2024屆廣東省高考英語二輪原創復習課件：基礎寫作
建議倡議 晨讀背誦 相關短語
1. stop littering around停止亂扔垃圾 2. have the responsibility to do sth. 有責任
做某事 3. log onto the website of登錄……的網站 4. gain more knowledge獲得更多知識(不用
learn) 5. enrich your mind豐富你的頭腦
6. obey the rules of the school遵守學校的
規章制度 7. don’t say dirty words不講臟話 8. have the chance to do sth. 有機會做某事 9. cover topics like…涵蓋的主題有…… 10. arouse one’s interest 激發某人的興趣 11. get involved in 參與;涉及 12. leave a deep impression on 給……留下深
刻的印象 13. make some suggestions 提一些建議 14. protect our environment 保護我們的環境 15. the environmental pollution 環境污染
16. be of great benefit to… 對……大有好處 17. care for others關愛他人 18. get well-prepared (for)(為……)做好充分
的準備 19. make a plan制訂計劃 20. the coming speech contest 即將到來的演
講比賽 21. be well-received 廣受歡迎 22. take my suggestion into consideration
考慮我的建議 23. create a better environment創造一個
更好的環境 24. as a result of the fact that之所以做某
事是基于…… 相關句式
1. 其主要原因是父母的壓力使他們幾乎沒有時間參加其他活動。 The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. 2. 我遲到的原因是沒趕上公共汽車。 The reason why I’m late is that I missed the bus.
3. 我喜歡它，主要有兩個原因。 I like it very much mainly for two reasons.
4. 在我看來，有三個原因。 In my opinion， there are three reasons for this. 5. 我的觀點是基于以下理由。 My views are based on the following reasons.
6. 其理由如下。 The reasons for this are as follows.
7. 因此，我建議你接受你朋友的建議。 So I suggest that you take your friends advice. 8. 這里我有幾條建議。 Here I have some suggestions.
9. 如果你能分擔更多的家務，如掃地、洗衣、做飯，那就更好了。 It would be better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning, washing and cooking. 技巧點撥
1. 寫建議倡議時，應開門見山指出寫作目的， 陳述建議或倡議的內容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about…/You have asked me for my advice on…and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me, I’d like to make some suggestions. I feel that it would be beneficial if… / I would like to suggest that…(建議信)等。另外，考生若是使用虛擬語氣的句子If I were you,
I would…也會讓文章增色不少。或In order to…,
I am going to make the following suggestions(倡議書)。 2. 使用advise， suggest， suggestion等時，要考慮虛擬語氣的使用。
3. 建議信屬于應用文，寫作時一般使用將來時或者一般現在時。 典型例題
倡議目的：為鼓勵同學們保持身體健康，學習好，生活愉快。 倡議內容：⑴ 一日三餐，早、中、晚按時適量；
⑵ 經常換食譜，飲食多樣化有益健康；
⑶ 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃熱量過高的食物，以增強體質，預防疾病；
⑷ 不吃過期或有毒的食品，以免損害健康，甚至危及生命。 ［寫作內容］ 假設你是高三⑹ 班的一名學生李華，請寫一篇倡議書，呼吁全體師生進行健康飲食，內容包括： Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. In order to enable all of us to keep fit, study well and lead a happy life, I am going to make the following suggestions.
First of all, we should have three meals every day, including breakfast, lunch and supper on time and in appropriate amount. Then we need to change our diet list constantly, since eating various kinds of food will do good to our health.
What is more, to prevent us from becoming weak and falling ill easily for lack of necessary nutrition, it is necessary
for us to eat more nutritious fruits and vegetables and less food with too many calories. Last but not least, we should never eat out-of-date or poisonous foods, for they are harmful to our health, or more seriously, some of them can be fatal.
課堂練習
Dear Xiaoming,
You told me that you are excited and nervous about the coming college life and I am glad to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. First of all, you’d better get familiar with the life on campus ahead of time by logging on the website of the university and asking senior schoolmates for help. Besides, you should read more books to gain more knowledge and enrich your mind.
In addition, it would be a good idea if you can make a plan about your university life and pay a visit to the campus to learn more about the surroundings. Get well prepared and wish you a great time in your new school!
Yours,
Li Hua 亮點點擊:
表達建議, 靈活運用了You should do, You had better do… It would be a good idea if…等; 另外, 巧用了起連接作用的表達,
如first of all, besides, in addition等，使句與 句之間連接得更自然。
課外作業
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union and I am calling on all of you to take part in the “Let’s Create a More Civilized Campus”. The activity is conducted to create a better learning and living environment, as a result of the fact that many of us leave litter everywhere, and damage the flowers, grass and trees from time to time.
I suggest that everyone should stop littering around to keep our campus clean as well as take good care of the green plants. Besides, we should obey the rules of the school, not being late for school or leaving earlier. What’s more important, we are supposed to stop saying dirty words or telling lies, and care for other classmates to make the school full of love.
I believe everyone, as a member of our school, should have the responsibility to take part in the activity to create a more civilized campus.
