2024屆高三英語百所名校好題速遞分項解析匯編（第01期）：專題05 短文改錯（教師版）
2024屆高考模擬試題分類匯編（1）之短文改錯
traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile, buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.
I do hope my suggestions will be taken.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
71.complaining后面加about
72.serious--seriously
73.advices--advice
74.other--another
75.that--which
76.what--that
77.under后面的the去掉
78.its--their
79.using--used
80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover
74.other—another
考查代詞。For another
75.that--which
考查定語從句；that不能引導非限制性定語從句，which可以引導非限制性定語從句；
76.what--that
考查表語從句；句意：但最重要的是事情是私家車的數量應該得到控制；
77.under后面的the去掉
考查固定短語。Under control處在控制之下；
78.its--their
考查代詞。句意：同時，公交車有他們自己的專線，這是其它機動車所不能使用的。
79.using--used
考查被動語態。Be used by 被。。使用；
80.Therefore—Besides/Moreover 考查副詞。除此之后，地鐵發展也很迅速；
考點 短文改錯。It is Mother’s Day today. Mom has a full-time job, so she has to do most of the houseworks. She is a great mother. Both Dad or I planned to do something on Mother’s Day. We get up early in the morning. Dad cleaned the house, and then went on shopping. While he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked dishes in kitchen. The dishes I cooked was Mom’s favorite. At dinner, we said to her, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mom was grateful and moving to tears.
【答案】
71.so--but
72.houseworks--housework
73.or--and
74.get--got
75.on去掉；
76. While--When
77.her--his
78.in后面加the
79.were--was
80.moving--moved
72.houseworks--housework 考查名詞。“housework”是不可數名詞，故把 houseworks---housework—and
考查連詞
both---and---，兩個都---。故把 or---and。—got
考查動詞的時態。句意：在母親節我們起床早。根據句意可知用一般過去時態，故把get---gotgo shopping 去購物。可知去掉on—When 考查連詞。句意：當他回來時，我發現他手里有朵花。
77.her--his
考查代詞。句意：在爸爸手里。故把her---his
【江西省豐城中學2024屆高三上學期第一次段考】短文改錯（共10小題,每小題1分,滿分10分）
短文中共有10處語言錯誤，每行中最多兩處錯誤。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出增加的詞;
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉;
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.
Much love,
Fiona
【答案】
73.Unfortunate-- Unfortunately
74.for--as
75.mile--miles
76.unless--until
77.here--there
78.as后面加a
79.they--We
80.to去掉
考點 ：短文改錯。
【湖北省沙市中學2024屆高三上學期第二次考試】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.
【答案】
1.side→sides
2.from→of
3.sit→sitting
4.easy→easily
5.is→was
6.them→it
7.not去掉
8.in^ hurry→a
9.felt→feel
10.If→Although/Though
3.sit→sitting
動詞形式錯誤。Enjoy后用v-ing形式。第二句：sit→sitting。 4.easy→easily
詞性錯誤。此處用副詞修飾動詞see。第三句：easy→easily修飾動詞see應用副詞，所以easy改為easily。 5.is→was
時態錯誤。根據上下文，用過去時。第五句： is→was時態誤用。全文用的都是過去時，所以要把is改為was。 6.them→it
代詞誤用。此處指代前面提到的park，用單數。第六句：them→it代詞誤用。這里指代的是park，所以要把them改為it。 7.not去掉
從句意判斷：從遠處能欣賞到雪山美景。第七句：刪掉could后的not根據上下文可知這里應該是表肯定，所以把not刪掉。 【知識拓展】
含a的固定短語或習慣用法
have a rest 休息一會兒；have a good time 玩得開心；have a break休息一會兒； in a hurry 匆忙；after a while過了一會兒； once in a while 偶爾；have a good idea 有一個好主意；as a matter of fact事實上； in a word總而言之； make a choice 做出選擇；a success一個成功的人，一件成功的事； a failure一個失敗的人，一件失敗的事； an honour一個榮幸的人，一個榮幸的事； have a good knowledge of 有某方面的好知識。
考點：考查短文改錯
【湖北省襄陽市第五中學2024屆高三上學期開學考試】短文改錯（共10小題，每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
One of my happiest childhood memories were having dinner with my parents and two sisters. As a result, found that we seldom had a chance to get together, we decided we would set aside three evenings the week for a sit-down dinner. First we tried setting three fixed days for our experiment—Mondays, Wednesdays or Fridays. After a couple of week of trying this plan, almost everyone was unhappy. For a while, the kids began to resist the idea. They said they would rather to spend the time with their friends or take part in some activities. Gradual, though, they began to see these evenings together for a very different way. We laughed a lot and we discussed about each other’s problems. Since a few months, we all felt we had been able to build much strong relationships with the family than we had before.
