四川省成都市2024高考英語 書面表達一輪訓練（5）

　　成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（5）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達要求學生通過審查文字提示、圖畫、表格等后進行有一定控制性的寫作。學生在這種題型上常犯的錯誤之一就是：遺漏要點。

　　●難點磁場

　　6月9日，星期天，你和朋友本來約好去看球賽，但未看成。請你根據下列六幅圖畫寫一篇日記。

　　注意：（1）日記必須包括所有圖畫內容，可以適當增減細節，使日記連貫；

　　（2）詞數100左右。（3）開頭已給出。

　　June 9,Sunday

　　Fine

　　It is Sudnay today.…

　　●案例探究

　　10月23日（星期五）中午在你上學途中發生了一件事情。請根據下列圖畫用英語寫一篇日記。

　　注意：（1）日記須包括所有圖畫的內容，可適當增減細節，使日記連貫。

　　（2）詞數100左右。

　　命題意圖：本題考查學生的讀圖能力和運用邏輯講述故事、傳達主旨的能力。

　　錯解分析：（1）人稱、時態運用不準確；（2）主要內容遺漏。

　　解題技巧與方法：（1）細讀文字說明部分，弄清人稱、時間、事件背景；（2）仔細觀察每一幅圖，確定文章中心，確定內容要點：a.聽見喊救命，下水救女孩

　　b.好心人相助

　　c.送女孩去醫院

　　d.上課遲到

　　e.感謝信

　　f.受表揚；（3）依據要點寫出提綱，然后拓展成文；（4）檢查要點、格式、人稱、時態、動詞變化形式、標點符號等。

　　參考答案：

　　October 23rd

　　Friday

　　Fine

　　On my way to school at noon I heard loud shouts from the lake.I found a girl struggling in the water.I quickly jumped into the lake,swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank.A kind woman also came to help.We immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital.When I hurried to school,I was late for class.However,I didn抰 explain to my teacher what had happened.But to my surprise,a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon.So my teacher and clalssmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot.I felt a little shy but proud.

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　　高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作

　　高考英語作文范文

　　4． 最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

　　60％的同學認為 1．不應該收門票 2.公園是公眾休閑的地方 3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象

　　40％的同學認為 1．應收門票，但票價不要太高 2．支付園林工人工資 3．購新花木

　　注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2．詞數：100左右。

　　3．參考詞匯：門票---entrance fee

　　Dear Editor．

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．

　　Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

　　Yours truly,

　　*******************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　寫作【看圖寫話篇】

　　A

　　假如你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“A Volunteer Day”的英文稿件。

　　請根據以下四幅圖所提供的情景，敘述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活動的完整過程。

　　注意：

　　1、短文的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2、詞數不少于60。

　　提示詞語： patrol vt. 巡視 trim vt. 修整

　　

　　Possible version:

　　Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.

　　At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.

　　What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever. (184)

　　本文為一篇記敘文，其主要考查學生綜合運用語言的能力。本題相對比較容易，因為題目中提供了比較具體的情景，而且是學生常見的語言情景。但要注意表達要點要全面并按照時間順序展開敘述。

　　考生在寫作的時候，要盡量避免逐條翻譯以及過于平鋪直敘。在每一幅圖畫描述的過程中，可以在緊扣文章的基礎上，增加適當的發揮和議論。圖畫作文若想得到高分，一定要讓閱卷人看到文章的時候。有一種身臨其境，饒有興趣的感覺。

　　?還要注意表達內容要點時要使用豐富多樣的表達方式。包括詞匯多樣、句法多樣，段落結構多樣。以上是本題獲得高分數的關鍵。???

　　*************************************************************結束

　　高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

　　8. 假如你叫王平，根據圖表提示，給你的加拿大網友Smith 寫一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據自己的實際情況添加細節。

　　注意：1．詞數：100左右； 2．開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Smith,

　　How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.

　　We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.

　　In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Ping

　　*****************************************************結束

　　高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

　　9．根據下列圖示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”為題為你校英語報寫一篇短文,說明這一舉措以及你對學校實施這一舉措的認識.

