12月英語四級考前作文預測及范文
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近幾年大學校園內出現考證熱
2)產生這一現象的原因
3)你的看法
Certificate Craze On Campus
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析產生這種現象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談我對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述近幾年大學校園內的考證熱分析越來越多的大學生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述我對大學生考證熱的看法。
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?
There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
【亮點點評】
祈使句使用恰當。randomly意為隨意地，隨機地。
限定詞使用恰當，使文章表達更嚴謹，增強了說服力。
that引導同位語從句，修飾the idea。
設問句引出原因，容易引起注意。
強調句型，此處是強調主語。
which引導非限制性定語從句，充當介詞賓語。
用于引出我的觀點。
當談到或提及時。
since引導原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為既然。
只是，僅僅。而不是。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。
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2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability.
臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。
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3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates
臨摩：我認為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. It is a sad but true fact that divorce rate is on the rise.
2. In the past three decades, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects, among which are the improvements in health domain.
3. From my point of view, it is more important for us to enhance our practical abilities but not to get more certificates.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近幾年大學校園內出現考證熱
2)產生這一現象的原因
3)你的看法
Certificate Craze On Campus
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現象，提綱第2點要求分析產生這種現象的原因，提綱第3點要求談談我對該現象的看法，由此可判斷本文應為現象解釋型作文。
根據所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述近幾年大學校園內的考證熱分析越來越多的大學生熱衷考取各種證書的主要原因;闡述我對大學生考證熱的看法。
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?
There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
【亮點點評】
祈使句使用恰當。randomly意為隨意地，隨機地。
限定詞使用恰當，使文章表達更嚴謹，增強了說服力。
that引導同位語從句，修飾the idea。
設問句引出原因，容易引起注意。
強調句型，此處是強調主語。
which引導非限制性定語從句，充當介詞賓語。
用于引出我的觀點。
當談到或提及時。
since引導原因狀語從句，表示既定的原因，常譯為既然。
只是，僅僅。而不是。
佳句臨摩
1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.
臨摩：離婚率上升盡管令人難過，但卻是不爭的事實。
___________________________________________________________________________.
2.佳句：Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability.
臨摩： 在過去的三十年，發展中國家在許多方面都取得了很大的進步，其中包括健康水平的提高。
___________________________________________________________________________.
3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates
臨摩：我認為，對于我們來說，更重要的是盡可能提高自己的能力而不是獲得更多的證書。
___________________________________________________________________________.
【KEY】
1. It is a sad but true fact that divorce rate is on the rise.
2. In the past three decades, developing countries have made great progress in many aspects, among which are the improvements in health domain.
3. From my point of view, it is more important for us to enhance our practical abilities but not to get more certificates.
