哪里可以改英語論文詞句

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哪里可以改英語論文詞句

【第1句】：誰可以幫我修改下英語論文

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【第2句】：論文一審,評委說英語寫的不夠流利,請問哪里可以找到老外來修改下

呵呵，我原來也遇到過同樣的問題。

本來想在學(xué)校里找外教，可惜我的專業(yè)比較偏（多相流體力學(xué)），里面有很多專業(yè)術(shù)語和公式，學(xué)校里的外教也不太懂。后來，我上網(wǎng)找的募格編輯，咨詢了一下客服，說是能給開發(fā)票，也可以修改我這個學(xué)科的論文，而且是英語母語編輯，正好老師催著改文章答應(yīng)給報銷，就選擇了深度潤色服務(wù)。

給我修改文章的是個美國人，是個跟我近似專業(yè)的（理論流體力學(xué)），比較了解我的專業(yè)和文章，幫我潤色了很多地方，經(jīng)過2個回合的修改，我的論文潤色的非常好。再次發(fā)給Journal of Fluid Mechanics后，直接就錄了。

總之，募格編輯的服務(wù)總體還不錯吧，幫我解決了很大的難題。

【第3句】：求批改兩句英語論文中的話,急求

The Island location influences the U.K. in every respect along the river of history. The U.K., , still presents lots of features not existing in other European countries today.修改：The Island location affacts the U.K. in every aspect in the long process of history.

As an island country, the UK presents（是想說展現(xiàn)啊還是保留啊？） lots of features which can not be found in other European countries today.

【第4句】：幫我修改英語論文

文章當中有一些語法錯誤之類的，比如

Have you ever seen people lift a three floor building or flying in the sky without any strings attach to him

Have you ever seen people lifting a three floor building or flying in the sky without any strings attaching to him

But there is a world where any imagination become true and it's the place where superman was born.

個人認為應(yīng)該是

there is a world where all the ideas can be realised and it is where Superman was born

還有文章當中的連接詞比較少，就是那些所以（so,therefore,thus,as a result,results in,hence,leads to之類的）、但是（but,however,on the other hand,as contrast to）、總體來說（in conclusion,to conclude,finally,ultimately）之類的

連接詞是連接這種寫個人觀點的文章的重點

字數(shù)的話差不多了，但是文章結(jié)構(gòu)不太好，可以稍微調(diào)整一下，格式如下

【第1句】：Introduction（簡介）

Interesting first sentence 有趣的開頭句

General Statement 大致的陳述

Thesis Statement 觀點

【第2句】：The body（文章主體）

Main Point(Topic Sentence) 論點+再次重申觀點

Supporting Evidence 支持的論據(jù)（可以是解釋也可以是例子）

有幾個寫幾個

再來1-2段一樣的，注意都是寫正面的，也就是說寫喜歡動漫的理由

Counter-argument（對方觀點）

Supporting Evidence 寫為什么不同意對方觀點

【第3句】：The conclusion

Restatement of Thesis 再次重申觀點

Or 或者

Summary of Main Points 對論點做一個總結(jié)

Final Comment 最后的意見

這個是通用的格式的說，而且在結(jié)尾之前還要加上對于反方主要觀點的反駁

【第5句】：幫我修改一下英語論文,主要是一些語法的錯誤,詞用得不準確,語句

Should student(s) be allowed to bring laptops to school(?)I DON'T think student(S) should bring laptop(S) to school.Computers are WILDLY used by people NOWADAYS,WHICH HAS BEEN changing our life.People use COMPUTERS to study,watch videos and play games.ComuputerS can also help students ON SO MANY THINGS.Students can search information and OBTAIN data for their study; THEY CAN ALSO INTERRACT WITH EACH OTHER OVER THE INTERNET,WHICH HELP BUILD FRIENDSHIPS AND SOCIAL CONNECTIONS.HOWEVER,WHY should NOT studentS be allowed to bring laptopS to school?PLEASE READ THE FOLLOWING.I DON'T think studentS should bring laptopS to school.FIRSTLY,IT WOULD DIVERT THEIR ATTENTIONS ON STUDY.SECONDLY，這里不知道你想表什么？THIRDLY,StudentS might compare the PRICE of their computerS.I did some research on internet about how university studentS use their laptop computerS ,and it shows THAT,MOST of the studentS spend 2 hours or more to watch movies,listen to music,play games and read novels ON their computers.Although their original intension is TO study; some of them indulge themselves in playing on-line games.Over 90% students go to bed AFTER 12 AM.The college studentS do so TOO.What's more,MOST OF MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENTS LACK OF SELF-CONTROL.改到這里，同學(xué)，你的essay有很多語法錯誤，很多不通順，如果只是修改了語法，整篇文章的結(jié)構(gòu)還是很有問題.如果你追求的是一篇A+的essay，我建議你把你要表達的點列出來，我在幫你重寫.。