新版GRE寫作新題庫：Argument58
編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據真題來進行練習寫作了。
The vice president for human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company s president.
In an effort to improve our employees productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet inappropriately from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. Installing software on company computers to detect employees Internet use is the best way to prevent employees from wasting time on the job. It will foster a better work ethic at Climpson and improve our overall profits.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
為提高我們的員工的生產效率，我們應該在員工的電腦上加裝電子監控來監視員工對互聯網的使用。如果我們要減少用于私人以及娛樂活動，比如購物或玩游戲的工作時間，那么在電腦上不正當使用互聯網的員工必須要被確認并且受到懲罰。通過在公司電腦上安裝檢測員工使用互聯網的軟件，我們可以防止員工浪費時間，并培養C公司更好的工作氛圍，以及提高我們的整體利潤。
寫一篇回應，討論還需要何種具體的證據才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
此上就是為大家提供的新版GRE寫作新題庫Argument部分的內容，希望大家能夠在練習中提高自己的寫作水平。
編輯點評： GRE寫作需要大家積累一定的寫作素材、鍛煉自己的邏輯思維、多多積累一些有用的句子和詞匯，有了這些基礎以后，就需要大家根據真題來進行練習寫作了。
The vice president for human resources at Climpson Industries sent the following recommendation to the company s president.
In an effort to improve our employees productivity, we should implement electronic monitoring of employees Internet use from their workstations. Employees who use the Internet inappropriately from their workstations need to be identified and punished if we are to reduce the number of work hours spent on personal or recreational activities, such as shopping or playing games. Installing software on company computers to detect employees Internet use is the best way to prevent employees from wasting time on the job. It will foster a better work ethic at Climpson and improve our overall profits.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
中文翻譯：
為提高我們的員工的生產效率，我們應該在員工的電腦上加裝電子監控來監視員工對互聯網的使用。如果我們要減少用于私人以及娛樂活動，比如購物或玩游戲的工作時間，那么在電腦上不正當使用互聯網的員工必須要被確認并且受到懲罰。通過在公司電腦上安裝檢測員工使用互聯網的軟件，我們可以防止員工浪費時間，并培養C公司更好的工作氛圍，以及提高我們的整體利潤。
寫一篇回應，討論還需要何種具體的證據才能更好的評估上面的論證，并解釋這個證據是如何強化/削弱這篇文章的論證的。
此上就是為大家提供的新版GRE寫作新題庫Argument部分的內容，希望大家能夠在練習中提高自己的寫作水平。
