四川省成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（3）

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　　成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（3）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作

　　重點詮釋：

　　1．議論文是以議論為主要表達方式的一種文體，它通過擺事實，講道理的方式來辯明是非曲折，從而表達出作者的觀點。它常由論點，論據和論證三部分構成。

　　2．在近幾年的高考書面表達中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現寫作材料的。

　　3．它要求語言必須簡練，準確，要盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語，可適當使用名言警句；以議論為主，輔之以敘述，說明和描寫等手法。

　　4．寫作時要圍繞中心論點展開議論，即論據和論證要圍繞論點展開。根據題目要求，有時需要從正反兩面來論述，可增強論證的力度。最后，可得出結論，照應開頭，形成一個有機的整體。

　　5．寫作時常以三段式的形式展開議論。

　　寫作典例：

　　暑假即將來臨，你班同學就假期計劃進行討論，提出了不同看法，請根據提示寫一篇英語短文，并談談你的看法。

　　? 優點缺點

　　呆在家中花費少，舒適方便不能親自了解外界

　　外出旅游增長知識，開闊眼界花費多，旅途不便

　　注意：1。詞數120左右（不含已寫好部分）

　　2．短文必須包括表中所列要點，可根據內容分段表述；

　　3．可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；

　　4．參考詞匯：眼界horizon(view)

　　案例分析

　　這是一篇典型的議論文體的寫作，它以表格的形式提出了論點（呆在家中的優點和缺點以及外出旅游的優點和缺點）和論據，還以文字提示形式提出了話題（假期計劃）及需要考生自由發揮的部分（你的看法），自己的看法可選擇上述中的任何一種，并就此發表個人的見解。本文的重點是表格中兩種方式的優，缺點，根據題目的特點，以三段式的形式來寫作比較好。

　　根據內容，盡管討論已經發生，但它是就一般的暑假假期計劃而進行的討論，沒有特定的時間界定，因而考生應以一般現在時和一般將來時為主。相當一部分考生用一般過去時進行論述，這會失掉較多的分數。從題目所給的開頭可知應用第一人稱來寫。

　　范文：

　　The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

　　Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it's both convenient and comfortable. What's more, they can save money for other purposes. But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world. However, others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling.

　　In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

　　針對練習

　　1．2002年普通高等學校招生全國英語統一考試書面表達試題

　　最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票？請你根據下表提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

　　60%的同學認為 40%的同學認為

　　1、不應收門票

　　2、公園是公眾休閑的地方

　　3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象 1、應收門票，但票價不宜高

　　2、支付園林工人工資

　　3、購新花木

　　注意：

　　1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數：100左右。 3、參考詞匯：門票：entrance fee

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees. They believed a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.

　　On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　2．當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：

　　1、看電影：省時、有趣、易懂

　　2、讀原著：細節更多、語言優美

　　3、我的看法及理由

　　注意：1、詞數：100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數）。

　　2、參考詞匯：original work 或book in the original （原著）

　　Film or book, which do you prefer?

　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

　　【參考范文】One possible Version

　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.

　　Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

　　Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what's more, I am able to better understand the author's ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.

　　***************************************************************結束

　　(2)(25 min.)

　　(2024·師大附中月考)請你簡要概述圖中所述資訊事件，并針對路人的反應發表自己的看法，如果你是在場的路人之一，你會怎么做？

　　_______________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　Since 13th Oct., 2011, China has been captivated by the distressing case of two-year-old girl Xiao Yueyue, who was coldly ignored by passers-by as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van. Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail, including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyue's body without so much as a glance.

　　In my eyes, those 18 people have shamed the whole of China. Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life, people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.

　　Any one of us might become the ‘passer-by’ at the side of Xiao Yueyue. If I were one of them, I would stop, move her out of the center of the road, or extend a hand of comfort, carrying her away from danger. Everybody should examine his own conscience: if we were in the same situation next time, how could we help ourselves? Only by lifting a hand to help others, we save ourselves.

　　*************************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　寫作話題議論篇

　　誠信是處世之本。但是在中學生當中，考試作弊、抄襲作業、欺騙家長和老師等現象屢見不鮮。請你對以上種種現象作簡要描述，并以How to guarantee honesty為題，從三個方面，談談如何保證學生做到誠信。

　　注意：

　　1．詞數：120左右；

　　2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　How to guarantee honesty

　　As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　【參考范文】------One possible version:

　　As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, it is nothing new that some middle school students cheat in exams, copy others’ homework and fool their teachers and parents. Therefore, how to guarantee honesty should come to our attention.

　　Personally, I think honesty education is necessary. For instance, courses on honesty can be offered to students; activities like story-telling and lectures are also worthy trying. With the concept of “being honest” rooted in their minds, honesty can be reflected in their daily life and study. Besides, related rules and regulations should be laid down. Detailed criteria should be applied to evaluate students in aspects such as homework, tests, relationship with teachers and parents.Then, strict measures should be carried out to punish those who cheat, and consequently, they must assume responsibility for their bad behavior, thus considerably reducing chances of cheating next time.

