2024屆湖北省武漢市高考英語書面表達訓練（5）

　　湖北省武漢市2024高考英語書面表達暑假練習（5）及參考范文

　　【陜西省西安市長安一中2024第二次模擬】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫的學生，你看到如下內容。請你根據內容、寫作要點和要求。

　　寫作要點：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；???????????????

　　2. 陳述自己的理由（可舉例說明）；

　　3. 提出至少兩條建議要求：

　　1. 短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。?2. 短文詞數不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）。

　　3. 內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。? 4. 書寫需清晰、工整。書面表達（滿分30分）This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting; instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.

　　In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality.

　　As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　??(Another possible version)

　　Slowstudent,

　　heThis is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents’ meetings bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents’ meeting, but you can “forbid” your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents’ meeting. Another is trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　（2024福建卷）第二節 書面表達（滿分25分）

　　如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語( quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

　　“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."

　　- Sir Winston, Churchill

　　內容要求：

　　1．你對該引語的理解：

　　2．你的相關經歷：

　　3．恰當的結尾。

　　注意：

　　1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數：

　　2．文中不能出現考生的具體信息：

　　3．詞數：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____________.

　　【考點】考察開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于開放性作文，要求考生根據丘吉爾的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."發表自己的理解，并舉例說明。屬于議論文的一種，主要使用第三人稱和一般現在時。在講述各人經歷時可以使用過去時。要點：1.該名言告訴我們：面對失敗，我們不應該泄氣，相反我們應該鼓足勇氣充滿熱情繼續努力。2.各人經歷：學習騎自行車的例子。3.如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是我們要堅持下去。

　　本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

　　【一句多譯】

　　回顧這一切，我感覺如果我失去信心，我就不能學會騎自行車了。

　　（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.

　　【參考范文】

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.

　　Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　目前，我國高中學生英語學習困難的現象很嚴重，因此，一位即將進入高中學習的女生寫信向外籍教師(Bruce)請教。請你根據信的內容和寫作要點代替Bruce寫封回信。

　　Dear Bruce，

　　I'm writing to ask you for advice on how to avoid becoming a poor English learner in high school.It's said that some students who were not so bad at English in the junior grow poor in it in high school.How I want to remain a good English learner in future！What should I do to achieve my aim？Thank you!

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Best wishes!

　　Li Hong

　　寫作要點：

　　1．告訴Li Hong她所聽說的英語學習困難的情況確實存在，但大多數的高中英語學習困難生都是初中英語成績太差的學生；

　　2．就如何防止高中英語學習困難現象的產生給Li Hong提出建議。

　　`樹立高中能學好英語的信心； 根據高中英語學習的特點，結合身邊學習有困難的學生的不足，另提兩條建議。

　　利用高中開學前的時間復習初中所學內容；

　　注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Li Hong，

　　Your letter reached me this morning.Now I'd like to share my opinion with you.

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Sincerely hoping you can benefit from the above and will be a successful high school English learner.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear_Li_Hong，

　　Your_letter_reached_me_this_morning.Now_I'd_like_to_share_my_opinion_with_you.

　　Yes，some high school poor English learners really got good English scores in the junior，but most are those who were too bad at English at that time.So don't

　　be afraid of falling behind in future.Here are some tips for you.

　　First of all，be confident that you can learn English well in the senior.Also，review the knowledge learned in the junior before the new school life begins.Besides，make necessary mental preparations for the hard learning in the senior.With more difficult English textbooks，you should preview the text and review in time what has been learned，especially the new words.

　　Sincerely_hoping_you_can_benefit_from_the_above_and_will_be_a_successful_high_school_English_learner.

　　Best_wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　隨著網絡在人們日常生活中的廣泛使用，好友和家人過生日或重大節日時，越來越多的學生喜歡通過發電子賀卡來表達他們良好的祝愿。請根據以下提示，簡述使用電子賀卡的優點，并結合實際談談自己的看法。

　　1．使用便捷，傳遞速度快，不受時間和空間的限制；

　　2．形式多樣，生動有趣。除圖象外，還可以傳遞動畫和聲音；

　　3．節約資源，利于環保。

　　注意：1.文章需包括上述要點，可適當發揮，但不要逐條翻譯；

　　2．詞數：100左右；

　　3．參考詞匯：電子賀卡electronic card。

　　With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life，more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　With_the_wide_use_of_the_Internet_in_our_daily_life，more_ and_ more _students_tend_to_send_electronic_cards_to_friends_and_family_members_on_the_occasions_of_their_birthdays_or_festivals.

　　Compared with paper cards，electronic ones have many advantages.Firstly，it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well，without being limited by time and space.Secondly，they take various forms such as pictures，music and animation，which are more interesting and lively.Most importantly，electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.

