2024屆安徽蕪湖市高考英語二輪書面表達選析（5）

　　安徽蕪湖市2024高考英語書面表達【二輪】選析（5）及參考范文

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　假如你叫李華，不久前參加了美國文化委員會舉辦的一次語言競賽活動，作為獲獎者你得到了暑假去美國免費學習英語的機會。以下是校方寄給你的課程安排表，請你閱讀課表，按要求給對方負責人Mr. Smith回一封信。

　　Schedule For EFLS Summer English Courses

　　注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數；

　　2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.詞數：100左右。

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

　　As for my choice of the two courses, I’d certainly prefer the three-week course for 40 hours, although it’s from July 12th to August 8. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I’d like to make a few new friends.

　　Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I’ve been learning English for six years and now I’m able to listen, speak, read and write. I hope to take this chance to improve spoken English as much as possible. I believe I’ll have a wonderful time in America this summer.

　　【2024界黑龍江省哈三中高三上第三次驗收考試】

　　書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假設你是張林，你班來自英國的交流學生John因病住院已兩周，請你用英文給他寫封信，主要內容包括：

　　詢問病情，表示關切；

　　介紹班級近期活動，學習等情況；

　　表達祝愿。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear John,

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Lin

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear John,

　　How are you getting along these days? It’s two weeks since you went to hospital. And we’re informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We’ve had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don’t worry about your studies, we assure you that we’ll help you to make up for the lessons you missed.

　　Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours

　　Zhang Lin

　　（2024新課標II）

　　一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”、請根據下列要求和你的想象完成短文、

　　家庭

　　工作

　　業余生活

　　注意：1、次數100左右；2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【考點】考察半開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】本文的話題是“十年后的我”，要求考生從家庭、工作和業余生活來想象十年以后的自己。文章應該使用將來時和第一人稱。要點：1.十年以后的生活和現在是完全不一樣，我會成為一個成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可愛的孩子。2.希望自己能夠在自己喜歡的計算機行業工作，做一個程序設計師。工作順利和同事相處融洽。3.在業余生活中經常參加鍛煉，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。

　　本文要求考生充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

　　【一句多譯】

　　我希望我可以在一家電腦公司里做程序設計師。

　　（1）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.

　　（2）I hope I will work in a company which produces computer, and I can design some kinds of very good computer。

　　【參考范文】

　　one Possible Version

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　cerely,

　　Li Yue

　　書面表達（滿分5分）One possible version:

　　Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which we conducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities.The results are as follows.

　　As is illustrated in the chart, both boys and girls have a strong preference for electronic or computer games with the percentage ranking first at 100%. More boys than girls enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, bike riding and watching TV or vedios as leisure activities, each accounting for nearly 40%, 70% and 80%. However, girls outnumber boys by almost 20% when it comes to art and craft.

　　We can draw a conclusion from this survey that according to the data, passive pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones and that those who choose creative pastimes are in the minority.

　　In my opinion, since the addiction to playing computer games or watching TV or videos is likely to do harm to children’s health, parents should be responsible for limiting the children’s time spent on passive leisure activities. In addition, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to develop their creativity and build up physical health.

　　(155 words)

　　書面表達(滿分25分)

　　11月的第四個星期四是感恩節。2011年的感恩節是11月24日。某英文雜志社要舉辦一次征文比賽活動。活動主題是：“Learn to be grateful".假如你叫魏來，請根據下列提示寫一篇120詞左右的短文投給該雜志社。

　　主要內容包括：

　　1.為什么要感恩？

　　2.對誰感恩？

　　3.感恩實際行動（給父母泡一杯熱茶或給他們一個擁抱；給老師作感恩卡；給同學和朋友發短信感謝他們的幫助……）

　　Learn to be grateful

　　The Thanksgiving Day in this year is on November 24th and

　　(已給出文章開頭，但是不計入總數)

　　【參考范文】

　　安徽蕪湖市2024高考英語書面表達【二輪】選析（5）及參考范文

　　2024書面表達訓練

　　假如你叫李華，不久前參加了美國文化委員會舉辦的一次語言競賽活動，作為獲獎者你得到了暑假去美國免費學習英語的機會。以下是校方寄給你的課程安排表，請你閱讀課表，按要求給對方負責人Mr. Smith回一封信。

　　Schedule For EFLS Summer English Courses

　　注意：1. 信的開頭已為你寫好，但不計入總詞數；

　　2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.詞數：100左右。

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　Thank you for your offer of inviting me to the free summer English course in your school.

