2024屆高考英語一輪循環寫作周周練:第12周 用途各異的被動、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較句型(新人教版含解析)
第十二周 用途各異的被動、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較句型
被動、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較等句型在寫作中都屬于高級句式,它們的合理運用都能給文章增色添彩。
一、用英文思維的被動語態
英文中被動語態的使用比漢語要多,要普遍。一般說來,當強調動作承受者、不必說出動作執行者或執行者含糊不清時,多用被動語態。被動語態因為更突出客觀事實而被廣泛使用。所以同學們在寫作時也應該注意多用被動語態,以贏得更高的分數。
1.主動語態變被動語態
①To enlarge vocabulary, we should read more native materials.
→To enlarge vocabulary, more native materials should be read.
②They carried out a survey among 260 students.
→A survey was carried out among 260 students.
2.寫作中常見的被動語態
(1)be+過去分詞(be可使用各種時態)
①Nowadays, more and more English words are being used in the Chinese language. (2024·江蘇高考書面表達)
當今,越來越多的英語詞匯正在漢語中使用。
②Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.(2024·湖北高考短文寫作)
幸運的是,她受傷不嚴重,并且我們把她送到了最近的醫院。
(2)情態動詞+be+過去分詞
①To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.
為了提高空氣質量,應該減少使用私家車。
②As can be seen from the chart, more and more people own mobile phones in China now.
正如從表中所看到的,如今在中國擁有手機的人越來越多。
(3)get+過去分詞
①The entrance to the parking place was too small and often got blocked.(2024·北京高考滿分作文)
通往停車場的入口太小了,經常堵車。
②I’m feeling very sorry to tell you that I have to change our plan to visit Yunnan in July, because one of my feet got injured.(2024·北京高考滿分作文)
我很抱歉地告訴你我不得不改變我們七月份去云南旅游的計劃,因為我的一只腳受傷了。
[即時演練] 句型轉換(主動語態變被動語態)
1.Above all, we must do something to stop pollution.
→Above_all,_something_must_be_done_to_stop_pollution.
2.We encourage all the employees to work on line at home.
→All_the_employees_are_encouraged_to_work_on_line_at_home.
3.I suggest that you (should) make friends with people having different characteristics or backgrounds.
→It_is_suggested_that_you_(should)_make_friends_with_people_having_different_characteristics_or_backgrounds.
二、委婉動聽的虛擬語氣
虛擬語氣是高中階段較難掌握的句型之一,在運用時要注意表達的準確性。在高考作文中,常不需要表達不可能實現的非真實條件,而一般表達要求、愿望或者強調論述觀點的客觀性。
1.陳述語氣變虛擬語氣
①I didn’t take his advice, so I failed in the exam.
→If I had taken his advice, I wouldn’t have failed in the exam.
②It’s time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.
→It’s time that we took/should take measures to protect endangered animals.
2.寫作中常見的虛擬語氣
(1)if型虛擬語氣,如果……,就……
Secondly, if I were you, I would take a walk in the evening with my friends.(2024·安徽高考滿分作文)
第二,如果我是你,我會在傍晚和朋友一起散步。
(2)wish型虛擬語氣,希望……
Besides, I wish there wouldn’t be too many students in a class.(2024·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)
另外,我希望一個班不會有太多的學生。
(3)as if/though型虛擬語氣,好像……
Everything in my childhood crowded upon my mind as if/though they had just happened.
童年的一切一下子涌入我的大腦,仿佛剛剛發生似的。
(4)if only型虛擬語氣,要是……就好了;但愿……
If only I could go back and reset my goals.(2024·重慶高考寫作)
要是我能夠回到過去重訂目標該有多好。
(5)It’s (high/about) time (that) ...型虛擬語氣,是……的時候了
It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.(2024·福建高考滿分作文)
確實到了孩子和父母行動起來做出改變的時候了。
(6)(should) do型虛擬語氣,應該……
To master Mandarin, I strongly suggest you (should) practice with Chinese people.(2024·四川高考滿分作文)
為了掌握普通話,我強烈建議你和中國人進行練習。
(7)without/but for/but that含蓄型虛擬語氣,沒有……,要不是……
Without your help, I couldn’t have won the first place in the English Speaking Competition.
要是沒有你的幫助,我不可能在英語演講比賽中獲得第一名。
[即時演練] 用虛擬語氣補全句子
1.建議每個人都應多吃水果和蔬菜。
It is suggested that everyone_(should)_eat more fruit and vegetables.
