詳解雅思寫作的“黃金結構”

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詳解雅思寫作的“黃金結構”

　　雅思考試課堂寫作講義1+2+3+4課

　　1st

　　2nd：

　　黃金結構的誕生

　　Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Whats your opinion?

　　More serious unemployment across the world cannot be denied.There are probably many reasons for this, but the main reason is the limited knowledge or skills of some workers.It seems that most of employers prefer the employees who have had enough information along with skills to the people who earn a living at the cost of physical labors.

　　I would like to say that children should be encouraged to accept more secondary and even higher education.It is well aware that a good education can improve their quality and competitiveness . Because many students have been given high-quality education or useful training, they have had more opportunities to get in some reputable companies or Government departments.Furthermore, most of them are more likely to get promoted and development in the end.

　　However, other people argue that students only need to get primary education.They probably think that children cannot find a job even when they get in higher education.However,the students cannot take advantage with the people who have had a good education if they do not get more education. Knowledge and education seems to be the key to find a good job in the society that is competitive.

　　In conclusion, I would like to express that we should encourage children to have more education in very serious environment of unemployment rather than to allow them to drop studying any more. Besides, I think that the Government should set up more training classes free of charge to help more people who are in unemployment, for current problem is not less job opportunity but limited about qualified workers.

　　練習用黃金結構布局文章

　　A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.

　　實現黃金結構的語言設計

　　描述事實

　　It is true that...

　　We can easily find it prevalent that ...

　　給出主要觀點

　　給出次要觀點

　　Some people argue that...

　　Some people hold the statement that...

　　It is said that...

　　總結上面的主次觀點

　　In conclusion, I would like to say that...

　　Overall, my view is that...

　　3rd：

　　分論點的支持句-例子和事實支持的組織方法

　　a)used的妙用: 古今對比

　　新式建筑給予了人們很多好的不能被老式建筑所提供的特性。在過去，由于城市人口較少，因此一座房子往往不需要容納很多人。但是，隨著城市人口的增加，新式的房子能夠容納更多的住客。

　　b)while的妙用: 人無我有,人有我優

　　學生們應該被鼓勵在學校學習一門外語。那些在初中或高中就熟練使用外語的學生無論是進入大學還是直接工作都受到了歡迎，但是沒有這些技能的學生卻不得不面對很多困難。

　　c)It is widely acknowledge that 眾所周知

　　將罪犯關入監獄的好處就是讓人們更安心的生活。眾所周知，關押在監獄的犯人受到非常嚴格的監視和管理，并且不能再繼續犯罪危害社會。

　　4th：

　　1、常見名詞

　　①原因、因素

　　②發展、進展

　　③優點、優勢

　　④缺點、不利

　　⑤需要、需求

　　⑥觀點、論點

　　2、常見動詞

　　①產生、導致

　　②獲得

　　③實現

　　④經受

　　⑤支持觀點/be for/convince/insist/voice a support for/vote for)

　　⑥反對觀點/disregard/oppose)

　　3、常見形容詞

　　①重要的

　　②有益的

　　③有害的

　　④吸引人的

　　⑤很多的

　　⑥很多的 amount of/a magnitude of/a mass of)

　　4、常見副詞

　　①非常地

　　②極少地

　　③幾乎不

　　Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, but others think the purpose of museums is to educate, but not entertain.

　　What is your opinion?

　　博物館在世界各地都是非常受歡迎的場所。我完全同意博物館應該是一個吸引年輕參觀者的場所。原因在于：現在的博物館需要更多的手段來吸引參觀者，這樣它們才能夠更好的發展和生存。

　　第二個更主要的原因是：今天的參觀者對于娛樂性有很高的要求。例子：對于那些增加了娛樂服務的博物館比如：3D電影或是互動節目，他們的參觀數量和大眾的口碑要遠遠好于那些仍舊以舊的方式進行運作的博物館。在那些博物館中，展品被簡單的擺在玻璃罩字后面，枯燥的文字讓人們無法閱讀。

　　另一些人指出：博物館的主要作用是教育，而不是娛樂。他們始終認為人們來到這里是一個很好的學習的機會，增長知識。這種想法是非常正確的。因為娛樂僅僅是工具而不是目的。

　　綜上所述，我認為博物館的形式應該更加多樣化。與此同時博物館的作用不容改變，就是教育。娛樂工具的引入是非常有必要的。特別是對于那些需要知識，但同時需要娛樂的年輕人。