　　As for my choice of the two courses, I’d certainly prefer the three-week course for 40 hours, although it’s from July 12th to August 8. This would allow me more time to see your beautiful country while learning the language. I’d like to make a few new friends.

　　Of all the subjects I’m learning at school, I like English best. I’ve been learning English for six years and now I’m able to listen, speak, read and write. I hope to take this chance to improve spoken English as much as possible. I believe I’ll have a wonderful time in America this summer.

　　【2024界黑龍江省哈三中高三上第三次驗收考試】

　　書面表達（滿分25分）

　　假設你是張林，你班來自英國的交流學生John因病住院已兩周，請你用英文給他寫封信，主要內容包括：

　　詢問病情，表示關切；

　　介紹班級近期活動，學習等情況；

　　表達祝愿。

　　注意：1.詞數100左右；

　　2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；

　　3.信的格式已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear John,

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Zhang Lin

　　【參考范文】

　　Dear John,

　　How are you getting along these days? It’s two weeks since you went to hospital. And we’re informed that you are diagnosed with a severe disease and have to be in hospital for a period of time. We are concerned about your health and miss you much. The students are engaged in reviewing lessons. We’ve had an exam and the majority of us have made progress steadily. Surrounded by an academic atmosphere, we encourage each other and spare no effort. Don’t worry about your studies, we assure you that we’ll help you to make up for the lessons you missed.

　　Cheer up! We are convinced and confident that you can overcome the disease and be with us soon. We are waiting for your backward!

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours

　　Zhang Lin

　　（2024新課標II）

　　一家英語報社向中學生征文，主題是“十年后的我”、請根據下列要求和你的想象完成短文、

　　家庭

　　工作

　　業余生活

　　注意：1、次數100左右；2、可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【考點】考察半開放性作文

　　【寫作指導】本文的話題是“十年后的我”，要求考生從家庭、工作和業余生活來想象十年以后的自己。文章應該使用將來時和第一人稱。要點：1.十年以后的生活和現在是完全不一樣，我會成為一個成年人，有了自己的家庭，甚至有了可愛的孩子。2.希望自己能夠在自己喜歡的計算機行業工作，做一個程序設計師。工作順利和同事相處融洽。3.在業余生活中經常參加鍛煉，如游泳，登山等等。假期里出去旅游，生活多姿多彩。

　　本文要求考生充分發揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。

　　【一句多譯】

　　我希望我可以在一家電腦公司里做程序設計師。

　　（1）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.

　　（2）I hope I will work in a company which produces computer, and I can design some kinds of very good computer。

　　【參考范文】

　　one Possible Version

　　I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

　　cerely,

　　Li Yue

　　書面表達（滿分5分）One possible version:

　　Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which we conducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities.The results are as follows.

　　As is illustrated in the chart, both boys and girls have a strong preference for electronic or computer games with the percentage ranking first at 100%. More boys than girls enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, bike riding and watching TV or vedios as leisure activities, each accounting for nearly 40%, 70% and 80%. However, girls outnumber boys by almost 20% when it comes to art and craft.

　　We can draw a conclusion from this survey that according to the data, passive pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones and that those who choose creative pastimes are in the minority.

　　In my opinion, since the addiction to playing computer games or watching TV or videos is likely to do harm to children’s health, parents should be responsible for limiting the children’s time spent on passive leisure activities. In addition, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to develop their creativity and build up physical health.

　　(155 words)

　　書面表達(滿分25分)

　　11月的第四個星期四是感恩節。2011年的感恩節是11月24日。某英文雜志社要舉辦一次征文比賽活動。活動主題是：“Learn to be grateful".假如你叫魏來，請根據下列提示寫一篇120詞左右的短文投給該雜志社。

　　主要內容包括：

　　1.為什么要感恩？

　　2.對誰感恩？

　　3.感恩實際行動（給父母泡一杯熱茶或給他們一個擁抱；給老師作感恩卡；給同學和朋友發短信感謝他們的幫助……）

　　Learn to be grateful

　　The Thanksgiving Day in this year is on November 24th and

　　(已給出文章開頭，但是不計入總數)

　　【參考范文】