2.沒有你的幫助,我們不可能提前完成這項工作。
Without your help, I wouldn’t_have_finished the work ahead of time.
3.看我現在所處的糟糕境地!要是我聽了你的建議就好了!
Look at the terrible situation I am in! If only I_had_taken your advice!
4.是我們該下定決心努力學習的時候了。
It’s high time that we_made/should_make_up_our_minds to study hard.
三、不比不知道的倍數和比較句型
表示倍數和比較的句型相對較多,在寫作中靈活運用這些句型有利于提高表達的準確性,提升文章的檔次。
1.倍數+as+形容詞/副詞原級+(名詞)+as
After the new technique was introduced, the production of cars this year is twice as much as that of last year.
引進新技術后,今年汽車的產量是去年的兩倍。
2.the+比較級 ...,the+比較級 ...越……,就越……
The less the teacher does, the more the students do and the more they will learn.(2024·廣東高考滿分作文)
老師做得越少,學生就做得越多,他們學會的就越多。
3.比較級+than+any (other)+名詞單數 ...比任何其他的都……
Mike is more hardworking than any other student in the class.
邁克比班里其他的任何一個同學都勤奮。
4.prefer ... to
...喜歡……勝過……
As for wild release and controlled release, I prefer the latter one to the former one.(2024·重慶高考滿分作文)
對于自由分享和定向分享,我喜歡后者勝過前者。
5.be senior/junior to 比……年長/年齡小;(地位或級別等)比……高/低
Mr. Liu is three years senior to me, and he is also senior to me in our company.
劉先生長我3歲,在公司里級別也比我高。
[即時演練] 用倍數和比較句型補全句子
1.我們的城市已經擴展成了一個大城市,是原來的4倍大。
Our city has developed into a big one, which is four_times_as_big as it used to be.
2.人們賺得越多,似乎想要的也越多,尤其是當其他人賺的比他們多的時候。
The_more people earn, the_more they seem to want, particularly when others earn more than they do.
[綜合演練提能]
Ⅰ.根據要求補全句子
1.作為一名學生,我認為應該采取一些措施保護我們的環境。
As a student, I think some_measures_should_be_taken to protect our environment.(被動語態)
2.應該鼓勵學生養成良好的習慣以及表現得更得體。
Students should_be_encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves better.(被動語態)
3.如果當時你努力的話,你就能輕松地通過期末考試。
If you had_worked_hard,_you would_have_easily_passed the final exam.(虛擬語氣)
4.我建議你應該保持學習和娛樂之間的平衡,像運動、聽音樂等。
I_suggest_you_(should)_keep_the_balance between your study and entertainment, such as sports, listening to music and so on. (虛擬語氣)
5.是我們該采取措施與經濟領域的犯罪作斗爭的時候了。It’s_high_time_that_we_took/should_take_measures to fight against crimes in economic field.(虛擬語氣)
6.如今,一些青少年寧愿在家看電視也不愿意出去做運動。
Nowadays some teenagers prefer_to_watch_TV_at_home_rather_than_go_out to do exercise.(比較句型)
Ⅱ.請按以下內容要點寫一篇英語短文,盡可能多地使用被動語態、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較句型。
1.我的家鄉發生了巨大的變化,建起了很多新房,人們的生活水平有了很大提高。
2.一般來說,我們越富裕就會感覺越幸福。
3.如果你處在一個嚴重污染的環境中,你的心情不會好。
4.要是我們永遠有一個干凈整潔的環境就好了。
5.我強烈建議采取措施制止污染。
參考范文:
Great changes have taken place in my hometown, where a lot of new houses have been built. People’s living standard has been raised.
Generally speaking, the richer we are, the happier we feel. But if you were in a badly-polluted environment, you wouldn’t be in a good mood. If only we always had a very clean and tidy environment! I strongly suggest that measures (should) be taken to stop pollution.
第三步讓文章渾然天成(用時2周)
俗話說得好:好的開頭是成功的一半(Well begun is half done);結尾好,一切都好(All is well that ends well)。一篇英語作文的開頭如果寫得好,就會給閱卷老師良好的印象,吸引他繼續讀下去;如果結尾又寫得好,就會進一步強化閱卷老師對你所寫文章的好感。如果再利用好銜接詞匯使文章流暢自然,那么高分作文離我們還會遠嗎?
