考研英語復習資料考研英語作文范文的批改8

　　Yous sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　考研英語作文批改點評如下：

　　Dear Sir or Madam, I am a youngman(young man分開寫) who has just graduated from university. I went to you(應該用所有格your) website and got the information that you are in need of an editor. And I would like to apply for that job which I consider I am equal to. I went to the sociaty(拼寫錯誤society) for just couples of months.(表達比較中式化) Although I have no(應該是dont have) that much formal working experience, however,(去掉，前邊已經有although，英語中although不與but、however等連用，because不與so連用)I have been an intern for a large newspaper for nearly half of(去掉，直接用half a year就可以了) a year. And I knew what an editor should do very much. Whats more, I am a hard-working man, I would cherish every single opportunity if you are so kind to offer me. I would like to express my appreciation of your consideration. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yous(Yours) sincerely, Li Ming 點評：5-6分主要問題是表達上比較中式化，同時要注意單詞、詞組的使用問題。