GRE Issue主題范文及評析（一）
編輯點評： 以前，ISSUE部分會有兩個題目，你可以任選一個進行寫作。但在新GRE中，你別無選擇，因為新考試中只有一個題目。綜合廣大GRE考生的需求，小編為大家整理出以下GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能給廣大GRE考生在寫作上帶來幫助!
綜合廣大GRE考生的需求，小編為大家整理出以下GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能給廣大GRE考生在寫作上帶來幫助!
In todays society we spend to much time addressing issues that will not prepare us for the trials and tributlations facing our young people.
For example, there is a war on drugs that is effecting every family in america, without any consideration for race, gender, or enthic background. This country needs to develop a systerm on how to deal with this ongoing problem effecting americans. There are certain issues that constantly take center stage in america; for example race relations has return to the horrible days of the fifiths. There is know doubt that we are facing troubling times, and we are not paying attention to what is going on. We need to get back to our value systerm, family, work, church, and responsibility and emphasis to our children the importancy of education and respect of others. If we provide a healthy model we can help curve the violence and mayheam the that is destroying our schools, cities and states.
Finally, if we are proud of being americans, less take this problem and do something about it by diversity training and multi- cultural activities.
Sincerely
評價
This essay provides little evidence of a coherent response to the topic and contains severe and persistent errors in language and sentence structure.
The essay seems to define environment broadly, though vaguely, as the cultural environment. While the idea that environmental problems are fundamentally cultural in origin could be the basis for a promising essay, this response does not coherently develop that idea. Moreover, the writer does not address the issue s claims about international cooperation. Instead the essay jumps from problem to problem without adequately describing those problems. For example, the war on drugs is referred to as a problem, but it is not clear whether it is law enforcement s war on drugs or people s use of drugs that is the issue.
The essay contains numerous errors that interfere with comprehension. These include errors in word usage and grammar . Finally, the essay ends with a closing that is more appropriate for a letter than an essay.
以上是小編為大家整理的GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能夠幫助大家更好地復(fù)習GRE寫作，祝大家GRE考試順利，留學之旅順利!
編輯點評： 以前，ISSUE部分會有兩個題目，你可以任選一個進行寫作。但在新GRE中，你別無選擇，因為新考試中只有一個題目。綜合廣大GRE考生的需求，小編為大家整理出以下GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能給廣大GRE考生在寫作上帶來幫助!
綜合廣大GRE考生的需求，小編為大家整理出以下GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能給廣大GRE考生在寫作上帶來幫助!
In todays society we spend to much time addressing issues that will not prepare us for the trials and tributlations facing our young people.
For example, there is a war on drugs that is effecting every family in america, without any consideration for race, gender, or enthic background. This country needs to develop a systerm on how to deal with this ongoing problem effecting americans. There are certain issues that constantly take center stage in america; for example race relations has return to the horrible days of the fifiths. There is know doubt that we are facing troubling times, and we are not paying attention to what is going on. We need to get back to our value systerm, family, work, church, and responsibility and emphasis to our children the importancy of education and respect of others. If we provide a healthy model we can help curve the violence and mayheam the that is destroying our schools, cities and states.
Finally, if we are proud of being americans, less take this problem and do something about it by diversity training and multi- cultural activities.
Sincerely
評價
This essay provides little evidence of a coherent response to the topic and contains severe and persistent errors in language and sentence structure.
The essay seems to define environment broadly, though vaguely, as the cultural environment. While the idea that environmental problems are fundamentally cultural in origin could be the basis for a promising essay, this response does not coherently develop that idea. Moreover, the writer does not address the issue s claims about international cooperation. Instead the essay jumps from problem to problem without adequately describing those problems. For example, the war on drugs is referred to as a problem, but it is not clear whether it is law enforcement s war on drugs or people s use of drugs that is the issue.
The essay contains numerous errors that interfere with comprehension. These include errors in word usage and grammar . Finally, the essay ends with a closing that is more appropriate for a letter than an essay.
以上是小編為大家整理的GRE Issue主題范文及評析，希望能夠幫助大家更好地復(fù)習GRE寫作，祝大家GRE考試順利，留學之旅順利!