第十二周 用途各異的被動、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較句型
被動、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較等句型在寫作中都屬于高級句式,它們的合理運用都能給文章增色添彩。
一、用英文思維的被動語態
英文中被動語態的使用比漢語要多,要普遍。一般說來,當強調動作承受者、不必說出動作執行者或執行者含糊不清時,多用被動語態。被動語態因為更突出客觀事實而被廣泛使用。所以同學們在寫作時也應該注意多用被動語態,以贏得更高的分數。
1.主動語態變被動語態
①To enlarge vocabulary, we should read more native materials.
→To enlarge vocabulary, more native materials should be read.
②They carried out a survey among 260 students.
→A survey was carried out among 260 students.
2.寫作中常見的被動語態
(1)be+過去分詞(be可使用各種時態)
①Nowadays, more and more English words are being used in the Chinese language. (2024·江蘇高考書面表達)
當今,越來越多的英語詞匯正在漢語中使用。
②Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital.(2024·湖北高考短文寫作)
幸運的是,她受傷不嚴重,并且我們把她送到了最近的醫院。
(2)情態動詞+be+過去分詞
①To improve the air quality, the use of private cars should be reduced.
為了提高空氣質量,應該減少使用私家車。
②As can be seen from the chart, more and more people own mobile phones in China now.
正如從表中所看到的,如今在中國擁有手機的人越來越多。
(3)get+過去分詞
①The entrance to the parking place was too small and often got blocked.(2024·北京高考滿分作文)
通往停車場的入口太小了,經常堵車。
②I’m feeling very sorry to tell you that I have to change our plan to visit Yunnan in July, because one of my feet got injured.(2024·北京高考滿分作文)
我很抱歉地告訴你我不得不改變我們七月份去云南旅游的計劃,因為我的一只腳受傷了。
[即時演練] 句型轉換(主動語態變被動語態)
1.Above all, we must do something to stop pollution.
→Above_all,_something_must_be_done_to_stop_pollution.
2.We encourage all the employees to work on line at home.
→All_the_employees_are_encouraged_to_work_on_line_at_home.
3.I suggest that you (should) make friends with people having different characteristics or backgrounds.
→It_is_suggested_that_you_(should)_make_friends_with_people_having_different_characteristics_or_backgrounds.
二、委婉動聽的虛擬語氣
虛擬語氣是高中階段較難掌握的句型之一,在運用時要注意表達的準確性。在高考作文中,常不需要表達不可能實現的非真實條件,而一般表達要求、愿望或者強調論述觀點的客觀性。
1.陳述語氣變虛擬語氣
①I didn’t take his advice, so I failed in the exam.
→If I had taken his advice, I wouldn’t have failed in the exam.
②It’s time for us to take measures to protect endangered animals.
→It’s time that we took/should take measures to protect endangered animals.
2.寫作中常見的虛擬語氣
(1)if型虛擬語氣,如果……,就……
Secondly, if I were you, I would take a walk in the evening with my friends.(2024·安徽高考滿分作文)
第二,如果我是你,我會在傍晚和朋友一起散步。
(2)wish型虛擬語氣,希望……
Besides, I wish there wouldn’t be too many students in a class.(2024·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)
另外,我希望一個班不會有太多的學生。
(3)as if/though型虛擬語氣,好像……
Everything in my childhood crowded upon my mind as if/though they had just happened.
童年的一切一下子涌入我的大腦,仿佛剛剛發生似的。
(4)if only型虛擬語氣,要是……就好了;但愿……
If only I could go back and reset my goals.(2024·重慶高考寫作)
要是我能夠回到過去重訂目標該有多好。
(5)It’s (high/about) time (that) ...型虛擬語氣,是……的時候了
It is high time that both children and parents took/should take action to make small changes.(2024·福建高考滿分作文)
確實到了孩子和父母行動起來做出改變的時候了。
(6)(should) do型虛擬語氣,應該……
To master Mandarin, I strongly suggest you (should) practice with Chinese people.(2024·四川高考滿分作文)
為了掌握普通話,我強烈建議你和中國人進行練習。
(7)without/but for/but that含蓄型虛擬語氣,沒有……,要不是……
Without your help, I couldn’t have won the first place in the English Speaking Competition.
要是沒有你的幫助,我不可能在英語演講比賽中獲得第一名。
[即時演練] 用虛擬語氣補全句子
1.建議每個人都應多吃水果和蔬菜。
It is suggested that everyone_(should)_eat more fruit and vegetables.
