gre argument114提綱分析匯總

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：保健

　　gre argument 114題目：

　　A recently completed study shows that people dwelling in stairs-only apartment buildings live an average of three years longer than do people who live in buildings with both elevators and stairs. A second study shows that elderly residents of buildings with elevators make, on average, twice as many visits to doctors each year as do elderly residents of buildings without elevators. These findings suggest that even a very moderate amount of daily exercise, such as that required to use the stairs leading to and from ones apartment, can increase peoples health and longevity. The findings also suggest that new apartment buildings should be constructed with as few elevators as possible.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to consider other possible differences between people who live in stairs-only apartments and people who live in buildings with elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the possibility that some people choose to live in the buildings with elevator because of their weak health and physique.

　　The fact that residents of buildings without elevator make fewer visits to doctors does not necessarily indicate that they are healthier than other people.

　　The author unfairly assumes that people who live in buildings with elevators will necessarily use elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the necessity of constructing sufficient elevators in new buildings, and the inconvenience with fewer elevators.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。

　　前段時間為gre考生匯總了gre issue寫作提綱思路和分析，希望對考生在攻破gre issue寫作上有所幫助。接下來的幾天我們將為gre考生整理gre argument部分的提綱內(nèi)容。希望通過我們的整理和匯總，讓gre考生真正能掌握gre寫作的精髓。

　　題目題材：保健

　　gre argument 114題目：

　　A recently completed study shows that people dwelling in stairs-only apartment buildings live an average of three years longer than do people who live in buildings with both elevators and stairs. A second study shows that elderly residents of buildings with elevators make, on average, twice as many visits to doctors each year as do elderly residents of buildings without elevators. These findings suggest that even a very moderate amount of daily exercise, such as that required to use the stairs leading to and from ones apartment, can increase peoples health and longevity. The findings also suggest that new apartment buildings should be constructed with as few elevators as possible.

　　提綱：

　　The author fails to consider other possible differences between people who live in stairs-only apartments and people who live in buildings with elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the possibility that some people choose to live in the buildings with elevator because of their weak health and physique.

　　The fact that residents of buildings without elevator make fewer visits to doctors does not necessarily indicate that they are healthier than other people.

　　The author unfairly assumes that people who live in buildings with elevators will necessarily use elevators.

　　The author fails to consider the necessity of constructing sufficient elevators in new buildings, and the inconvenience with fewer elevators.

　　注：題目中括號里的數(shù)字表明這句話體現(xiàn)的是提綱中第幾號缺陷。

　　無論是gre issue還是gre argument，考生都應(yīng)該養(yǎng)成寫提綱的習(xí)慣。這種提綱式的gre寫作練習(xí)可以幫助考生鍛煉寫作的邏輯性，而gre寫作高分最重要的得分依據(jù)就是作文的邏輯性要強。