2024屆高考英語二輪復習熱點限時訓練：短文改錯系列1
短文改錯系列1
一、短文改錯
1．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are．
【小題1】disappointing—disappointed
【小題2】find—found
【小題3】However—Besides或Also
for—of
【小題5】hardly—hard
【小題6】teachers 前加my或the
student—students
【小題8】what—which
【小題9】去掉but后的that
determine—determines
【解析】
【小題1】disappointing修飾某事
disappointed修飾某人
【小題2】文章開頭Three years ago所以應是過去時
【小題3】however但是
此處不存在轉折關系。而是與前面的表示并列
【小題4】固定搭配make the best of
好好利用
【小題5】hard的形容詞 副詞 相同，均為hard
而hardly表示幾乎不
【小題6】老師應是特制的 故要加my或the
【小題7】one of 后面要用復數
表示 。。。之一
【小題8】非限制性定語從句。從句中缺主語，關系代詞不能用what，用which
【小題9】but后已經是一個完整的句子，不用加that
【小題10】it后的that指代it 故從句中要用第三人稱單數。
2．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的一篇作文。文 中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在寫出該加的詞
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該寫出改正后的詞
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed.
【答案】
【小題1】me—I
【小題2】that 去掉
【小題3】They-We
【小題4】was divided into
【小題5】 leaving—left
【小題6】where—which
【小題7】equipments—equipment
【小題8】hardly—hard
【小題9】fell—felt
【小題10】so--but
【解析】
【小題1】and表并列，前后的人稱應相同
所以應用主格I
【小題2】guess后已經是一個完整的句子，不用加that
【小題3】本文講的是“我們”所以應是we
【小題4】班里的人應該是“被分成三組”所以應是被動語態
【小題5】句意：揀被留下的垃圾
所以應是left
【小題6】定語從句
in后面缺少賓語
不能用where
應該有which
【小題7】equipment為不可數名詞，不能加S
【小題8】hard的形容詞 副詞均為hard
hardly意為幾乎不
【小題9】句意：我們感到有點兒累
感覺feel
過去時為felt
【小題10】我們很累但很開心
前后轉折 故用but
3．假設英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文, 請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文
中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧）, 并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been
hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,
he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But
hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on
his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to
escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the
nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was
out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to
normal as soon as possible.
【答案】
【小題1】surprising 改成surprised
【小題2】has 改成had
【小題3】such 改成so
【小題4】to去掉
【小題5】while 改成when
【小題6】them改成 him
【小題7】or 改成 and
【小題8】operation 前面加an
【小題9】dangers 改成danger
【小題10】sincere 改成sincerely
【解析】
【小題1】修飾主語用過去分詞轉換的形容詞
【小題2】他被車撞是之前已經發生的事情
【小題3】后面的形容詞，用so修飾
【小題4】see sb do sth
【小題5】固定句型hardly…when…一…就…
【小題6】him指代Allee
【小題7】上下文不是選擇關系，而是并列關系
【小題8】operation是可數名詞，用a修飾
【小題9】固定詞組out of danger
【小題10】副詞修飾動詞
4．此題要求改正所給短文的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上劃一個勾（√）；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。
該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。
該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。
注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。
In China there is about 50 million disabled
76. _______
people. We should try our best make their life much
77. _______
more easier. For example, when we design a building,
78. _______
we’ll have to provide a entrance which is suitable
79. _______
for wheelchairs in the first floor. The Chinese
80. _______
government take good care of their life. Many people
81. _______
with disability have received good treatment from the
82. _______
government. Meanwhile, more and more special schools
83. _______
have built for them. But that is not enough, their life
84._______
won’t be much better if everyone shows love for them.
85._______
【答案】
【小題1】is改為 are
【小題2】best 后加to
【小題3】more去掉
【小題4】 a改為 an
【小題5】in 改為on
【小題6】take 改為takes
【小題7】disability 改為disabilities
【小題8】正確
【小題9】have改為 been
【小題10】won’t 改為 will if改為 unless
【解析】
【小題1】is改為 are
there be是倒裝句，句子的主語是million disabled people作主語，謂語動詞用復數。
【小題2】best 后加to
固定詞組try one’s best to do sth努力做某事。
【小題3】more去掉
后面已經是比較級了，故more省略。
【小題4】 a改為 an
entrance是以元音發言，故用an.
【小題5】in 改為on
在一樓用介詞On。
【小題6】take 改為takes
government作為整體，謂語動詞用單數。
【小題7】disability 改為disabilities
用復數形式指不同的殘疾；
【小題8】正確
【小題9】have改為 been
上下文可知使用被動形式。
【小題10】won’t 改為 will if改為 unless 上下文串聯，除非每個人都表現出對別人的愛，他們的生活才會更好。
5．文中有10處錯誤每句最多兩處每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加在缺詞處加一個漏字符號 ^，在其下面寫出加的詞，刪除把多余的詞用斜線劃掉或修改在錯詞下劃—橫線在下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意每處錯誤及修改僅限一詞；2只修改10處從第11處起不計分。
College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students
have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and
others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this,
many good student can win a scholarship. By this way they can pay at least part
of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are
rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high
school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good at these
important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.
【答案】College students have a few ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their
parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply for a bank loan and others will try to find
part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good students can win a
scholarship.In this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay
half of my fees because they are ∧ not rich enough. Besides my study, I will take up a part-time
job by teaching some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as I’m very good
at these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order that I can easily win a scholarship.
【解析】
【小題1】way是可數名詞，用few修飾，little修飾不可數名詞
【小題2】have sb do 使某人做。。。
把parents后面的to去掉
【小題3】apply for 申請
這里指申請銀行貸款
【小題4】many good students
許多好學生
【小題5】用這種方式in this way
by this way 表示順便說一下
【小題6】句意：讓父母付 我的學費中的一半
把their改為my
【小題7】前文說我要去掙學費，說明我的父母不是很富有
故在are前面加not
【小題8】把beside改為besides
beside表示在。。旁邊
besides表示另外。。。，除了。。。。
【小題9】by是介詞，后面加doing
所以是teaching
【小題10】in order to+短語
in order that+句子
故這里應把to改為that
6．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在此處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出修改的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計分。
Which is known to all,nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.In it,we can not only read news at home and abroad but also get so much information as possible.We are often send emails to our classmates or our teachers or make telephone call to our families as well as our friends.However,we can go to school on the net,read different kinds of books and even teach myself English.We can also enjoy music,watching sports and play computer games on the net.We could do shopping even without leaving our homes.
【答案】
【小題1】Which改為As；
playing后加a
【小題2】In改為On；
so改為as
【小題3】去掉are；
call改為calls
【小題4】However改為Besides/Moreover； myself改為ourselves
【小題5】watching改為watch
【小題6】could改為can
【解析】
【小題1】定語從句，從句中缺少主語，只能用as做代詞，指代nowadays the Internet is playing more and more important part in our daily life.這句話，which不能指代一句話。
