2008年中考英語寫作預測：提示性作文
寫好提示性作文應注意的事項：
1、仔細審題，明確要求。對所給信息反復閱讀，弄清這個題目要表達什么，然后對所給信息進行整理、組織，按照自己的寫作思路使之條理化。
2、確保語言精煉。在寫作過程中，考生應時刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點去寫，不必有太多的發揮。但也不必按照信息點去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語、句型去體現要點。掌握好文章的長度，不要字數過多或過少。
例題分析
一、漢語提示
根據中文提示和英文提示詞語，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。字數60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。
2、在路上我遇到了一個外國人。
3、他向我詢問去溫泉飯店（the Hot Spring Hotel）的路。
4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個轉彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。
5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。
提示詞語：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）
寫作指導：根據提示我們了解到這是一篇記敘文，所以考生應馬上想到時間（yesterday evening），地點（on the road），人物（I, my mother and a foreigner），事件（how to show the way）。其次觀察信息點，我們確定這篇文章應用過去式來表達。然后，確定這個事件應用第一人稱來敘述。最后，按照信息點合理組織文章，別忘用上提示詞語。
（例文）
Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.
He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.
二、英語提示
你收到一封咨詢信，請你以旅行社工作人員的身份完成任務。
Dear Ace Travel,
I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots?
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming
請你根據來信，從下列所給的地方中選擇一個或兩個符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議。（80字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai
寫作指導：這篇作文結合了提示性作文和應用文的寫作要求。首先，我們要讀懂英語提示的內容，也就是那封咨詢信的內容。其次，我們要知道書信的寫作方法。針對本道題，還要注意，這封信是以旅行社工作人員的身份來寫的。最后，還要注意咨詢信后的要求-從下列所給的地方中選擇一個或兩個符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議及字數限制。
下面，我們來看看范文是怎么寫的。
One Possible version:
Dear Li Ming,
I'm Gina">Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.
Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It's also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ）
That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.
Yours,
Gina
對于，提示作文的寫法大家都會了嗎？不管什么作文的寫作，都要要求我們對英語的詞匯、短語以及常用的表達方法有一定的積累。所以，在學習寫作的同時，不要放松對以上幾個方面的復習。
寫好提示性作文應注意的事項：
1、仔細審題，明確要求。對所給信息反復閱讀，弄清這個題目要表達什么，然后對所給信息進行整理、組織，按照自己的寫作思路使之條理化。
2、確保語言精煉。在寫作過程中，考生應時刻提醒自己按照已給出的信息點去寫，不必有太多的發揮。但也不必按照信息點去逐句翻譯。用自己熟悉的短語、句型去體現要點。掌握好文章的長度，不要字數過多或過少。
例題分析
一、漢語提示
根據中文提示和英文提示詞語，寫一篇意思連貫、符合邏輯的短文。所給英文提示詞語必須用上。字數60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和媽媽出去散步。
2、在路上我遇到了一個外國人。
3、他向我詢問去溫泉飯店（the Hot Spring Hotel）的路。
4、我告訴他沿著路往前走，在第三個轉彎處向左拐就能看見飯店。
5、他非常感謝我，我也為能幫他而感到高興。
提示詞語：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）
寫作指導：根據提示我們了解到這是一篇記敘文，所以考生應馬上想到時間（yesterday evening），地點（on the road），人物（I, my mother and a foreigner），事件（how to show the way）。其次觀察信息點，我們確定這篇文章應用過去式來表達。然后，確定這個事件應用第一人稱來敘述。最后，按照信息點合理組織文章，別忘用上提示詞語。
（例文）
Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.
He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.
二、英語提示
你收到一封咨詢信，請你以旅行社工作人員的身份完成任務。
Dear Ace Travel,
I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots?
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming
請你根據來信，從下列所給的地方中選擇一個或兩個符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議。（80字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai
寫作指導：這篇作文結合了提示性作文和應用文的寫作要求。首先，我們要讀懂英語提示的內容，也就是那封咨詢信的內容。其次，我們要知道書信的寫作方法。針對本道題，還要注意，這封信是以旅行社工作人員的身份來寫的。最后，還要注意咨詢信后的要求-從下列所給的地方中選擇一個或兩個符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建議及字數限制。
下面，我們來看看范文是怎么寫的。
One Possible version:
Dear Li Ming,
I'm Gina">Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.
Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It's also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ）
That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.
Yours,
Gina
對于，提示作文的寫法大家都會了嗎？不管什么作文的寫作，都要要求我們對英語的詞匯、短語以及常用的表達方法有一定的積累。所以，在學習寫作的同時，不要放松對以上幾個方面的復習。
