2024年2月16日雅思寫作A類大作文回顧
作文題目：
Some people think all lawbreakers should be taken in to prison, others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, being work to do which is beneficial for local community). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
一些人認為所有的罪犯都應該送進監獄，而其他人卻認為還有其他好的方式代替入獄懲罰。請就兩個觀點進行討論，并提出自己的觀點。
題型類別:表立場觀點類
考題難度：同2024.05.12
犯罪率傳統經典題目
寫作解析：
監獄的功能：1威懾潛在犯罪者；2讓犯罪者付出代價；3平衡受害者心理
監獄的缺陷：費納稅人錢
懲罰犯人的方式：1道德教育比如讀圣經；2就業技能培訓，幫助犯人重拾生活信心與能力；3減少歧視避免二次犯罪
犯罪的原因歸納：1減少貧富差距與貧困人口；2提供免費primary secondary education；3社會陷阱與不良信息；4家庭教育
寫作指導：
首段，贊同題目觀點；
第二段，罪犯在監獄里什么都不做是花著納稅人的錢的；
第三段，沒有接受教育和不幸的家庭是原因，要教育，要給他們機會；
第四段；當然要懲罰，但懲罰和治療并用。末段總結。
范文指導：
How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face. Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done. Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.
First of all, consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail. It doesnt seem like a good use of public money if the people dont actually get any better. Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.
In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didnt have a good education or happy family. So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way. If they do this, they wont need crime. Surly everyone deserves a second chance.
Of course this does not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals. Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated. If we make an investment in them and show compassion, most will be able to make a new start.
To summarize, we must make more of an effort to go to the root of the problem. We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training. By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.
作文題目：
Some people think all lawbreakers should be taken in to prison, others believe that there are better alternatives, (for example, being work to do which is beneficial for local community). Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
一些人認為所有的罪犯都應該送進監獄，而其他人卻認為還有其他好的方式代替入獄懲罰。請就兩個觀點進行討論，并提出自己的觀點。
題型類別:表立場觀點類
考題難度：同2024.05.12
犯罪率傳統經典題目
寫作解析：
監獄的功能：1威懾潛在犯罪者；2讓犯罪者付出代價；3平衡受害者心理
監獄的缺陷：費納稅人錢
懲罰犯人的方式：1道德教育比如讀圣經；2就業技能培訓，幫助犯人重拾生活信心與能力；3減少歧視避免二次犯罪
犯罪的原因歸納：1減少貧富差距與貧困人口；2提供免費primary secondary education；3社會陷阱與不良信息；4家庭教育
寫作指導：
首段，贊同題目觀點；
第二段，罪犯在監獄里什么都不做是花著納稅人的錢的；
第三段，沒有接受教育和不幸的家庭是原因，要教育，要給他們機會；
第四段；當然要懲罰，但懲罰和治療并用。末段總結。
范文指導：
How to handle criminals is a problem that all countries and societies face. Traditionally, the approach has been to punish them by placing them in prisons to pay for what they have done. Some, however, advocate for trying to make them better with training and education and it seems they may have a good point.
First of all, consider all the money that we have to spend to lock people up in jail. It doesnt seem like a good use of public money if the people dont actually get any better. Because most criminals eventually are let out of prison, our focus should be on making them better citizens.
In fact, the reason why many people end up in jail in the first place is because they didnt have a good education or happy family. So if they can learn job skills they perhaps can find work and feel they can contribute in a positive way. If they do this, they wont need crime. Surly everyone deserves a second chance.
Of course this does not mean that we should be too lenient on criminals. Those who commit crime should still be punished, but during their punishment they should also be treated. If we make an investment in them and show compassion, most will be able to make a new start.
To summarize, we must make more of an effort to go to the root of the problem. We need to treat criminals as patients and give them the medicine they need: education and training. By giving people the skills for a second chance we can make our society safer and healthier.