　　要求: 1.詞數 100左右, 已給出部分不包括在內.

　　生詞: 評分體制grading system

　　參與participation（n.）① tests

　　④ class participation

　　② notes

　　⑤ team work

　　③ homework

　　The New grading system in Our School

　　In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.

　　The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.

　　In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.

　　********************************************************結束

　　成都市2024高考英語書面表達一輪訓練（5）附參考范文

　　高考英語書面表達要求學生通過審查文字提示、圖畫、表格等后進行有一定控制性的寫作。學生在這種題型上常犯的錯誤之一就是：遺漏要點。

　　●難點磁場

　　6月9日，星期天，你和朋友本來約好去看球賽，但未看成。請你根據下列六幅圖畫寫一篇日記。

　　注意：（1）日記必須包括所有圖畫內容，可以適當增減細節，使日記連貫；

　　（2）詞數100左右。（3）開頭已給出。

　　June 9,Sunday

　　Fine

　　It is Sudnay today.…

　　●案例探究

　　10月23日（星期五）中午在你上學途中發生了一件事情。請根據下列圖畫用英語寫一篇日記。

　　注意：（1）日記須包括所有圖畫的內容，可適當增減細節，使日記連貫。

　　（2）詞數100左右。

　　命題意圖：本題考查學生的讀圖能力和運用邏輯講述故事、傳達主旨的能力。

　　錯解分析：（1）人稱、時態運用不準確；（2）主要內容遺漏。

　　解題技巧與方法：（1）細讀文字說明部分，弄清人稱、時間、事件背景；（2）仔細觀察每一幅圖，確定文章中心，確定內容要點：a.聽見喊救命，下水救女孩

　　b.好心人相助

　　c.送女孩去醫院

　　d.上課遲到

　　e.感謝信

　　f.受表揚；（3）依據要點寫出提綱，然后拓展成文；（4）檢查要點、格式、人稱、時態、動詞變化形式、標點符號等。

　　參考答案：

　　October 23rd

　　Friday

　　Fine

　　On my way to school at noon I heard loud shouts from the lake.I found a girl struggling in the water.I quickly jumped into the lake,swam towards the drowning girl and carried her to the bank.A kind woman also came to help.We immediately sent the girl to the nearest hospital.When I hurried to school,I was late for class.However,I didn抰 explain to my teacher what had happened.But to my surprise,a letter of thanks to me was put up on the bulletin board in our school in the afternoon.So my teacher and clalssmates knew the whole thing and they praised me a lot.I felt a little shy but proud.

　　*******************************************************結束

　　高考英語書面表達講義：議論文寫作

　　高考英語作文范文

　　4． 最近，你校同學正在參加某英文報組織的一場討論。討論的主題是：公園要不要收門票?請你根據下表所提供的信息，給報社寫一封信，客觀地介紹討論情況。

　　60％的同學認為 1．不應該收門票 2.公園是公眾休閑的地方 3.如收門票，需建大門、圍墻，會影響城市形象

　　40％的同學認為 1．應收門票，但票價不要太高 2．支付園林工人工資 3．購新花木

　　注意：1．信的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2．詞數：100左右。

　　3．參考詞匯：門票---entrance fee

　　Dear Editor．

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks．

　　Dear editor,

　　I'm writing to tell you about the discussion we have had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.

　　60% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee do not meet peoples expectations, for a park is considered to be a place where the public can have a good time when they are not busy either at home or at work. If an entrance fee must be paid by the visitors for a park, it will be necessary to build a gate and surrounding walls. In the end a city will take on a bad look. 40% of us schoolmates think that an entrance fee can be accepted, but it must not be too expensive. The money from ticket selling can be used for paying the gardeners in the park and buying some other kinds of flowers and trees.

　　With regard to myself, I think an entrance fee is useful, for it can be used to protect a park. Do we share the same opinion, dear editor?

