詳解雅思寫作的“黃金結(jié)構(gòu)”
雅思考試課堂寫作講義1+2+3+4課
1st
2nd：
黃金結(jié)構(gòu)的誕生
Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Whats your opinion?
More serious unemployment across the world cannot be denied.There are probably many reasons for this, but the main reason is the limited knowledge or skills of some workers.It seems that most of employers prefer the employees who have had enough information along with skills to the people who earn a living at the cost of physical labors.
I would like to say that children should be encouraged to accept more secondary and even higher education.It is well aware that a good education can improve their quality and competitiveness . Because many students have been given high-quality education or useful training, they have had more opportunities to get in some reputable companies or Government departments.Furthermore, most of them are more likely to get promoted and development in the end.
However, other people argue that students only need to get primary education.They probably think that children cannot find a job even when they get in higher education.However,the students cannot take advantage with the people who have had a good education if they do not get more education. Knowledge and education seems to be the key to find a good job in the society that is competitive.
In conclusion, I would like to express that we should encourage children to have more education in very serious environment of unemployment rather than to allow them to drop studying any more. Besides, I think that the Government should set up more training classes free of charge to help more people who are in unemployment, for current problem is not less job opportunity but limited about qualified workers.
練習(xí)用黃金結(jié)構(gòu)布局文章
A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.
實(shí)現(xiàn)黃金結(jié)構(gòu)的語(yǔ)言設(shè)計(jì)
描述事實(shí)
It is true that...
We can easily find it prevalent that ...
給出主要觀點(diǎn)
給出次要觀點(diǎn)
Some people argue that...
Some people hold the statement that...
It is said that...
總結(jié)上面的主次觀點(diǎn)
In conclusion, I would like to say that...
Overall, my view is that...
3rd：
分論點(diǎn)的支持句-例子和事實(shí)支持的組織方法
a)used的妙用: 古今對(duì)比
新式建筑給予了人們很多好的不能被老式建筑所提供的特性。在過去，由于城市人口較少，因此一座房子往往不需要容納很多人。但是，隨著城市人口的增加，新式的房子能夠容納更多的住客。
b)while的妙用: 人無我有,人有我優(yōu)
學(xué)生們應(yīng)該被鼓勵(lì)在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)一門外語(yǔ)。那些在初中或高中就熟練使用外語(yǔ)的學(xué)生無論是進(jìn)入大學(xué)還是直接工作都受到了歡迎，但是沒有這些技能的學(xué)生卻不得不面對(duì)很多困難。
c)It is widely acknowledge that 眾所周知
將罪犯關(guān)入監(jiān)獄的好處就是讓人們更安心的生活。眾所周知，關(guān)押在監(jiān)獄的犯人受到非常嚴(yán)格的監(jiān)視和管理，并且不能再繼續(xù)犯罪危害社會(huì)。
4th：
1、常見名詞
①原因、因素
②發(fā)展、進(jìn)展
③優(yōu)點(diǎn)、優(yōu)勢(shì)
④缺點(diǎn)、不利
⑤需要、需求
⑥觀點(diǎn)、論點(diǎn)
2、常見動(dòng)詞
①產(chǎn)生、導(dǎo)致
②獲得
③實(shí)現(xiàn)
④經(jīng)受
⑤支持觀點(diǎn)/be for/convince/insist/voice a support for/vote for)
⑥反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)/disregard/oppose)
3、常見形容詞
①重要的
②有益的
③有害的
④吸引人的
⑤很多的
⑥很多的 amount of/a magnitude of/a mass of)
4、常見副詞
①非常地
②極少地
③幾乎不
Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, but others think the purpose of museums is to educate, but not entertain.
What is your opinion?
博物館在世界各地都是非常受歡迎的場(chǎng)所。我完全同意博物館應(yīng)該是一個(gè)吸引年輕參觀者的場(chǎng)所。原因在于：現(xiàn)在的博物館需要更多的手段來吸引參觀者，這樣它們才能夠更好的發(fā)展和生存。
第二個(gè)更主要的原因是：今天的參觀者對(duì)于娛樂性有很高的要求。例子：對(duì)于那些增加了娛樂服務(wù)的博物館比如：3D電影或是互動(dòng)節(jié)目，他們的參觀數(shù)量和大眾的口碑要遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)好于那些仍舊以舊的方式進(jìn)行運(yùn)作的博物館。在那些博物館中，展品被簡(jiǎn)單的擺在玻璃罩字后面，枯燥的文字讓人們無法閱讀。
另一些人指出：博物館的主要作用是教育，而不是娛樂。他們始終認(rèn)為人們來到這里是一個(gè)很好的學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)。這種想法是非常正確的。因?yàn)閵蕵穬H僅是工具而不是目的。
綜上所述，我認(rèn)為博物館的形式應(yīng)該更加多樣化。與此同時(shí)博物館的作用不容改變，就是教育。娛樂工具的引入是非常有必要的。特別是對(duì)于那些需要知識(shí)，但同時(shí)需要娛樂的年輕人。
雅思考試課堂寫作講義1+2+3+4課
1st
2nd：
黃金結(jié)構(gòu)的誕生
Unemployment is getting increasingly serious in many countries. Some people think students only need to get primary education, while others think secondary education is necessary. Whats your opinion?
