湖南省長沙縣實驗中學2024屆高三英語二輪復習書面表達復習重點話題指導專題21 語言學習話題指導（教師版）

　　實例指導—English Learning

　　【寫作任務】

　　下周有一節英語寫作課,老師要求每位學生提前準備一篇演講稿,介紹一下自己在英語寫作中的心得體會,和同學們在課堂上交流,題目自擬。(詞數:120左右)

　　【寫作指導】

　　1. 這篇習作是典型的開放式作文,要求學生將自己在英語寫作中的心得體會用英語寫出來,不限要點。

　　2. 文章的題材為演講稿,結構宜用總——分——總的結構。第一部分重點在引出話題,第二部分細述寫作中的心得體會,第三部分對整篇文章進行總結概括,最好能夠做到首尾呼應。

　　3. 文章宜用第一人稱,時態的使用則比較靈活,過去時,一般現在時或現在完成時均可適時使用。

　　【學生習作】

　　????文章首尾呼應,用詞生動,內容重點突出,聽后會給人留下深刻的印象。 ????難能可貴的是,可以看出這篇習作確實是作者的經驗之談,而且這些經驗亦有可鑒之處。

　　本篇習作結構完整,層次清晰,語法使用基本正確,可以看出作者有一定的英文功底。但也存在一些不足之處。 ????重點不夠突出,文章只是將寫一篇作文的基本步驟敘述出來,沒有側重點。也沒有寫出自己對英文寫作的

　　獨到見解。作為介紹寫作經驗的演講稿,缺少對聽眾足夠的吸引力。另外作為演講稿開頭缺少呼語,結尾缺少結束語。

　　【范文欣賞】

　　How to Improve English Writing Ability

　　Hello, everyone! I’m glad to share with you my thought about English. I once thought it was rather difficult to write an English composition, but now I am confident that I can do a good job. Let me share my experience with you.

　　I have a notebook where I collect all of the good sentences I read in the books. I divide the notebook into several parts, such as Travel, Sports, Technology, and School Life and so on. Then I write good sentences in each part. Most importantly, I read them every now and then so that I can remember more and more good sentences. As a result, when I begin to write a composition, these sentences naturally flow out.

　　I hope that my experience can help you. I also hope that I can learn more from everybody here. Thank you all.

　　實例指導2— The English Corner

　　【寫作任務】

　　自從實行素質教育以來，學生的課余時間多了。為豐富學生課余生活，開展別具特色的第二課堂，許多學校組織了英語角活動。請以The English Corner 為題，用英語寫一篇120――150 詞的短文，談談英語角的作用以及應該如何利用英語角。文章開頭已給出，不計入總詞數。

　　【寫作指導】

　　【參考范文】

　　The nglish Corner

　　With the change of education policies, many schools organize the English Corner to enrich the students school life. The English Corner provides a sort of situation where English teachers and learners can exchange their viewpoints with each other in English. We students can take advantage of these opportunities to practice our English. Therefore, many people would like to attend the English Corner.

　　Taking part in the English Corner is helpful to our English study. Firstly, by talking with other people, we can develop our interests in English study and at the same time make a lot of friends. Secondly, through practicing talking with others in English we can improve our oral English.

　　Yet. while taking part in the English Corner, we must pay attention to the following aspects: first of all, we must not speak Chinese at the Corner. That means we must speak English from the very beginning till the end. Secondly, we must not be afraid of making mistakes. Be active! Thirdly, learn from other people.

　　lot of friends.

　　實例指導3—漢語？英語？

　　【寫作任務】

　　目前全世界許多國家都開設了漢語課程，于是有人提出：漢語的影響越來越大，中國人沒有必要再學習英語。請寫一篇120—150詞的英語短文，發表你對此觀點發表你的看法。

　　【寫作指導】

　　本文要求寫一篇議論性質的文章，符合半開放式高考作文的命題特點；根據寫作要求，文章應該由以下幾個部分組成：

　　一、提出論點。贊成這種觀點，可以用：I agree．/ I thjnk so．／I am in favor of this kind of view．／I support this idea．等句型；反對這種觀點，可以用：However，I don't think so．／I don't agree with these people。／In my opinion，this kind of view is wrong．等句型。

　　二、陳述理由。支持觀點，可以舉下列理由：1. 漢語可以逐步走向世界；2．學英語耗費時間、精力太大；反對觀點，可以舉下列理由：1．英語仍然是世界上使用最廣泛的語言，目前無法取代；2．學好英語可以使中國更好地走向世界，讓漢語更加流行。當然，這里只

　　是做個提示，同學們可以想出更多支持或者反對的理由，但在陳述的時候要注意條理性，使用表示順序的連接詞語，如：first of all; secondly ; besides ; what's more; on the other hand等。

　　三、總結全文。支持觀點：In a wotd，it is not necessary for the Chinese students to learn English any more．反對觀點：In conclusion，I learning English is still a must for Chinese students today .要簡潔明了!

