey前加a,具體的一次旅行。