英語六級作文點睛題（5）
到現在一篇沒練的同學，至少練一下前四道。練過的同學，可以選擇自己沒練過的題型練練。各種題型都練過的同學，可以側重看看這些模擬題范文里的論據和關鍵的話題詞，也可以用默寫或對譯的方式來檢查自己的語言質量。想要瞞天過海、僥幸過關的同學可以只背前四篇里面劃線的部分。
你要說押題押中的可能性有多大，我即使告訴你有百分之九十九也沒用，因為你很可能死在那剩余的百分之一上，那百分之一可能是像四級曾經考過的事故見證書，導游詞，招新啟示，有個錘子模板可用？
所以，在背誦一些模板句墊底的基礎上，更應該動手練幾篇，找找寫作的手感，夯實一批自己喜歡用的好詞好句，暴露自己的常見詞匯和語法問題，然后通過自學庫和對照范文來改正。
寫作模擬題
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1）Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicFighting Drug Abuse. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:
2) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Your essay should start with a brief descriptionof the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
3)Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Your essay should start with a brief descriptionof the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
參考范文
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1.Fighting Drug Abuse
It can be seen from the charts thatdrug abuse has become a grave problem in China. As we can see from the first chart on the left,in 1996, there were only slightly more than 200 thousand drug addicts, while in 2011 the number soared toover 1,000 thousand. The other chart conveys amore shocking message:about 70 percent of the drug addicts in China now are young people aged under35.
A number of factors could account for this dramatic change, but the following might be the most critical ones. In the first place,as China opens its door to the outside world, its people tend to be influenced by western values and life styles. More or less, the drug addicts in China are imitating their counterparts in the U.S. and other western industrialized countries. In the second place,with China transforming from a planned economy to a market-oriented one, there has appeared a vacuum in some peoples faiths, especially in the youngsters. Confronted with increasingly fierce competition in study and work, many of them resort to drug abuse as a way of relaxation.
In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For one thing,it is imperative that pertinent laws should be worked out and rigidly enforced to crack down ondrug dealing, cutting off the supply of drugs. For another, a deep-going and ever-lasting campaign should be launched tohelp the young establish the right philosophy and world view. Only with these measures taken can we expect a brighter future.
2. On the Relationship between People
This is a simple but meaningful drawing. // This is an artfully designed and thought-provoking drawing. As we can see,the man living on the upper floor of a building is watering a plant, whose roots have grown downward so far that they have barred the window of an old man living downstairs, making his apartment a prison.
Simple as the drawing is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Evidently, it is meant to reveal the fact thatsome people tend to base their own happiness on others bitterness. Actually, our society abounds with such people. It never too rare to see some peoplewalking their dogs outdoors and let them shit everywhere. Nor is it to find somehonking the horn of their cars while driving in the street, disturbing people living around. Actually, what these people do has more or less infringed upon others interest. They should either be condemned or be punished.
To sum up, this picture is indeed instructive. It is essential totake others benefits into consideration if we want to see a harmonious society. As is often advocated, we should regard it as an honor to help each other and a shame to benefit oneself at the expense of others.
3．Perseverance: Key to Success
This is a wittily designed and inspiring picture. As it shows,is searching for water. He has already dug many holes in the ground but none of them has reached the water. In fact, the water is just a few inches below the bottom of one of the holes. With a cigarette between his lips and his spade in his hands, he walks away leisurely, saying to himself in mind that there is no water here and I shall try another place.
Simple as the story is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Obviously, it is meant to tell us about the importance ofperseverance on our way to success. There is no denying the fact that nowadays an increasing number ofyouth lack the spirit of persisting on.A case in point is thatmany of them change their jobs or careers too frequently. Faced with a bit setback or difficulty, they choose to quit and change their goals. If the situation goes as it is, the consequence will be disastrous not only for individuals but for the society as a whole.
Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that the lack ofperseverance is a major barrier on our way to success. In a word, we should truly understand the profound meaning of the picture and try various means to cultivate ourperseverance.