　　1．亮點點擊：這篇習作緊扣題目要求，有論點，有論據，較好地完成了寫作要求規定的任務，使用了比較高級的句子如：Besides，learning Englishcan help the Chinese people communicate with people in other countries more easily .顯示了小作者不錯的語言功底。

　　2．誤點點撥：語言錯誤影響了文章質量：①處spreaded應改為spread，動詞spread的過去時、過去分詞都是spread②處agree后應力加wlth；③處percents應改為percent。

　　3．畫龍點睛： China is opening to the outside world. English is very important; It can't be replaced by Chinese.這幾個句子太散了，可以合成一個句子：Since China is openlng to the outside wotld，English is very important to China and it can't be replaced by Chinese．這樣就通順多了；About 70 percent of the artlcles are published in English．前邊應該加上For example, For instance，使之更好地與上一句銜接。

　　【參考范文】

　　It is reported that Chinese is being taught in many countries in the world now, which means the influence of Chinese is growing. So some people say it is not necessary for the Chinese students to learn English any more. But I don't agree with these people because English is still the most widely used language in the world nowadays. For instance, about 70 percent of the articles in the world today are published in English, which suggests that English can't be replaced by Chinese and other languages. On the other hand, learning English will help us to communicate with

　　people in other countries more easily and help to strgthen the influence of Chinese on the other part of the World. In a word, learning English is still very necessary for us now.

　　實例指導4— 漢語言學習

　　【寫作任務】

　　假如你是李華，最近，你的英國筆友Jack發來郵件說他們學校新開了漢語課，他想報名參加，請你就如何學好漢語給他提幾條建議。請就此給他回一封郵件，郵件中須包括以下內容。

　　1、對他學漢語表示鼓勵

　　2、提幾條建議：首先要有興趣和恒心；要掌握豐富的漢字、詞語和句型；要抓住一切可能的機會練習。

　　可適當發揮，使語句連貫。字數：120-150

　　一般現在時為主。

　　第二步

　　圍繞主題，提煉要點，編擬提綱

　　第一段：先交代收到的情況（① 很高興收到你的郵件，從中獲悉你校要開設漢語課，然后轉移筆墨提及自己的看法（② 選擇該課程是個好主意）。

　　第二段：具體分析其原因（③學習外語會使我們理解異域的文化④會幫助我們和更多的人交流）。

　　第三段：提出學好外語的建議（⑤建議一：需要興趣和恒心，原因是⑥外語難學；⑦ 建議二：掌握豐富的漢字、詞語和句型；⑧建議三：要抓住一切可能的機會練習）。最后總結 （⑨只有用這種方式，漢語才能學好）。

　　第三步 分析要點及提綱，提煉關鍵單詞和短語。

　　要點序號 關鍵單詞和短語

　?、?Glad to, offer, Chinese courses

　?、?I think, it’s a good idea for sb. to do sth.

　?、?Learning a foreign language, make, have an access to, a different culture

　?、?It goes without saying that…, help, communicate with, easily

　　⑤ Succeed, without interest or perseverance

　?、?It is hard to…, especially Chinese

　?、?Possess, plenty of Chinese characters, as well as, phrases, sentences

　?、?the most important thing, practice, whenever and wherever, have a chance

　?、?Only in this way, learn Chinese, successfully

　?、?The most important thing for you to learn Chinese is to practise it whenever and wherever you have a chance.

　　⑨ Only in this way can you learn Chinese successfully.

　　【學生習作】

　　Dear Jack,

　　Glad to receive your last email, from which I know your school offers Chinese courses for all the students. I think it is a good idea for you to choose them.

　　As far as I’m concerned, learning a foreign language makes us have an access to a different culture. Allowing for Chinese is becoming more and more popular, it goes without saying that learning Chinese can help you communicate with many people easily.

　　However, it is usually hard to learn a foreign language, especially Chinese. So, first of all, you cannot succeed without interest or perseverance. Besides, you also need to possess plenty of Chinese characters as well as phrases and sentences, on which your learning is based. But in my opinion, the most important thing for you to learn Chinese is to practice it whenever and wherever you have a chance. Only in this way can you learn Chinese successfully.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【范文點評】

　　該文要求就Jack的郵件回一封郵件，鼓勵他學習漢語，并就此提幾條建議，通讀全文，可知該文很好地完成了寫作任務。作者注重使用地道的英語進行表達，如多次使用了精彩短語（下劃線）、句型（斜體）。為使文章連貫，作者增加了過渡詞句（加粗）。句式富有變化，注意了句式的多樣性。人稱和時態使用恰當，措辭委婉客氣，格式正確，稱得上是篇佳作。

　　【句型拓展】寫“社會問題”類的作文還可以用到以下句型：

　　1. It is ages since I received your last letter.

　　2. Thank you for your….

　　3. Some people who are very intelligent and successful in their field find it difficult to succeed in language learning.

　　4. Practice speaking the language every day.

　　實例指導5---如何寫英語發言稿

　　[寫作話題]

　　你班下周要舉行一次英語班會，主題為“Enjoy Spots，Enioy Life ，請根據以下提示寫一篇詞數為120--150的英語發言稿，談談體育運動對健康的重要生。

