考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改47

　　考研英語待批改作文：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I am an undergraduate student form(from) the university(說明是具體哪所大學). I find your company is looking for an editor about a new book. Then I write this letter and apply for get(介詞后用動名詞，也可以去掉這個詞) this position. I believe I am qualified for it. To begin with, I study this profession and have a long systemic education. What is more, I went to practice in the publication among the(改成介詞on) holidays, so I have a multiple of (去掉)experiences in the field of editor. Last but not least is that I have a strong interesting about(改成interest in，這里需要名詞) my specialty, then I have confidence to play a good role in the work. So, I would express my appreciation if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your replay. Yours sincerely, Li Ming (落款部分位于右下角) 點評：6-7分寫的還可以，語法問題有點多。