到現在一篇沒練的同學，至少練一下前四道。練過的同學，可以選擇自己沒練過的題型練練。各種題型都練過的同學，可以側重看看這些模擬題范文里的論據和關鍵的話題詞，也可以用默寫或對譯的方式來檢查自己的語言質量。想要瞞天過海、僥幸過關的同學可以只背前四篇里面劃線的部分。
你要說押題押中的可能性有多大，我即使告訴你有百分之九十九也沒用，因為你很可能死在那剩余的百分之一上，那百分之一可能是像四級曾經考過的事故見證書，導游詞，招新啟示，有個錘子模板可用？
所以，在背誦一些模板句墊底的基礎上，更應該動手練幾篇，找找寫作的手感，夯實一批自己喜歡用的好詞好句，暴露自己的常見詞匯和語法問題，然后通過自學庫和對照范文來改正。
寫作模擬題
?。ㄎ澹﹫D表型
1）Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topicFighting Drug Abuse. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words, and base your composition on the chart and the outline given below:
2) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Your essay should start with a brief descriptionof the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
3)Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. Your essay should start with a brief descriptionof the picture. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
參考范文
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1.Fighting Drug Abuse
It can be seen from the charts thatdrug abuse has become a grave problem in China. As we can see from the first chart on the left,in 1996, there were only slightly more than 200 thousand drug addicts, while in 2011 the number soared toover 1,000 thousand. The other chart conveys amore shocking message:about 70 percent of the drug addicts in China now are young people aged under35.
A number of factors could account for this dramatic change, but the following might be the most critical ones. In the first place,as China opens its door to the outside world, its people tend to be influenced by western values and life styles. More or less, the drug addicts in China are imitating their counterparts in the U.S. and other western industrialized countries. In the second place,with China transforming from a planned economy to a market-oriented one, there has appeared a vacuum in some peoples faiths, especially in the youngsters. Confronted with increasingly fierce competition in study and work, many of them resort to drug abuse as a way of relaxation.
In view of the seriousness of the situation, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. For one thing,it is imperative that pertinent laws should be worked out and rigidly enforced to crack down ondrug dealing, cutting off the supply of drugs. For another, a deep-going and ever-lasting campaign should be launched tohelp the young establish the right philosophy and world view. Only with these measures taken can we expect a brighter future.
2. On the Relationship between People
This is a simple but meaningful drawing. // This is an artfully designed and thought-provoking drawing. As we can see,the man living on the upper floor of a building is watering a plant, whose roots have grown downward so far that they have barred the window of an old man living downstairs, making his apartment a prison.
Simple as the drawing is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Evidently, it is meant to reveal the fact thatsome people tend to base their own happiness on others bitterness. Actually, our society abounds with such people. It never too rare to see some peoplewalking their dogs outdoors and let them shit everywhere. Nor is it to find somehonking the horn of their cars while driving in the street, disturbing people living around. Actually, what these people do has more or less infringed upon others interest. They should either be condemned or be punished.
To sum up, this picture is indeed instructive. It is essential totake others benefits into consideration if we want to see a harmonious society. As is often advocated, we should regard it as an honor to help each other and a shame to benefit oneself at the expense of others.
3．Perseverance: Key to Success
This is a wittily designed and inspiring picture. As it shows,is searching for water. He has already dug many holes in the ground but none of them has reached the water. In fact, the water is just a few inches below the bottom of one of the holes. With a cigarette between his lips and his spade in his hands, he walks away leisurely, saying to himself in mind that there is no water here and I shall try another place.
Simple as the story is, the message it conveys is profound and far-reaching. Obviously, it is meant to tell us about the importance ofperseverance on our way to success. There is no denying the fact that nowadays an increasing number ofyouth lack the spirit of persisting on.A case in point is thatmany of them change their jobs or careers too frequently. Faced with a bit setback or difficulty, they choose to quit and change their goals. If the situation goes as it is, the consequence will be disastrous not only for individuals but for the society as a whole.
Bringing what has been discussed into a conclusion, we may say that the lack ofperseverance is a major barrier on our way to success. In a word, we should truly understand the profound meaning of the picture and try various means to cultivate ourperseverance.