　　提示：

　　1．體育運動能促進人體各系統器官的機能和協調，使我們更健康；

　　2．體育運動能促進大腦內啡肽(endorphins)分泌，這種物質會使人心情振奮、精神愉悅；

　　3．戶外活動可以讓我們感受大自然之關并呼吸新鮮空氣，使我們頭腦清醒。

　　本篇寫作屬于話題作文。形式是發言稿，屬于寫作中的應用文體。feel relaxed／energetic感到輕松／精力充沛

　　get close to…接近……

　　take in fresh air讓呼吸新鮮空氣

　　outdoor sports戶外運動

　　take an active part in…積極參與

　　benefit sb．對某人有益

　　clear-headed 頭腦清醒的

　　essential

　　非常重要的

　　問候不同聽眾: Hello, everyone. / Ladies and gentlemen / Dear friends / Comrades and friends / Dear classmates / Boys and girls / My fellow classmates 等。

　　結束語：I hope ... / I think we should ...'That's all. Thank you.

　　Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life

　　Dear classmates,

　　As is known to all, playing sports regularly is one of the best ways to keep healthy. First, sports give us ,aluable practice in helping every part of our bodies vorking together. Therefore, sports can help build our bodies and prevent us from falling ill. Also, sports cause he body to produce endorphins, chemicals that help us feel peaceful and happy. This is why sports have beome the most popular form of relaxation that almost everyone

　　can enjoy. In addition, taking part in outdoor sports, we get closer to nature and take in fresh air. The beauty of nature will keep us clear-headed, which is essenfial to our health and helps us feel energetic in our study and work.

　　In short, sports benefit us in many ways. I hope evryone can take an active part in sports and enjoy life every day.

　　實例指導6

　　Enjoy Your Reading

　　寫作任務: ????你的加拿大筆友Tony來信詢問你有關讀書的情況,他想知道你是否喜歡讀書,你喜歡讀哪類書籍,你從閱讀活動中獲得了些什么。請你寫一封120-150詞的回信,告訴他"書籍是人類進步的階梯,讀書能使人受益",并就他提出的問題加以解答并說明理由。書信的開頭和結尾已經寫好,不計入總詞數。

　　Dear Tony, ???I’m very glad to receive your letter and happy to talk about reading with you.

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　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【寫作指導】

　　1. 確定寫作目的和主要話題。本寫作任務要求給筆友寫封回信,回答有關"讀書"的問題,包括"喜歡讀書嗎？""喜歡讀哪類書籍？""你從閱讀活動中獲得了些什么？"討論有關閱讀的意義,發表自己的觀點和看法。書信的格式已經給出,不用再考慮。文章第一句提到了來信和寫作的目的,所以接下來銜接的內容非常重要。可以直接回答問題,也可以先分析閱讀的意義,自然而然地引出問題的答案和分析。

　　2. 合理謀篇布局,確定文章結構。文章可以采用傳統的三段式結構:首先明確提出自己的觀點,回答提到的幾個問題；然后陳述理由,分析問題,論證自己的觀點；最后作總結,進一步強調自己的觀點,也可以提出建議或意見,以供對方參考或借鑒。

　　初稿:

　　Dear Tony, ????I’m very glad to receive your letter and happy to talk about reading with you. ????As we all know, books are of great help to the development of our human beings, and we can benefit a lot from reading. I like reading very much, especially the story books, varying from Chinese stories to English stories. ????On the one hand, I can enjoy myself by reading the stories. They help me feel relaxed after a long time of studying as well. On the other hand, I can learn a lot of knowledge from books, which can help enlarge my vocabulary and improve my reading and writing. Some moving stories are of great help to my character training, from which I learned what love is and what happiness is and so on.

　　1. 初稿覆蓋了所有內容要點,根據提示內容,基本完成了寫作任務,將有效信息很好地傳達了出來。文章應用了較高級的表達詞匯,語法結構和詞匯方面雖然有些許錯誤,但未對全篇內容的表達造成影響,顯示了作者較強的語言運用能力。另外,文章還有效地運用了語句間的連接成分,行文連貫,過渡自然,全文結構緊湊。

　　2. 文章存在的問題:

　　①文章最后的結尾顯得有些突然,應該用一個簡單的句子作一個總結。

　?、谖恼伦詈笏坪蹩桃鈱⒕渥訌碗s化了,顯得有些不太恰當,因為這是一封信,使用通俗的句子更合適。

　　成稿:

　　Dear Tony, ????I’m very glad to receive your letter and happy to talk about reading with you. ????As we all know, books are of great help to human development and we can benefit a lot from reading. I like reading very much, especially the story books, varying from Chinese stories to English stories. ??? On the one hand, I enjoy reading the stories, which makes me relaxed after a long time of studying. On the other hand, I can learn a lot of knowledge from these books, which can help enlarge my vocabulary and improve my reading and writing abilities. Some stories have taught me about love, happiness and so on. ????On the whole, reading is very important to me. It has become a part of my life. And how about you? I hope you can share your ideas with me next time. ??? Best wishes!