gre argument200提綱分析匯總
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材：醫(yī)療，經(jīng)營
gre argument 200題目：
Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients .
提綱：
Without the base amount of male and female patients respectively, we cannot assess which group is more likely to be distressed.
The author fails to describe the detailed circumstances when those patients faint, thus we could not evaluate the argument.
The times of people faint are not a good indication of whether people are distressed.
The author ignores the negative effects of advertisement which focusing on the male consumers.
The author fails to consider what fraction of all patients are likely to be nervous or suffering, and how many consumers really care about their anesthetic techniques and sensitivity.
The author ignores many important features of a dentist which could also attract patients.
The proposed advertising techniques might have the opposite effectby calling attention to the very sorts of images that cause distress and fainting.
注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。
前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。
題目題材：醫(yī)療，經(jīng)營
gre argument 200題目：
Statistics collected from dentists indicate that three times more men than women faint while visiting the dentist. This evidence suggests that men are more likely to be distressed about having dental work done than women are. Thus, dentists who advertise to attract patients should target the male consumer and emphasize both the effectiveness of their anesthetic techniques and the sensitivity of their staff to nervous or suffering patients .
提綱：
Without the base amount of male and female patients respectively, we cannot assess which group is more likely to be distressed.
The author fails to describe the detailed circumstances when those patients faint, thus we could not evaluate the argument.
The times of people faint are not a good indication of whether people are distressed.
The author ignores the negative effects of advertisement which focusing on the male consumers.
The author fails to consider what fraction of all patients are likely to be nervous or suffering, and how many consumers really care about their anesthetic techniques and sensitivity.
The author ignores many important features of a dentist which could also attract patients.
The proposed advertising techniques might have the opposite effectby calling attention to the very sorts of images that cause distress and fainting.
注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。
無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。
