高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文：Green Action in Our Class（附名師點(diǎn)評(píng)）

　　導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：小編為你整理，每年全國(guó)各地的高考英語(yǔ)滿分作文，說(shuō)不定其中就有你不知如何下筆的類型。拿起你的筆記來(lái)記錄吧，為你的英語(yǔ)作文添亮點(diǎn)，讓英語(yǔ)成績(jī)更出色。

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　　【試題回放】情景作文

　　假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華，為響應(yīng)綠化祖國(guó)的號(hào)召，你班四月十二日去郊區(qū)植樹(shù)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，介紹植樹(shù)活動(dòng)的全過(guò)程，給某英文雜志的綠色行動(dòng)專欄寫(xiě)一篇以Green Action in Our Class為題的英文稿件。

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　　提示詞：郊區(qū)suburbs

　　April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering . After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel its our duty to protect and beautify our environment.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　本文是設(shè)計(jì)巧妙的提綱要點(diǎn)式作文，與環(huán)保結(jié)合，立意較好。文章思路清晰，要點(diǎn)連貫，在語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)上選詞新穎，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)等較好的句式表達(dá)。