More serious unemployment across the world cannot be denied.There are probably many reasons for this, but the main reason is the limited knowledge or skills of some workers.It seems that most of employers prefer the employees who have had enough information along with skills to the people who earn a living at the cost of physical labors.
I would like to say that children should be encouraged to accept more secondary and even higher education.It is well aware that a good education can improve their quality and competitiveness . Because many students have been given high-quality education or useful training, they have had more opportunities to get in some reputable companies or Government departments.Furthermore, most of them are more likely to get promoted and development in the end.
However, other people argue that students only need to get primary education.They probably think that children cannot find a job even when they get in higher education.However,the students cannot take advantage with the people who have had a good education if they do not get more education. Knowledge and education seems to be the key to find a good job in the society that is competitive.
In conclusion, I would like to express that we should encourage children to have more education in very serious environment of unemployment rather than to allow them to drop studying any more. Besides, I think that the Government should set up more training classes free of charge to help more people who are in unemployment, for current problem is not less job opportunity but limited about qualified workers.
練習(xí)用黃金結(jié)構(gòu)布局文章
A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.
實(shí)現(xiàn)黃金結(jié)構(gòu)的語(yǔ)言設(shè)計(jì)
描述事實(shí)
It is true that...
We can easily find it prevalent that ...
給出主要觀點(diǎn)
給出次要觀點(diǎn)
Some people argue that...
Some people hold the statement that...
It is said that...
總結(jié)上面的主次觀點(diǎn)
In conclusion, I would like to say that...
Overall, my view is that...
3rd：
分論點(diǎn)的支持句-例子和事實(shí)支持的組織方法
a)used的妙用: 古今對(duì)比
新式建筑給予了人們很多好的不能被老式建筑所提供的特性。在過去，由于城市人口較少，因此一座房子往往不需要容納很多人。但是，隨著城市人口的增加，新式的房子能夠容納更多的住客。
b)while的妙用: 人無我有,人有我優(yōu)
學(xué)生們應(yīng)該被鼓勵(lì)在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)一門外語(yǔ)。那些在初中或高中就熟練使用外語(yǔ)的學(xué)生無論是進(jìn)入大學(xué)還是直接工作都受到了歡迎，但是沒有這些技能的學(xué)生卻不得不面對(duì)很多困難。
c)It is widely acknowledge that 眾所周知
將罪犯關(guān)入監(jiān)獄的好處就是讓人們更安心的生活。眾所周知，關(guān)押在監(jiān)獄的犯人受到非常嚴(yán)格的監(jiān)視和管理，并且不能再繼續(xù)犯罪危害社會(huì)。
4th：
1、常見名詞
①原因、因素
②發(fā)展、進(jìn)展
③優(yōu)點(diǎn)、優(yōu)勢(shì)
④缺點(diǎn)、不利
⑤需要、需求
⑥觀點(diǎn)、論點(diǎn)
2、常見動(dòng)詞
①產(chǎn)生、導(dǎo)致
②獲得
③實(shí)現(xiàn)
④經(jīng)受
⑤支持觀點(diǎn)/be for/convince/insist/voice a support for/vote for)
⑥反對(duì)觀點(diǎn)/disregard/oppose)
3、常見形容詞
①重要的
②有益的
③有害的
④吸引人的
⑤很多的
⑥很多的 amount of/a magnitude of/a mass of)
4、常見副詞
①非常地
②極少地
③幾乎不
Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people, but others think the purpose of museums is to educate, but not entertain.
What is your opinion?
博物館在世界各地都是非常受歡迎的場(chǎng)所。我完全同意博物館應(yīng)該是一個(gè)吸引年輕參觀者的場(chǎng)所。原因在于：現(xiàn)在的博物館需要更多的手段來吸引參觀者，這樣它們才能夠更好的發(fā)展和生存。
第二個(gè)更主要的原因是：今天的參觀者對(duì)于娛樂性有很高的要求。例子：對(duì)于那些增加了娛樂服務(wù)的博物館比如：3D電影或是互動(dòng)節(jié)目，他們的參觀數(shù)量和大眾的口碑要遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)好于那些仍舊以舊的方式進(jìn)行運(yùn)作的博物館。在那些博物館中，展品被簡(jiǎn)單的擺在玻璃罩字后面，枯燥的文字讓人們無法閱讀。
另一些人指出：博物館的主要作用是教育，而不是娛樂。他們始終認(rèn)為人們來到這里是一個(gè)很好的學(xué)習(xí)的機(jī)會(huì)，增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)。這種想法是非常正確的。因?yàn)閵蕵穬H僅是工具而不是目的。
綜上所述，我認(rèn)為博物館的形式應(yīng)該更加多樣化。與此同時(shí)博物館的作用不容改變，就是教育。娛樂工具的引入是非常有必要的。特別是對(duì)于那些需要知識(shí)，但同時(shí)需要娛樂的年輕人。