　　For me，due to reminders，in QQ，I've never missed any chances to say“Happy birthday！”to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards.I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　隨著人民生活水平的不斷提高，越來越多的人加入了“有車一族”，可是隨之而來的不便和污染也越來越明顯。各大城市均飽嘗了堵車之痛。北京市也在廣泛征集治堵良方，請根據下面圖中的相關信息，結合自己的理解，寫一封倡議書，表達一下自己的觀點，倡導綠色出行。詞數100左右。

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As is depicted in the picture above，we can see that the streets are filled with so many cars that the traffic jams happen very frequently，which has very bad influence on the life of the people.

　　__________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As_is_depicted_in_the_picture_above，we _can _see_ that_ the_ streets_ are_ filled

　　_with_so_many_cars_that_the_traffic_jams_happen_very_frequently，which_ has_ very _bad _influence _on_ the_ life_ of_ the_ people.

　　Nowadays we Chinese people are living a comparatively rich life.People buy cars to go out very conveniently.But what we have to mention is that so many cars on the road might not be a good thing for the city traffic.Sometimes it is easy to get jammed.Always using cars is not good for health and it produces to some degree air pollution.

　　The bicycle is a Chinese traditional stereotype.Many people like to go cycling.Cycling is recreation，a sport，and a means of transport.The bicycle is an efficient means of transportation.In fact，cycling is more efficient than any other method of travel！It is absolutely an energysaving means of transportation.

　　Let's go cycling!

　　湖北省武漢市2024高考英語書面表達暑假練習（5）及參考范文

　　【陜西省西安市長安一中2024第二次模擬】書面表達（滿分30分）

　　假定你是中學生李華。在一位名叫的學生，你看到如下內容。請你根據內容、寫作要點和要求。

　　寫作要點：

　　1. 表明自己的看法；???????????????

　　2. 陳述自己的理由（可舉例說明）；

　　3. 提出至少兩條建議要求：

　　1. 短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。?2. 短文詞數不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）。

　　3. 內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。? 4. 書寫需清晰、工整。書面表達（滿分30分）This is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, you should not be afraid of a parents’ meeting; instead, you’d better take a proper attitude to it.

　　In fact, a parents’ meeting is for the most part a communication meeting, where teachers and parents exchange information and opinions about students’ situations at school and home, which is beneficial to improve teaching quality.

　　As for your problem, I think you can have a good talk with your parents and teachers. While talking with your parents, you can focus on how hard you study (if it is the case) and why you failed this time or even ask them to help analyze your failure. When talking with your teachers, better ask them for the law of each subject and effective methods of learning them. Anyhow, improving your grades is the key to solving the problem.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　??(Another possible version)

　　Slowstudent,

　　heThis is really a tough nut to crack. In my opinion, if you use your head a little bit, it is easy to deal with. Let me put it clearer. Now that parents’ meetings bring troubles and unhappiness to you, that would be okay if there were no such kind of meeting. It is impossible for you to forbid your school or your class to hold a parents’ meeting, but you can “forbid” your parents to attend the meeting. How? One way is not telling your parents there will be a parents’ meeting. Another is trying to say something bad about the meeting (say, the meeting is intended for nothing but to collect money) so that your parents hate to go to it. These approaches prove effective, for I am as slow a student as you.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　（2024福建卷）第二節 書面表達（滿分25分）

　　如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語( quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

　　“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."

　　- Sir Winston, Churchill

　　內容要求：

　　1．你對該引語的理解：

　　2．你的相關經歷：

　　3．恰當的結尾。

　　注意：

　　1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數：

　　2．文中不能出現考生的具體信息：

　　3．詞數：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that _____________.

　　【考點】考察開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文屬于開放性作文，要求考生根據丘吉爾的名言“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."發表自己的理解，并舉例說明。屬于議論文的一種，主要使用第三人稱和一般現在時。在講述各人經歷時可以使用過去時。要點：1.該名言告訴我們：面對失敗，我們不應該泄氣，相反我們應該鼓足勇氣充滿熱情繼續努力。2.各人經歷：學習騎自行車的例子。3.如果我們不嘗試，我們就不可能成功，最重要的是我們要堅持下去。

　　本文對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。

　　【一句多譯】

　　回顧這一切，我感覺如果我失去信心，我就不能學會騎自行車了。

　　（1）Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　（2）When I looked back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike If I had lost heart.

　　【參考范文】

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.

