【金版教程】2024高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)訓(xùn)練：4-3-2 圖畫作文a（含解析）

　　建議用時(shí)：35分鐘

　　一、按寫作步驟完成下面寫作任務(wù)

　　[2024·北京朝陽(yáng)區(qū)一模]假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)班的學(xué)生李華，上周日你班組織到首都圖書館參加一天的文化志愿活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記，記述活動(dòng)的全過程。

　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60；日記的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　March 29th，SundayFine

　　Today some classmates and I served at Capital Library as volunteers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一步：審題。

　　1．本文是________類作文

　　2．體裁是________

　　3．人稱是________

　　4．時(shí)態(tài)是________

　　答案：1.圖畫　2.應(yīng)用文(日記)　3.第一人稱　4.一般過去時(shí)態(tài)

　　第二步：聯(lián)想詞匯——緊扣文章主題(圖畫內(nèi)容)。

　　1．集合：________

　　答案：gather

　　2．培訓(xùn)：________

　　答案：train

　　3．操作電腦：________

　　答案：operate the computers

　　4．借(還)書：________

　　答案：borrow or return books

　　5．志愿者身份卡：________

　　答案：volunteer identity card

　　6．開始著手做：________

　　答案：get down to

　　7．整理書架：________

　　答案：finish bookshelves

　　8．認(rèn)真對(duì)待：________

　　答案：take...seriously

　　9．對(duì)……說再見：________

　　答案：say good-bye to

　　10．分享感受：________

　　答案：share feelings

　　第三步：連詞成句——注意緊扣題目要求，引出要點(diǎn)。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．We ________ at the gate of the library.

　　我們?cè)趫D書館門口集合。

　　答案：gathered together

　　2．We ________ by a librarian.

　　我們首先接受圖書管理員的培訓(xùn)。

　　答案：were first trained

　　3．How ________ to borrow or return books?

　　我們應(yīng)如何操作電腦來借(還)書。

　　答案：should we operate the computers

　　4．We ________.

　　我們可以幫助讀者。

　　答案：could help readers

　　5．We ________ and volunteer identity card and ________ our work.

　　我們穿上志愿者服裝，戴上標(biāo)志，便開始工作。

　　答案：wore the volunteer uniform; got down to

　　6．________ helped with finishing bookshelves.

　　一些同學(xué)幫助整理書架。

　　答案：Some students

　　7．Some________ to the people. Those people had problems with ________.

　　有些人幫助一些人，這些人在使用電腦方面有困難。

　　答案：offered assistance; using the computers

　　8．When ________， we did our part in helping others.

　　我們做志愿工作時(shí)，我們盡力幫助他人。

　　答案：doing voluntary work

　　(二)根據(jù)要求，對(duì)以上句子進(jìn)行升級(jí)

　　升級(jí)一：把2、3句升級(jí)為“疑問詞＋to do”結(jié)構(gòu)的簡(jiǎn)單句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books.

　　升級(jí)二：把升級(jí)一和句4，用so that句式連接起來。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later.

　　升級(jí)三：把句5升級(jí)為分詞作狀語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to work.

　　升級(jí)四：把句7升級(jí)為定語(yǔ)從句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers.

　　升級(jí)五：把句8升級(jí)為“連詞＋非謂語(yǔ)”的省略結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others.

　　第四步：做好銜接，連句成篇。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　March_29th,_SundayFine

　　Today_some_classmates_and_I_served_at_Capital_Library_as_volunteers. At 9 o'clock this morning, we gathered together at the gate of the library. After getting into the library, we were first trained by a librarian on how to operate the computers to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later. Then, wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to our work. Some of us helped with finishing bookshelves and some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers. All of us took our tasks seriously and tried to do them well.

　　Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye to the staff. On the way back, we shared our feelings happily. When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others. Meanwhile, it promoted our social awareness. We all believe volunteering is rewarding and look forward to more of it.

　　二、課下練筆——仿照即時(shí)演練的步驟，完成下列書面表達(dá)

　　[2024·遼寧五校聯(lián)考一]請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)下面這幅漫畫的理解，以“Come back to reality”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇作文。

　　你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

　　1．簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫的內(nèi)容；

　　2．概述你對(duì)這幅漫畫的理解；

　　3．舉例說明你會(huì)怎樣做。

　　注意：1.可參照漫畫適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

　　2．作文詞數(shù)100左右；

　　3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

　　Come back to reality

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Come back to reality

　　As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of a computer and trying to make friends on the Net. Just outside the door, many people are watching, eager to make friends with her. However, they are all neglected.

　　The picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts themselves in the virtual world.

　　What is worse is that the situation continues and sooner or later those people will be eventually cut off from the real world. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for them. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet will lead to a disaster both physically and mentally. In other words, the real world that we live in is what really counts.

　　As for myself, I'll devote myself to more worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to studying, only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.