2.沒有你的幫助,我們不可能提前完成這項工作。
Without your help, I wouldn’t_have_finished the work ahead of time.
3.看我現在所處的糟糕境地!要是我聽了你的建議就好了!
Look at the terrible situation I am in! If only I_had_taken your advice!
4.是我們該下定決心努力學習的時候了。
It’s high time that we_made/should_make_up_our_minds to study hard.
三、不比不知道的倍數和比較句型
表示倍數和比較的句型相對較多,在寫作中靈活運用這些句型有利于提高表達的準確性,提升文章的檔次。
1.倍數+as+形容詞/副詞原級+(名詞)+as
After the new technique was introduced, the production of cars this year is twice as much as that of last year.
引進新技術后,今年汽車的產量是去年的兩倍。
2.the+比較級 ...,the+比較級 ...越……,就越……
The less the teacher does, the more the students do and the more they will learn.(2024·廣東高考滿分作文)
老師做得越少,學生就做得越多,他們學會的就越多。
3.比較級+than+any (other)+名詞單數 ...比任何其他的都……
Mike is more hardworking than any other student in the class.
邁克比班里其他的任何一個同學都勤奮。
4.prefer ... to
...喜歡……勝過……
As for wild release and controlled release, I prefer the latter one to the former one.(2024·重慶高考滿分作文)
對于自由分享和定向分享,我喜歡后者勝過前者。
5.be senior/junior to 比……年長/年齡小;(地位或級別等)比……高/低
Mr. Liu is three years senior to me, and he is also senior to me in our company.
劉先生長我3歲,在公司里級別也比我高。
[即時演練] 用倍數和比較句型補全句子
1.我們的城市已經擴展成了一個大城市,是原來的4倍大。
Our city has developed into a big one, which is four_times_as_big as it used to be.
2.人們賺得越多,似乎想要的也越多,尤其是當其他人賺的比他們多的時候。
The_more people earn, the_more they seem to want, particularly when others earn more than they do.
[綜合演練提能]
Ⅰ.根據要求補全句子
1.作為一名學生,我認為應該采取一些措施保護我們的環境。
As a student, I think some_measures_should_be_taken to protect our environment.(被動語態)
2.應該鼓勵學生養成良好的習慣以及表現得更得體。
Students should_be_encouraged to develop good habits and behave themselves better.(被動語態)
3.如果當時你努力的話,你就能輕松地通過期末考試。
If you had_worked_hard,_you would_have_easily_passed the final exam.(虛擬語氣)
4.我建議你應該保持學習和娛樂之間的平衡,像運動、聽音樂等。
I_suggest_you_(should)_keep_the_balance between your study and entertainment, such as sports, listening to music and so on. (虛擬語氣)
5.是我們該采取措施與經濟領域的犯罪作斗爭的時候了。It’s_high_time_that_we_took/should_take_measures to fight against crimes in economic field.(虛擬語氣)
6.如今,一些青少年寧愿在家看電視也不愿意出去做運動。
Nowadays some teenagers prefer_to_watch_TV_at_home_rather_than_go_out to do exercise.(比較句型)
Ⅱ.請按以下內容要點寫一篇英語短文,盡可能多地使用被動語態、虛擬語氣、倍數和比較句型。
1.我的家鄉發生了巨大的變化,建起了很多新房,人們的生活水平有了很大提高。
2.一般來說,我們越富裕就會感覺越幸福。
3.如果你處在一個嚴重污染的環境中,你的心情不會好。
4.要是我們永遠有一個干凈整潔的環境就好了。
5.我強烈建議采取措施制止污染。
參考范文:
Great changes have taken place in my hometown, where a lot of new houses have been built. People’s living standard has been raised.
Generally speaking, the richer we are, the happier we feel. But if you were in a badly-polluted environment, you wouldn’t be in a good mood. If only we always had a very clean and tidy environment! I strongly suggest that measures (should) be taken to stop pollution.
第三步讓文章渾然天成(用時2周)
俗話說得好:好的開頭是成功的一半(Well begun is half done);結尾好,一切都好(All is well that ends well)。一篇英語作文的開頭如果寫得好,就會給閱卷老師良好的印象,吸引他繼續讀下去;如果結尾又寫得好,就會進一步強化閱卷老師對你所寫文章的好感。如果再利用好銜接詞匯使文章流暢自然,那么高分作文離我們還會遠嗎?