07年高考英語作文廣東卷
上周,我們以誰是你的偶像為題,在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù):
[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù),寫一篇短文,包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象;
2.男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異;
3.父母在男女生偶像中的排序差異;
4.男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同;
5.你的偶像及理由。
[寫作要求]
1.只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容;
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)(共l小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, Im amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means lion. Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what youd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mothers labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mothers arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[寫作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你就是信中的Ari,父親在你出生的時(shí)候?qū)懥诉@封信。今天是父親50歲生日,你準(zhǔn)備以寫信的方式,祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內(nèi)容(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好):
1.以約30個(gè)詞概括父親在他信中對(duì)你的期望;
2.以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩,并包括如下要點(diǎn):
(1)讀信后的感受;
(2)以你自己成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷說明你的感受;
(3)表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1.作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子;
2.信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
范文:
第一節(jié):基礎(chǔ)寫作
Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the who is your idol The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . As the data shows, parents ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing great figures is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.
上周,我們以誰是你的偶像為題,在2600名學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了一次調(diào)查(survey)。以下是調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù):
[寫作內(nèi)容]
根據(jù)以上數(shù)據(jù),寫一篇短文,包括以下內(nèi)容:
1.調(diào)查時(shí)間、調(diào)查問題以及調(diào)查對(duì)象;
2.男女生在以明星為偶像方面的差異;
3.父母在男女生偶像中的排序差異;
4.男女生在以偉人為偶像方面的異同;
5.你的偶像及理由。
[寫作要求]
1.只能使用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容;
2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確,信息內(nèi)容完整,篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。
第二節(jié) 讀寫任務(wù)(共l小題,滿分25分)
閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
Dear Ari,
As you sleep in my arms, Im amazed at how light you feel. I stare at your tiny body, so fragile that a sudden wind could lift you up into the air. I love this feeling of protecting you and dreaming of all I have in store for you.
I intend to bring you up to be brave and successful in an often difficult society. Thats why your mommy and I have named you Ari, which means lion. Its our hope that you will grow strong and eagerly grasp every opportunity to do well for yourself and others.
Before you came into the world, we had spent months imagining what youd be like. Would you be a boy or a girl? Would you look like Mommy, Daddy or your elder brothers? Anyway, we would find out soon.
Finally your mothers labor came. And several hours later, we met the first time. I held you high up in the air. I then was able to cut your umbilical cord (臍帶) and put you in your mothers arms. She still had enough energy to radiate the love while she pressed you to her face.
And here we are tonight. As I hold you close, you sleep so peacefully. I press my ear to your chest and hear your strength. I am listening to the first beats of a lions heart. Welcome to the world, Ari.
Love,
Daddy
[寫作內(nèi)容]
假設(shè)你就是信中的Ari,父親在你出生的時(shí)候?qū)懥诉@封信。今天是父親50歲生日,你準(zhǔn)備以寫信的方式,祝賀他的生日。以下是信的內(nèi)容(信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好):
1.以約30個(gè)詞概括父親在他信中對(duì)你的期望;
2.以約120個(gè)詞表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感恩,并包括如下要點(diǎn):
(1)讀信后的感受;
(2)以你自己成長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷說明你的感受;
(3)表達(dá)你對(duì)父親的感激和祝福。
[寫作要求]
1.作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事,也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接 引用原文中的句子;
2.信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]
概括準(zhǔn)確,語言規(guī)范,內(nèi)容合適,篇章連貫。
范文:
第一節(jié):基礎(chǔ)寫作
Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students on the who is your idol The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars . As the data shows, parents ranks the second for the girls , but the for the boys. However , the percentage of the boys choosing great figures is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Thomas Edison is my idol because his inventions have greatly changed our life.