　　Yours truly,

　　*******************************************************結束

　　高考英語：寫作綜合訓練集

　　寫作【看圖寫話篇】

　　A

　　假如你是紅星中學高三一班的學生李華，為校刊英語園地寫一篇題為“A Volunteer Day”的英文稿件。

　　請根據以下四幅圖所提供的情景，敘述去年12月5日（The International Volunteer Day）你班志愿者日活動的完整過程。

　　注意：

　　1、短文的開頭已為你寫好。

　　2、詞數不少于60。

　　提示詞語： patrol vt. 巡視 trim vt. 修整

　　

　　Possible version:

　　Last December 5th our class organized an activity to celebrate the International Volunteer Day. We decided to spend the afternoon doing something for our school instead of having classes.

　　At the beginning of the first class in the morning, we gathered in our classroom and our monitor told us what we would do. As soon as we were divided into four groups we began to work separately. I was in Group 1. My classmates and I were responsible for the security of the school. We patrolled the campus with the guard to make sure everyone was safe at school. The students of Group 2 went to the garden to take care of the plants. Some were watering the flowers and trees while the others were trimming the bush. The third group helped the cook prepare for the dishes. They washed the vegetables and cut them into small pieces. Group 4 worked in the lab where they cleaned the test tubes and put them in good order. Having got the work done we all felt a sense of achievement. At the end of the last afternoon class we got together again in our classroom and elected the top ten volunteers for the day.

　　What a valuable experience I had in the high school! I’ll remember it forever. (184)

　　本文為一篇記敘文，其主要考查學生綜合運用語言的能力。本題相對比較容易，因為題目中提供了比較具體的情景，而且是學生常見的語言情景。但要注意表達要點要全面并按照時間順序展開敘述。

　　考生在寫作的時候，要盡量避免逐條翻譯以及過于平鋪直敘。在每一幅圖畫描述的過程中，可以在緊扣文章的基礎上，增加適當的發揮和議論。圖畫作文若想得到高分，一定要讓閱卷人看到文章的時候。有一種身臨其境，饒有興趣的感覺。

　　?還要注意表達內容要點時要使用豐富多樣的表達方式。包括詞匯多樣、句法多樣，段落結構多樣。以上是本題獲得高分數的關鍵。???

　　*************************************************************結束

　　高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

　　8. 假如你叫王平，根據圖表提示，給你的加拿大網友Smith 寫一封信，介紹你的寒假生活（共20天），可根據自己的實際情況添加細節。

　　注意：1．詞數：100左右； 2．開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Smith,

　　How are you? How time flies! Now the winter vacation was over and I have come back to school again.

　　We had 20 days in all for the holiday, during which we had the most important Chinese Festival—the Spring Festival. It took me nearly a week to visit my relatives and attend family parties, as it is a traditional custom in China. Of course, I spent most of the time doing my lessons. As you know, I will take the National Examinations in June and it’s only a few months away. Every day I did some English reading, practiced writing compositions, worked out a number of science problems and so on. When I got tired, I would do something to relax myself, like playing basketball with my friends, listening to music, surfing the Internet, playing games, and everything that helped to recover my energy.

　　In a word, I had a full, busy and wonderful holiday. How about you? I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Ping

　　*****************************************************結束

　　高考英語作文精選范文（看圖作文類）

　　9．根據下列圖示以 “The New Grading System in Our School”為題為你校英語報寫一篇短文,說明這一舉措以及你對學校實施這一舉措的認識.

　　要求: 1.詞數 100左右, 已給出部分不包括在內.

　　生詞: 評分體制grading system

　　參與participation（n.）① tests

　　④ class participation

　　② notes

　　⑤ team work

　　③ homework

　　The New grading system in Our School

　　In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.

　　The students’ final score will be made up of 5 parts. About 30% of it will come from their test results. The rest of the score is decided by the performances of the students in the following parts: 20% comes from your notes, and another 20% is decided by how you do your homework. If you take an active part in classroom activities, you can get another 20% of the score. Teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.

　　In my opinion, our school has made a good decision. This new grading system will certainly help to improve ourselves on all sides.

　　********************************************************結束