浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（29）
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（）10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was?completely free then, so I’ll
to? say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at
? am
?around 8 pm in? Friday evening.
on
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game.
第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）
在繁重的課業負擔之下，中學生也應該學會適度地自我放松，請你圍繞“Ways to get relaxed”這一話題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1、自我放松的途徑：看電視、體育鍛煉、上網等
2、我更喜歡的途徑及理由：……
注意:
在表達“我更喜歡的途徑及理由”時,請從要點1中選擇一項進行闡述。
詞數：100—120，文章開頭已給出（不計詞數）。
There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students.
改錯1．將was改為am。2．去掉for。3．將match改為matches。4．將Play改為Playing。5．將give改為gives。6．instead后加of。7．important改為importance。8．在captain前加the。9．將they改為we。10. unless--if
作文
One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.
??? As far as I’m concerned/ As for me, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing, the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.
浙江省2024高考英語二輪復習專題訓練：短文改錯+書面表達（）10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）
下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤， 要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
例如：It was very nice to get invitation to spend ?∧ ?weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was?completely free then, so I’ll
to? say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at
? am
?around 8 pm in? Friday evening.
on
My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead ourselves. Also, the sport teaches us the important of obedience. Each player must obey captain, who is the leader of the team. And they must not break the rules too often unless we want to win the game.
第二節：書面表達（滿分30分）
在繁重的課業負擔之下，中學生也應該學會適度地自我放松，請你圍繞“Ways to get relaxed”這一話題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1、自我放松的途徑：看電視、體育鍛煉、上網等
2、我更喜歡的途徑及理由：……
注意:
在表達“我更喜歡的途徑及理由”時,請從要點1中選擇一項進行闡述。
詞數：100—120，文章開頭已給出（不計詞數）。
There are various ways to get relaxed for middle school students.
改錯1．將was改為am。2．去掉for。3．將match改為matches。4．將Play改為Playing。5．將give改為gives。6．instead后加of。7．important改為importance。8．在captain前加the。9．將they改為we。10. unless--if
作文
One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc. We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well. Moreover, we can surf the Internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.
??? As far as I’m concerned/ As for me, surfing the Internet appeals to me most. For one thing, the Internet offers a wide range of activities for relaxation. In general, I keep track of the latest news as an enjoyment. Sometimes, I play computer games to refresh myself. For another, the Internet makes it easy for me to make friends with people at home and abroad, for it is a great joy to communicate with them. In addition, having a glimpse of the vivid pictures and live videos on the Internet contributes to regaining my energy.
