2011年上海卷高考英語作文范文：扶貧幫困
話題：向一個基金會申請2000元做個項目來支持貧困學生，需要包含以下的一些要點1.介紹自己 2.項目具體實施方案 3.2000元如何利用
作者：陸佳偉
上海延安中學教師
牛津大學語言學碩士
Dear foundation organizers:
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that dont have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us doling out the supplies so that we wouldnt embarrass those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
Modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. Much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Jerry Lu
使用加分語法
1. 同位語
2. v-ing作定語
3. 插入語
4. 詞組如：in a bid to, financially disadvantaged，on this account, oblivion to
5. 過去分詞作定語
6. v-ing作主語
7. 定語從句
8. it作形式主語的主語從句
9. 虛擬語氣
10. 目的狀語從句
11. 倒裝句
12. 賓語從句
話題：向一個基金會申請2000元做個項目來支持貧困學生，需要包含以下的一些要點1.介紹自己 2.項目具體實施方案 3.2000元如何利用
作者：陸佳偉
上海延安中學教師
牛津大學語言學碩士
Dear foundation organizers:
My name is Jerry Lu, a student currently studying at Shanghai XX High school. I am writing, on behalf of my classmates, to apply for the 2000 yuan worth of fund in a bid to initiate a program aimed at helping those students who are financially disadvantaged.
Being raised in families that dont have to worry about putting food on the table need not mean oblivion to our less fortunate peers. On this account, we would appreciate it if you could sponsor our poverty-relief endeavor. The following is how we would go about using the money. We would spend 1500 yuan purchasing some stationery for the needy students at our school. It is worth noting that we would inform them to pick up the school supplies themselves instead of us doling out the supplies so that we wouldnt embarrass those who we want to help. The remainder of the fund would be used to invite a motivational speaker who was to talk about how to lift oneself out of poverty by making right academic and professional decisions.
Modest as our efforts may sound, we believe they will warm some hearts. Much obliged if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours Sincerely,
Jerry Lu
使用加分語法
1. 同位語
2. v-ing作定語
3. 插入語
4. 詞組如：in a bid to, financially disadvantaged，on this account, oblivion to
5. 過去分詞作定語
6. v-ing作主語
7. 定語從句
8. it作形式主語的主語從句
9. 虛擬語氣
10. 目的狀語從句
11. 倒裝句
12. 賓語從句