　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　本文是一篇開放式的作文，只提出了一個話題“How to guarantee honesty”,話題非常切合學生實際生活，讓每個學生都有話可寫。此題留給學生了一定的想象空間，有利于優生的發揮。文章的人稱以一、三人稱為主；時態為一般現在時；本文可用三段成文形式成文。內容要點： 1. 學生中存在的作弊現象；2. 解決這一現象的方法；3. 總結要點。

　　*******************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　請你根據右面表格中的內容寫一篇英語短文，介紹2010年上海世博會的情況。

　　注意：

　　1．短文需包括表格中的全部內容，可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；

　　2．詞數：100左右。

　　參考詞匯：

　　世博會the World Expo；遺產heritage；促進promote

　　時間 2010年5月1日至10月31日

　　地點上海

　　主題 Better City，Better Life

　　規模占地面積5．28平方公里，200多個國家及組織參展

　　目的 1．保護城市遺產，關注城市發展

　　2．尋求發展中國家城市的發展模式

　　3．促進人類社會的交流和理解

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【參考范文】---One possible version:

　　From May 1st to October 31st, 2010, Shanghai will be the focus of the whole world, for the World Expo is to be held there and then．Its theme is “Better City, Better Life”．

　　The large garden, which covers 5．28 square kilometers, will attract more than 200 countries and organizations to take part．There will be three main things to be done at the Expo．The first one is how to protect city heritage and concern about the development of cities．The second is to seek for the best way for city development in the developing countries．The last aims at promoting the communication and understanding of human society．

　　Shanghai is well prepared to welcome friends from all over the world．

　　本文是一篇介紹上海世博會的說明文。文章應使用第三人稱it或Shanghai；文章的時態應用一般現在時。根據表格內容按一定的邏輯順序展開介紹，把總體概括性內容劃為第一段，重點、核心內容放在第二段，最后總結全文。

　　成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（3）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作

　　重點詮釋：

　　2．在近幾年的高考書面表達中，其主要命題形式是以表格式和提綱式來呈現寫作材料的。

　　3．它要求語言必須簡練，準確，要盡可能避免使用口語，多用書面語，可適當使用名言警句；以議論為主，輔之以敘述，說明和描寫等手法。

　　5．寫作時常以三段式的形式展開議論。

　　寫作典例：

　　暑假即將來臨，你班同學就假期計劃進行討論，提出了不同看法，請根據提示寫一篇英語短文，并談談你的看法。

　　? 優點缺點

　　呆在家中花費少，舒適方便不能親自了解外界

　　外出旅游增長知識，開闊眼界花費多，旅途不便

　　注意：1。詞數120左右（不含已寫好部分）

　　2．短文必須包括表中所列要點，可根據內容分段表述；

　　3．可適當增加細節以使行文連貫；

　　4．參考詞匯：眼界horizon(view)

　　案例分析

　　范文：

　　The summer holiday is coming. Our class have a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

　　In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home, for I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV, and helping my parents with the housework.

　　針對練習

　　1．2002年普通高等學校招生全國英語統一考試書面表達試題

　　60%的同學認為 40%的同學認為

　　1、不應收門票

　　2、公園是公眾休閑的地方

　　3、如收票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象 1、應收門票，但票價不宜高

　　2、支付園林工人工資

　　3、購新花木

　　注意：

　　1、信的開頭已為你寫好。 2、詞數：100左右。 3、參考詞匯：門票：entrance fee

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we've had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　2．當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：

　　1、看電影：省時、有趣、易懂

　　2、讀原著：細節更多、語言優美

　　3、我的看法及理由

　　注意：1、詞數：100-120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數）。

　　2、參考詞匯：original work 或book in the original （原著）

　　Film or book, which do you prefer?

　　Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.

　　【參考范文】One possible Version

　　Some others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.

　　***************************************************************結束

　　(2)(25 min.)

　　(2024·師大附中月考)請你簡要概述圖中所述資訊事件，并針對路人的反應發表自己的看法，如果你是在場的路人之一，你會怎么做？

　　_______________________________________________________________________

　　參考范文

　　One possible version：

　　*************************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　寫作話題議論篇

　　注意：

　　1．詞數：120左右；

　　2．開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　How to guarantee honesty

　　As we all know, honesty is always an essential principle of living. Much to our regret, however, …

　　___________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　【參考范文】------One possible version:

　　Honesty is the best policy, which is what we should keep in mind all the time.

　　*******************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　請你根據右面表格中的內容寫一篇英語短文，介紹2010年上海世博會的情況。

　　注意：

　　1．短文需包括表格中的全部內容，可適當增加細節，使行文連貫；

　　2．詞數：100左右。

　　參考詞匯：

　　世博會the World Expo；遺產heritage；促進promote

　　時間 2010年5月1日至10月31日

　　地點上海

　　主題 Better City，Better Life

　　規模占地面積5．28平方公里，200多個國家及組織參展

　　目的 1．保護城市遺產，關注城市發展

　　2．尋求發展中國家城市的發展模式

　　3．促進人類社會的交流和理解

　　【參考范文】---One possible version:

　　From May 1st to October 31st, 2010, Shanghai will be the focus of the whole world, for the World Expo is to be held there and then．Its theme is “Better City, Better Life”．

　　Shanghai is well prepared to welcome friends from all over the world．