亮點點擊：本文難度在于整合信息，范文通過合理的整合，即倡議名稱和目的各為一句，然后用3句話覆蓋5個倡議內容。另外，靈活使用了表建議的句型be supposed
to do sth和suggest that sb. should do sth等。
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建議倡議 晨讀背誦 相關短語
1. stop littering around停止亂扔垃圾 2. have the responsibility to do sth. 有責任
做某事 3. log onto the website of登錄……的網站 4. gain more knowledge獲得更多知識(不用
learn) 5. enrich your mind豐富你的頭腦
6. obey the rules of the school遵守學校的
規章制度 7. don’t say dirty words不講臟話 8. have the chance to do sth. 有機會做某事 9. cover topics like…涵蓋的主題有…… 10. arouse one’s interest 激發某人的興趣 11. get involved in 參與;涉及 12. leave a deep impression on 給……留下深
刻的印象 13. make some suggestions 提一些建議 14. protect our environment 保護我們的環境 15. the environmental pollution 環境污染
16. be of great benefit to… 對……大有好處 17. care for others關愛他人 18. get well-prepared (for)(為……)做好充分
的準備 19. make a plan制訂計劃 20. the coming speech contest 即將到來的演
講比賽 21. be well-received 廣受歡迎 22. take my suggestion into consideration
考慮我的建議 23. create a better environment創造一個
更好的環境 24. as a result of the fact that之所以做某
事是基于…… 相關句式
1. 其主要原因是父母的壓力使他們幾乎沒有時間參加其他活動。 The main reason is that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. 2. 我遲到的原因是沒趕上公共汽車。 The reason why I’m late is that I missed the bus.
3. 我喜歡它，主要有兩個原因。 I like it very much mainly for two reasons.
4. 在我看來，有三個原因。 In my opinion， there are three reasons for this. 5. 我的觀點是基于以下理由。 My views are based on the following reasons.
6. 其理由如下。 The reasons for this are as follows.
7. 因此，我建議你接受你朋友的建議。 So I suggest that you take your friends advice. 8. 這里我有幾條建議。 Here I have some suggestions.
9. 如果你能分擔更多的家務，如掃地、洗衣、做飯，那就更好了。 It would be better if you could share more of the housework，such as cleaning, washing and cooking. 技巧點撥
1. 寫建議倡議時，應開門見山指出寫作目的， 陳述建議或倡議的內容。如：I am writing to give suggestions about…/You have asked me for my advice on…and I will try to make suggestions./ Thanks for trusting me, I’d like to make some suggestions. I feel that it would be beneficial if… / I would like to suggest that…(建議信)等。另外，考生若是使用虛擬語氣的句子If I were you,
I would…也會讓文章增色不少。或In order to…,
I am going to make the following suggestions(倡議書)。 2. 使用advise， suggest， suggestion等時，要考慮虛擬語氣的使用。
3. 建議信屬于應用文，寫作時一般使用將來時或者一般現在時。 典型例題
倡議目的：為鼓勵同學們保持身體健康，學習好，生活愉快。 倡議內容：⑴ 一日三餐，早、中、晚按時適量；
⑵ 經常換食譜，飲食多樣化有益健康；
⑶ 多吃水果蔬菜，少吃熱量過高的食物，以增強體質，預防疾病；
⑷ 不吃過期或有毒的食品，以免損害健康，甚至危及生命。 ［寫作內容］ 假設你是高三⑹ 班的一名學生李華，請寫一篇倡議書，呼吁全體師生進行健康飲食，內容包括： Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua from Class Six, Senior Three. In order to enable all of us to keep fit, study well and lead a happy life, I am going to make the following suggestions.
First of all, we should have three meals every day, including breakfast, lunch and supper on time and in appropriate amount. Then we need to change our diet list constantly, since eating various kinds of food will do good to our health.
What is more, to prevent us from becoming weak and falling ill easily for lack of necessary nutrition, it is necessary
for us to eat more nutritious fruits and vegetables and less food with too many calories. Last but not least, we should never eat out-of-date or poisonous foods, for they are harmful to our health, or more seriously, some of them can be fatal.
課堂練習
Dear Xiaoming,
You told me that you are excited and nervous about the coming college life and I am glad to make some suggestions which I hope can help you. First of all, you’d better get familiar with the life on campus ahead of time by logging on the website of the university and asking senior schoolmates for help. Besides, you should read more books to gain more knowledge and enrich your mind.
In addition, it would be a good idea if you can make a plan about your university life and pay a visit to the campus to learn more about the surroundings. Get well prepared and wish you a great time in your new school!
Yours,
Li Hua 亮點點擊:
表達建議, 靈活運用了You should do, You had better do… It would be a good idea if…等; 另外, 巧用了起連接作用的表達,
如first of all, besides, in addition等，使句與 句之間連接得更自然。
課外作業
Hello everyone,
I am Li Hua from the Students’ Union and I am calling on all of you to take part in the “Let’s Create a More Civilized Campus”. The activity is conducted to create a better learning and living environment, as a result of the fact that many of us leave litter everywhere, and damage the flowers, grass and trees from time to time.
I suggest that everyone should stop littering around to keep our campus clean as well as take good care of the green plants. Besides, we should obey the rules of the school, not being late for school or leaving earlier. What’s more important, we are supposed to stop saying dirty words or telling lies, and care for other classmates to make the school full of love.
I believe everyone, as a member of our school, should have the responsibility to take part in the activity to create a more civilized campus.
亮點點擊：本文難度在于整合信息，范文通過合理的整合，即倡議名稱和目的各為一句，然后用3句話覆蓋5個倡議內容。另外，靈活使用了表建議的句型be supposed
to do sth和suggest that sb. should do sth等。
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