【答案】
1.were改was/is
2.found前having
3.a week
4.and Fridays
5.a couple of weeks
6.would rather spend
7.Gradually
8.for改in
9.Since改After
10.strong改stronger
3.a week
句意：一周三個晚上。故把the week改成a week。
4.and Fridays
此處表示并列，故把or Fridays改成and Fridays。
5.a couple of weeks
a couple of+名詞復數，故把a couple of week改成a couple of weeks。
6.would rather spend
would rather后跟動詞原形，故把would rather to spend改成would rather spend。
7.Gradually
副詞修飾整個句子，故把Gradual改成Gradually。
8.for改in
固定詞組：in a different way用一種不同的方式，故把for改in。
9.Since改After
句意：幾個月之后，故把Since改After。
10.strong改stronger
根據much和than可知此處用比較級，故把strong改stronger。
【知識歸納】
would rather的用法
一、概述。 1.含義。“寧愿/可,更/最好,還是…為好”。 2.用法。常+V原,常省略為’d rather,表優先選擇的一種方式 。無人稱,數,詞性,時態變化,所有的人稱情況均用would rather. 3.否定形式。would rather not do sth。例: Mr Li would rather not listen to rock music 4.would /had在此決無“過去”之意，它是一個情態助動詞。 If you’d rather be alone, we’ll all leave here. 如果你寧愿獨自呆著，那我們都離開這兒。?
二、擴展。 1.在兩者中取舍,表“寧愿……而不愿……/與其……寧可……”時，則可用would rather…than…或would…rather than…句型.? 例: I would rather watch TV at home than go to the cinema.? 2.也可以顛倒為：rather than…would… 例：Rather than work in such bad condition, he would give up 3.Would(rather)和than后都接不帶to的動詞不定式，若選同一動詞,那么than 后的動詞可以省略。? 例: I would rather have noodles than rice.
三、would rather+從句，常用的虛擬語氣句型,謂語一般用過去時來表示現在或將來。 其意為“寧愿……,還是…… 好些”“一個人寧愿另一個人做某事”。引導從句的that常省略。在談到過去的動作時，謂語則用過去完成時。?例: John wants to see me today. I would rather he came to tomorrow than today. 句中came不是表示過去而是表示將來.
考點：考查短文改錯
【湖北省襄陽市第四中學2024屆高三八月第一周周考】短文改錯 （共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
英語課上，老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設以下作文為你同桌所寫，請你對其進行修改。共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。 錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號 （^），并在此符號下面寫出改加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Li Hui, my friend in high school, has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed, her parents don’t agree with her decision at first. Therefore, Li Hui would not change her mind. She worked hardly to perfect her skills. Just before he finished high school, the chance came: the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition. The first three winner would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance. She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel it certain that her dream will come true.
【答案】
71.dreamed后加of或aboutdisappointed?→?disappointment.
73.don’t?→?didn’t.
74.Therefore?→?However.
75.hardly?→?hard.
76.he?→?she.
77.the?→?a.
78.winner?→?winners.
79.?missing?→?miss.
80.去掉it73.don’t?→?didn’t.考查時態。故事是高中時發生的事要用過去時，故don’t?→?didn’t.
74.Therefore?→?However.考查連詞。句意：她的父母起初不同意她的決定，然而她沒有改變主意。此處表示轉折不是因果，故Therefore?→?However.
75.hardly?→?hard.考查副詞。hardly?幾乎不；?hard努力地。此處指她努力工作完善技能。表示“努力地”，故hardly?→?hard.
76.he?→?she.考查代詞。上文提到李慧，代詞用的是she，her是女生，故he?→?she.
77.the?→?a.考查冠詞。此處指一次機會來了，表示一次，故the?→?a.
78.winner?→?winners.考查名詞。此處指前三名獲勝者所以名詞要用復數形式，故winner?→?winners.
79.?missing?→?miss.考查動詞形式。tell sb. not to do sth.告訴某人不要做某事，to后用動詞原形，故?missing?→?miss.
80.去掉itfeel是系動詞certain是表語，不用it。故去掉it短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上英語老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中至多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
This morning I saw off my aunt at railway station. There were many passenger in the waiting room. I saw an old lady crying sad because she had lost her ticket and not able to afford another one. I was thinking about helping her when a man come up to comfort her. Then he bought her a ticket with his own money. The old Lady was so moving that she could hardly say a word. She grasped his hand and asked for his name or address. But he only smile and said, “It’s my pleasure.” Then he left away quickly. I was greatly moved by such a man he warmed others with his love.
【答案】
1.at ∧railway加the
2.passenger--- passengers
3.sad---sadly
4.and ∧not加was
5.come---came
6.moving---moved
7.or---and
8.smile--smiled
9.去掉away
10.he---who
3.sad---sadly
本題考查形容詞的副詞用法。根據題干分析我看到以為老婦人正在傷心地哭泣，sad是形容詞，修飾動詞cry要用副詞形式，所以要在sad后加ly
4.and ∧not加was
本題考查be able to do sth的用法。根據題干分析她負擔不起再買一張票。Be able to do sth.是能做某事的固定用法，所以要在not able to前加was。