　　建議用時(shí)：35分鐘

　　一、按寫作步驟完成下面寫作任務(wù)

　　[2024·北京朝陽(yáng)區(qū)一模]假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高二(1)班的學(xué)生李華，上周日你班組織到首都圖書館參加一天的文化志愿活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇日記，記述活動(dòng)的全過程。

　　注意：詞數(shù)不少于60；日記的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

　　March 29th，SundayFine

　　Today some classmates and I served at Capital Library as volunteers.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　第一步：審題。

　　1．本文是________類作文

　　2．體裁是________

　　3．人稱是________

　　4．時(shí)態(tài)是________

　　答案：1.圖畫　2.應(yīng)用文(日記)　3.第一人稱　4.一般過去時(shí)態(tài)

　　第二步：聯(lián)想詞匯——緊扣文章主題(圖畫內(nèi)容)。

　　1．集合：________

　　答案：gather

　　2．培訓(xùn)：________

　　答案：train

　　3．操作電腦：________

　　答案：operate the computers

　　4．借(還)書：________

　　答案：borrow or return books

　　5．志愿者身份卡：________

　　答案：volunteer identity card

　　6．開始著手做：________

　　答案：get down to

　　7．整理書架：________

　　答案：finish bookshelves

　　8．認(rèn)真對(duì)待：________

　　答案：take...seriously

　　9．對(duì)……說再見：________

　　答案：say good-bye to

　　10．分享感受：________

　　答案：share feelings

　　第三步：連詞成句——注意緊扣題目要求，引出要點(diǎn)。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．We ________ at the gate of the library.

　　我們?cè)趫D書館門口集合。

　　答案：gathered together

　　2．We ________ by a librarian.

　　我們首先接受圖書管理員的培訓(xùn)。

　　答案：were first trained

　　3．How ________ to borrow or return books?

　　我們應(yīng)如何操作電腦來借(還)書。

　　答案：should we operate the computers

　　4．We ________.

　　我們可以幫助讀者。

　　答案：could help readers

　　5．We ________ and volunteer identity card and ________ our work.

　　我們穿上志愿者服裝，戴上標(biāo)志，便開始工作。

　　答案：wore the volunteer uniform; got down to

　　6．________ helped with finishing bookshelves.

　　一些同學(xué)幫助整理書架。

　　答案：Some students

　　7．Some________ to the people. Those people had problems with ________.

　　有些人幫助一些人，這些人在使用電腦方面有困難。

　　答案：offered assistance; using the computers

　　8．When ________， we did our part in helping others.

　　我們做志愿工作時(shí)，我們盡力幫助他人。

　　答案：doing voluntary work

　　(二)根據(jù)要求，對(duì)以上句子進(jìn)行升級(jí)

　　升級(jí)一：把2、3句升級(jí)為“疑問詞＋to do”結(jié)構(gòu)的簡(jiǎn)單句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books.

　　升級(jí)二：把升級(jí)一和句4，用so that句式連接起來。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：We were first trained by a librarian on how to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later.

　　升級(jí)三：把句5升級(jí)為分詞作狀語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to work.

　　升級(jí)四：把句7升級(jí)為定語(yǔ)從句。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：Some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers.

　　升級(jí)五：把句8升級(jí)為“連詞＋非謂語(yǔ)”的省略結(jié)構(gòu)。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　答案：When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others.

　　第四步：做好銜接，連句成篇。

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　March_29th,_SundayFine

　　Today_some_classmates_and_I_served_at_Capital_Library_as_volunteers. At 9 o'clock this morning, we gathered together at the gate of the library. After getting into the library, we were first trained by a librarian on how to operate the computers to borrow or return books so that we could help readers later. Then, wearing the volunteer uniform and volunteer identity card, we got down to our work. Some of us helped with finishing bookshelves and some offered assistance to the people who had problems with using the computers. All of us took our tasks seriously and tried to do them well.

　　Time passed quickly. Before we knew it, it was time to say goodbye to the staff. On the way back, we shared our feelings happily. When doing voluntary work, we did our part in helping others. Meanwhile, it promoted our social awareness. We all believe volunteering is rewarding and look forward to more of it.

　　二、課下練筆——仿照即時(shí)演練的步驟，完成下列書面表達(dá)

　　[2024·遼寧五校聯(lián)考一]請(qǐng)你根據(jù)對(duì)下面這幅漫畫的理解，以“Come back to reality”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇作文。

　　你的作文應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：

　　1．簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫的內(nèi)容；

　　2．概述你對(duì)這幅漫畫的理解；

　　3．舉例說明你會(huì)怎樣做。

　　注意：1.可參照漫畫適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

　　2．作文詞數(shù)100左右；

　　3．作文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

　　Come back to reality

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　One possible version：

　　Come back to reality

　　As is shown in the picture, a woman is sitting in front of a computer and trying to make friends on the Net. Just outside the door, many people are watching, eager to make friends with her. However, they are all neglected.

　　The picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts themselves in the virtual world.

　　What is worse is that the situation continues and sooner or later those people will be eventually cut off from the real world. There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting, but that's not the reason for them. Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet will lead to a disaster both physically and mentally. In other words, the real world that we live in is what really counts.

　　As for myself, I'll devote myself to more worthwhile things in real life, from making friends to studying, only in this way can I make my life full and valuable.