　　Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　目前，我國高中學生英語學習困難的現象很嚴重，因此，一位即將進入高中學習的女生寫信向外籍教師(Bruce)請教。請你根據信的內容和寫作要點代替Bruce寫封回信。

　　Dear Bruce，

　　I'm writing to ask you for advice on how to avoid becoming a poor English learner in high school.It's said that some students who were not so bad at English in the junior grow poor in it in high school.How I want to remain a good English learner in future！What should I do to achieve my aim？Thank you!

　　Looking forward to your reply!

　　Best wishes!

　　Li Hong

　　寫作要點：

　　1．告訴Li Hong她所聽說的英語學習困難的情況確實存在，但大多數的高中英語學習困難生都是初中英語成績太差的學生；

　　2．就如何防止高中英語學習困難現象的產生給Li Hong提出建議。

　　`樹立高中能學好英語的信心； 根據高中英語學習的特點，結合身邊學習有困難的學生的不足，另提兩條建議。

　　利用高中開學前的時間復習初中所學內容；

　　注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2．可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Li Hong，

　　Your letter reached me this morning.Now I'd like to share my opinion with you.

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Sincerely hoping you can benefit from the above and will be a successful high school English learner.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear_Li_Hong，

　　Your_letter_reached_me_this_morning.Now_I'd_like_to_share_my_opinion_with_you.

　　Yes，some high school poor English learners really got good English scores in the junior，but most are those who were too bad at English at that time.So don't

　　be afraid of falling behind in future.Here are some tips for you.

　　First of all，be confident that you can learn English well in the senior.Also，review the knowledge learned in the junior before the new school life begins.Besides，make necessary mental preparations for the hard learning in the senior.With more difficult English textbooks，you should preview the text and review in time what has been learned，especially the new words.

　　Sincerely_hoping_you_can_benefit_from_the_above_and_will_be_a_successful_high_school_English_learner.

　　Best_wishes!

　　Yours，

　　Bruce

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　隨著網絡在人們日常生活中的廣泛使用，好友和家人過生日或重大節日時，越來越多的學生喜歡通過發電子賀卡來表達他們良好的祝愿。請根據以下提示，簡述使用電子賀卡的優點，并結合實際談談自己的看法。

　　1．使用便捷，傳遞速度快，不受時間和空間的限制；

　　2．形式多樣，生動有趣。除圖象外，還可以傳遞動畫和聲音；

　　3．節約資源，利于環保。

　　注意：1.文章需包括上述要點，可適當發揮，但不要逐條翻譯；

　　2．詞數：100左右；

　　3．參考詞匯：電子賀卡electronic card。

　　With the wide use of the Internet in our daily life，more and more students tend to send electronic cards to friends and family members on the occasions of their birthdays or festivals.

　　________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　With_the_wide_use_of_the_Internet_in_our_daily_life，more_ and_ more _students_tend_to_send_electronic_cards_to_friends_and_family_members_on_the_occasions_of_their_birthdays_or_festivals.

　　Compared with paper cards，electronic ones have many advantages.Firstly，it's more convenient and quicker to send and receive them as well，without being limited by time and space.Secondly，they take various forms such as pictures，music and animation，which are more interesting and lively.Most importantly，electronic cards are more environmentally friendly and helpful to save both labor and natural resources.

　　For me，due to reminders，in QQ，I've never missed any chances to say“Happy birthday！”to my friends and grandparents far away via electronic cards.I have to say it is just the Internet that is making my life more colorful and comfortable.

　　【2024高考復習】書面表達

　　隨著人民生活水平的不斷提高，越來越多的人加入了“有車一族”，可是隨之而來的不便和污染也越來越明顯。各大城市均飽嘗了堵車之痛。北京市也在廣泛征集治堵良方，請根據下面圖中的相關信息，結合自己的理解，寫一封倡議書，表達一下自己的觀點，倡導綠色出行。詞數100左右。

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As is depicted in the picture above，we can see that the streets are filled with so many cars that the traffic jams happen very frequently，which has very bad influence on the life of the people.

　　__________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　Let's Go Cycling!

　　As_is_depicted_in_the_picture_above，we _can _see_ that_ the_ streets_ are_ filled

　　_with_so_many_cars_that_the_traffic_jams_happen_very_frequently，which_ has_ very _bad _influence _on_ the_ life_ of_ the_ people.

　　Nowadays we Chinese people are living a comparatively rich life.People buy cars to go out very conveniently.But what we have to mention is that so many cars on the road might not be a good thing for the city traffic.Sometimes it is easy to get jammed.Always using cars is not good for health and it produces to some degree air pollution.

　　The bicycle is a Chinese traditional stereotype.Many people like to go cycling.Cycling is recreation，a sport，and a means of transport.The bicycle is an efficient means of transportation.In fact，cycling is more efficient than any other method of travel！It is absolutely an energysaving means of transportation.

　　Let's go cycling!